I wrote this for a user in Dirty Pen Pals who wanted a poem in order to “evaluate” potential candidates. The user wanted something “cute, sexy, and erotic,” and I tried to hit all three bases (yes, pun intended). Would you mind having a look and telling me what you think?
Narrator is male, writing for a female audience. I used the code formatting so the spacing would work as intended.
I’d appreciate any thoughts or comments. Thanks.
From there we came,
Whence we came,
Thus we came, together,
I came to get you,
For now and to come,
Never was forever better.
Here is a preposition:
To come, on you, in you, with you,
Twisting words in the hope
We’ll read and write about how
We’ll wreathe and writhe about.
A passionate oath binds us both
And you will be bound,
Arms, wrists, feet, tied: rope
Wrapped around the bedposts,
Wrapped around you,
Wrapped around me.
You are mine and I am you — I forgot where you end and I begin.