Need feedback on my partial erotica story I’m working on

Hey all! I’m currently working on a book about a young woman who plans to sleep with 10 different guys to achieve a self-proclaimed goal. It’s part erotica, mainly because of the excessive detail I poured into the sex scenes, but I mostly categorize it as New Adult.

I would love some more feedback on the story, especially on how you personally think it sounds thus far (there are 15 chapters written so far, with a lot of extra stuff in between). I’ll post a link below to review the story at your leisure. Thanks in advance for giving it a shot :)

[https://www.wattpad.com/story/174248809-top-ten](https://www.wattpad.com/story/174248809-top-ten)