I just recently started writing. This is a brief snippet of a much bigger story in my mind. I wanted to see if it was worth continuing. What will immediately follow is the backstory of what got them here. My expertise is in the back story, and I tend to struggle with the action. Anyway… enjoy?
“The Man”
Introduction:
“Oh God! I have never felt THAT before!”
The words rang around the room, coming to rest and nestle into Adam’s ears. In front of him, a display he had longed to see: Alli, his loving wife of 10 years, sprawled on her back on their martial bed. Her legs, stretched high above her shoulders. Her feet, practically bending against the headboard. Her eyes, normally large and brilliant, rolling to the back of her head. Her mouth, agape with her tongue pressed hard against the roof of her mouth in a weak attempt to stifle the screams that were begging to be released.