My first time publishing a story. Feedback is welcome

The rendezvous.
Tilly sat nervously as she applied her make up. Lips red as a rose, just the right amount of blush to her already flushed cheeks. Her eyes, lined to perfection with kohl, sparkled with anticipation of the meeting. Tonight was her first date with Daddy, an old friend from years back she’d been chatting to online. Jay was older by a few years but ex forces and had made her laugh at his suggestive comments on her posts. Theyd struck up a quick and exciting relationship, he was very complimentary and funny. But had a wonderful sexy way about him. Theyd exchanged likes and found much in common, tonight was to be a chance to prove to him how sexy she could be.
Tilly had chosen her outfit very carefully, she knew it would drive him wild with lust when he saw her. She squirmed, her pussy pulsing and already wet, her nipples hard and sensitive under the lace material of her body stocking.
“Good job I’m sat on a towel!” She thought to herself as the perfect image looked back at her from the mirror. Standing, she admired her newly grown bush, she’d grown it out for Daddy as he liked hairy pussy. It was perfectly framed in the crotchless area of the lace bodysuit that arrived earlier in the day.
‘Mmmm” Tilly purred as her fingers caressed her wet slit though the soft hair. She jolted as she brushed over her aroused clit. “Maybe just once more” she said as she reached for the hairbrush, carefully inserting the handle into her slick love hole. Wet with juice and dripping it slid in and out with ease. Her other hand reaching up to pinch and tease her hard nipples, her breath coming quicker as she shuddered to a very speedy climax. ” Wow…” she breathed, ” that was quick” She giggled as the hairbrush slipped out dragging a trail of juice all the way to the dressing table.
Composing herself she slipped a blouse on feeling the crisp material make her already sensitive nipples harden even more. Smiling at this she slid the skirt up over her hourglass hips and fastened the zip. Spinning round she admired the way it flared out, knowing she could flash him any time as they sat in the bar.
Tilly grinned. “This is going to be so much FUN!” she said as she stepped into her black patent leather stilettos. Grabbing her Mac she headed downstairs to collect her car keys and set off towards their rendezvous…