Author: 99SkylineRhyme

The Weekend: Saturday Breakfast [MF}

This is the part three of an erotic story I wrote earlier this year. The first part is [here](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/7ngqru/nsfw_the_weekend_friday_night_mf/) and the second part is [here](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/7ovt1a/the_weekend_saturday_morning_mf/). I enjoyed the process and want to get better at writing it. I was told this would be a good place to post it to get some feedback. There is still a part that I have yet to write that I’m stuck on. Hopefully the feedback will help. Thanks

————————————————————————–

Clark began stirring and as he became aware of his surroundings he also became aware of who was in the bed beside him. He slowly regained his focus as he opened his eyes and looked at Savannah still asleep next to him. He moved as slow as possible to try to not wake her and managed to escape without waking her, at least as far as he could tell.

Clark went to his room and put on a pair of shorts and a t-shirt, not bothering with boxers until he had a chance to shower. He walked towards the kitchen and was going to make himself some breakfast but noticed the kitchen was still a mess from last night. He was not accustomed to cooking in a messy kitchen so he started tidying up. The fact that Luke had a dishwasher made things significantly easier but there was a few things Clark washed by hand to ensure that when he cooked he wasn’t just adding to the mess. Read more »

The Weekend: Saturday Morning [MF]

This is the part two of an erotic story I wrote earlier this year. The first part is [here](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/7ngqru/nsfw_the_weekend_friday_night_mf/). I enjoyed the process and want to get better at writing it. I was told this would be a good place to post it to get some feedback. There’s one more written part and one unwritten part that I’m stuck on. Hopefully the feedback will help. Thanks

EDITED: Formatting issues

——————————————————————————————————————————

Clark woke up to his phone buzzing. It was 7:36am and his phone showed a new text from Luke.

“Hey bud, I got called into work this morning, I’ll probably be gone for most of the day but I’ll give you a heads up when I’m on my way home. Help yourself to anything in the house and don’t let Savannah talk you into doing chores for her” Clark put his phone down after reading the text and rolled over and tried to go back to sleep. He normally puts his phone into airplane mode so he can get quality sleep but must have forgotten with the events of the previous night. He reminisced about Savannah’s tight pussy and immediately his cock began to stir. He thought of how it tasted and could almost taste her in his mouth again; his cock was fully erect at the thought. Clark knew at this point he was awake and his mind began to wonder. He stretched his muscles to fully wake up when his mind developed an idea. He moved out of bed, went to his clean up kit, grabbed another condom and walked out of the room. Read more »

NSFW The Weekend: Friday Night [MF]

This was the first erotic story I ever wrote and I enjoyed the process and want to get better at writing it. I was told this would be a good place to post it to get some feedback. There’s two more written parts and one unwritten part that I’m stuck on. Hopefully the feedback will help. Thanks

————————————————————————–

Clark checked the clock before he put on the emergency brake and turned off the car. It was closer to 8pm than he wanted it to be but traffic on his way into the city had been worse than he had planned. He grabbed his belongings from the trunk and began to walk towards his friends place where he would be spending the weekend. Clark and Luke had known each other since they were young but Clark was more interested in Luke’s roommate, Savannah. They had met briefly the last time Luke had Clark over for drinks and she had immediately peaked Clark’s interests. She had short brown hair with blonde highlights and the left side cut short that reminded Clark of a sprite. She had piercing hazel eyes and a smile that drove Clark crazy. She stood at 5’9”, 135lbs with cute 28” hips, 24” waist and amazing 34G breasts that Clark could stare at for hours. She wore tight jeans that hugged her hips and a sweater that was comfortable for Savannah but still gave Clark enough to look at when he saw her. Read more »