I post this just for people to read it. It is the first story I have written in my life (the first and it has to be a pornographic one, wow). It is written without any experience, so some parts can be laughable or nonsensical. In addition to letting me know if you liked it, I would like you to comment on my way of writing, I ask for advice to improve writing skills; Give me your observations, if you can. That’s all.
– “Well, let’s go!” – Linda tells me, her arms are folded and her face is indifferent with shades of impatience.
Linda is a pretty nice twenty year old girl. She’s my coworker; a party girl, outgoing and who has no problem saying whatever comes to her mind even if it sounds rough. From time to time she uses rude and sometimes double meaning language that tends to annoy me, but it’s nothing that I can’t bear. She is completely different from me: quiet, almost asocial, with a more respectful and literal language that that prefers to go unnoticed.