This is my first attempt posting erotic writing, let me know what you think. Still working on the rest of the story.
We’ve been neighbors for 10 years, since we were both nine years old. Growing up, we were inseparable, best friends forever. At least that’s what I thought. Then puberty hit. Emily got breasts that made all the other girls envious, and made all the guys take notice. Suddenly everyone wanted to be Emily’s friend, but Skinny, pale, freckled Amanda was ignored. It also didn’t help that once I hit puberty, I discovered that my feelings for Emily were more than BFF’s. I was in love with her.
I saw Emily from my second story bedroom window, walking through the field between our houses. We lived out in the country and I could tell from the pale green string bikini top and daisy duke pants that she was going to the pond on the back of her property. I followed her with my eyes, watching her blonde pony tail bob up and down as she walked. Brushing across her beautifully tanned skin. Her firm breasts bouncing slightly was she walked.
I felt myself get wet at the sight of her. I reached down and started to rub between my legs, my fingers rubbing up and down outside my shorts. My other hand reached up my shirt to tease one of my nipples.
Suddenly, Emily stopped and turned, staring straight at me, I pulled my hands away and put them behind my back. I turned red as I hoped she hadn’t seen what I was doing. Emily started walking to my house. Oh my god, did she see? Was my secret I had kept for all these years out? Would she tell?
I went down stairs and met her at the door, I was still red-faced with embarrassment but the combination of being a pale skinned redhead and long summer days left my face perpetually burned. I hoped she wouldn’t notice.
Emily bounded up my porch steps and called out to me. “Hey Amanda, why don’t you come to the pond with me?”
I couldn’t believe it, she hadn’t seen. I told her to give me a minute to change and dashed back upstairs. I put on my black string bikini, my hands shaking as I tried to tie the sides of the bottom part. I looked down at my small breasts, mosquito bites they had been called on more than one occasion, I know all the girls had wanted breasts like Emily’s but I would have settled for a small C. I sighed as I put my bikini top on and pulled a long T-shirt over me. I grabbed my all important sunscreen and sprinted back downstairs. I met Emily on the porch and we set out to the pond.
We made it to the pond and Emily spread out a blanket. She stepped onto the blanked and out of her shoes. She had her back to me as she unbuttoned her cut of jean shorts and slid them down her tanned legs, she bent over to taken them off and I couldn’t help but stare at her perfect butt. Under the shorts she had on a pale green g-string. I felt myself get damp again as she finished removing her shorts. She stood up and pulled out a bottle of sun tan oil She turned to me questioningly. “No thanks I said, I brought sunscreen. I pulled off my t-shirt and quickly began to apply sunscreen before I started to burn. Emily walked up and grabbed the bottle off the blanket, “I’ve got your back” she said as she squirted some into her hands and started to rub it onto me. Goosebumps popped over my arms as she touched me, her soft hands rubbing the back of my neck and shoulders.
Her hands started rubbing over my back. “You know, I saw what you were doing in the window.”
I froze, every muscle going tense as she spoke “What do you mean?”
“I saw you touching yourself as you watched me walk by”
I couldn’t respond. I was mortified. I was about to run back home, back to my bedroom and hide forever.
“Did it feel good?”
“What?”
“Did it feel good, touching yourself…I bet it did. I bet it would feel better if I touched you.”
Emily reached up and slowly untied my bikini top. It fell to the ground and I instinctively covered my breasts with my hands. She slowly walked around me, facing me as she reached behind her back and untied hers as well, she pulled her top up over her head as she stood in front of me. I stared at her. Her gorgeous breasts were right in front of me.
Emily reached out and took my left hand in her right and placed it on her breast. Then her right hand went to my breast, her fingers teased across my now hard nipple. I had no idea what was going on here, so I just went with it, I started to caress her breast as she stepped forward and kissed me. My breath caught for a second, then I was kissing her back. My other hand wrapped around her and pulled her gorgeous body into mine. She wrapped both hands around me and slid them down over my back, down to my bikini bottoms. Then she tracked her fingers along the edges, making me shiver with pleasure as her tongue slipped into my mouth.
Her tongue was soft and warm, slipping between my lips and dancing over my tongue as a little moan escaped me. I had dreamed of this moment. Kissing her, touching her, feeling her hands on me. Emily pulled away from me and gently pushed me down onto the blanket, telling me to lay down. I was so shocked by what was happening, I didn’t argue.
Emily laid down next to me and began kissing my neck, she ran her fingers up and down the inside of my thigh, lightly tickling me. I let out a moan of pleasure as her lips kissed down to my collar bone as she teased her fingers between my legs. Her mouth kissed down to my breasts, her tongue swirled around my hard nipple as she reached her hand over to the side of my bikini bottom.
I moaned as my body shuddered with pleasure, she began to suck on my nipple as she slowly untied my bikini bottom. She sucked harder as she pulled off the bottom half of my bikini. Emily slipped a finger inside my wet pussy as she as she continued to suck on my nipple. I’d never been touched by anyone besides myself before. I came almost immediately. My body shuddered as Emily slipped her finger out of my wet pussy and sat up, she slowly sucked the finger she had inside me and winked at me.
Emily stood up and untied her g-string, letting it fall to the blanket. She stood there, looking like the goddess of Aphrodite, her shaved pussy looked so inviting, I wanted to taste her so bad. I got up to my knees and wrapped my arms around her thighs and pulled her to me, I ran my tongue up her perfect pussy, tasting her sweetness as my tongue slipped inside. She grabbed my head and pushed my face against her pussy.
Please let me know if you would like me to finish this story.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/cyzqz9/summer_of_love_pt_1_ff
Definitely finish the story
Seriously? Damn right we want you to finish it! It’s very good writing and a damn sexy story!
Really? You think you have to ask us if we want you to continue? Awesome story! More!