Playing with Abi [Ff, lactation]

*I’m fairly new to writing stories so would appreciate any feedback! This is my second story.*

“Bye, dad! And bye little buddy!”
Abi gave her dad a hug and kissed the head of her one and a half year old step brother, Stevie, held in her dad’s arms. The two guys were leaving to visit with her grandparents for the weekend across state. Abi had a shift to work the next morning so was staying behind with Lynn, her step-mother. Stevie hadn’t been sleeping much lately and just wanted to nurse constantly, tiring Lynn out and leading her to ask for a well-deserved weekend off.

“Bye hun. Take care of your step-mom ok? She needs to relax this weekend.”

“I know dad. Don’t worry about it. We’re just going to hang out and watch movies tonight and tomorrow she can sleep in.”

“Ok, that sounds good. Bye sweetie.” Her dad gave her a peck on the forehead, picked up the suitcase of baby supplies in his free hand, and walked out their front door.

That One Time [MF/MM, strippers, mast, nogaysex]

This is the first erotic story I've ever written. Any comments, positive or negative, would be appreciated.


The six of us pulled up to the club around 10 on Saturday night in our minivan taxi, paid the driver $30 and hopped out. Outside of the club were a couple of guys smoking cigarettes and laughing. You could hear the low thump of music through the entrance and smell years of smoke build-up. This wasn't any of our first times to a strip club but it was our first time being to the Moonshine, a club known for "full nude full friction" $20 lap dances. Sure, it was Ryan's bachelor party, but we were all there for our own entertainment just as much. We are all in our mid twenties, average build, just out of college type guys working your typical entry level office and IT jobs. We all had girlfriends (or fiances!) and were just getting used to getting real paycheques every month. We all pretty much decided that this weekend we'd be putting that disposable income to use with fine scotch and lap dances.

That One Time [MF/MM, strippers, mast, nogaysex]

This is the first erotic story I've ever written. Any comments, positive or negative, would be appreciated.


The six of us pulled up to the club around 10 on Saturday night in our minivan taxi, paid the driver $30 and hopped out. Outside of the club were a couple of guys smoking cigarettes and laughing. You could hear the low thump of music through the entrance and smell years of smoke build-up. This wasn't any of our first times to a strip club but it was our first time being to the Moonshine, a club known for "full nude full friction" $20 lap dances. Sure, it was Ryan's bachelor party, but we were all there for our own entertainment just as much. We are all in our mid twenties, average build, just out of college type guys working your typical entry level office and IT jobs. We all had girlfriends (or fiances!) and were just getting used to getting real paycheques every month. We all pretty much decided that this weekend we'd be putting that disposable income to use with fine scotch and lap dances.