Hey, wrote this story over the last few weeks, it’s a sort of reject-then-torment scenario. Based loosely on a real night and real characters, good dose of comedy included as well.
Linking to the thread instead of posting it here as Reddit’s formatting – particularly the lack of blank-line paragraph breaking – in my view makes reading a long story a real eystrain.
http://www.orgasmdenial.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13636
Enjoy, and if you have any comments or suggestions, comment either here or in the thread at OD, as I’ll use such suggestions in future stories – have three or four in the pipeline at the moment!