Long fictional story about a woman I previously had a crush on. Written in my teenage years so don’t hate ??

The evening was picturesque, the sky beautiful and the water warm and relaxing as they both lay under the waterfall; shaking, post orgasm and deeply satisfied.

It could have almost been a movie.

The water flowed around them relaxing their sore, sensitive muscles. He pulled her supple, perfectly formed body into his arms, enjoying the touch of her soft breasts against her body and the warmth of her centre against his still semi hard cock.

He smiled thinking of taking her again, as she kissed him gently, feeling her soft lips on his. He thought “there’s plenty of time for that later” and kissed her back, biting her lip gently, letting her know his thoughts.

As he bit her lip, she smiled mischievously thinking how this scene of calm and tranquillity was shattered recently, his warm cum inside her enhancing the memories of the intense afternoon they had just shared. They both reminisced on the afternoons events…

Earlier that afternoon…

He stood, mesmerised as he watched her under the waterfall, the flow cascading over her curves, her grace superior to nature’s rarest of sights.

He had to have her, he thought as he became increasingly turned on, watching her pose (for him he would later learn), her stunning eyes reflecting the light of the sun into the water. A smile crossed his face as for a second he thought he saw a rainbow in the water, a minor miracle, he thought.

The water was pure and the sun so intense that she could see her reflection in the water “I look smoking,” she thought, thanking her crazy metabolism and wild sex drive for the perfect form in the water in front of her. Her stomach perfectly flat, an ass most women would die for and boobs that were perfect, but for a matching marks, just above her nipples.

She touched them, remembering how she earned them, in the early hours of the morning, slowly waking the animal inside her. She remembered riding him in front of the window of their holiday apartment, feeling incredibly turned on knowing she could be seen by anyone.

She unknowingly touched herself the same way he did as she rode him to many earth shattering orgasms.

“Thinking of this morning?” the question broke her rather enjoyable chain of though, but before she could complain, she felt a strong set of arms around her waist and she was embraced in a passionate yet gentle kiss that took her breath away.

The kiss continued but grew in passion, as he felt her hands wrap themselves around his neck and he laid both hands on her flawless ass, pulling her closer. She smiled knowing how much he liked her ass and felt his hardness pressed against her. A quiet moan escaped her as he dug his nails into the soft flesh, but nothing could have prepared her for what was to come next.

He wanted her to feel her effects on him; how intense his attraction was to her.

How much he wanted her.

Before she realised what was happening, she had lost the top of her bikini and was pushed against the base of the waterfall. She went to cover up but her hands were pinned above her head. She felt her excitement growing and this only increased when he whispered;

“move them, I stop. Do you understand?” she nodded, knowing he was fully in control and she trusted him absolutely, even though they had met just the two nights before.

His kisses were incredibly light at first and she thought of moving her hands to pull him closer. She felt herself facing the waterfall and a sharp slap on her ass.

“Don’t even think about it,” his voice came in her ear again. She wanted to fight so bad but…

He started again, this time just as gentle but slower, her head in his hand, his fingers resting on her facing. As his kisses grew stronger, so did his grip on her. By time he had bit her lip, not so gently, his hand had found her hips and his nails left more marks on her body, much to his delight.

His kisses were slow but urgent and made their way down her neck, leaving gentle marks on her neck as he made her way down to her shoulders and towards her chest, his kisses now rougher and more passionate. He came up to kiss her and the ferocity of his kiss surprised her as their tongues combined and the sexual energy shot through both of their bodies.

His hand roamed its way up her leg, the nail digging into the soft skin of her upper thigh and he kissed the soft flesh of her left breast, while he teased the soft skin of her vulva, teasing her even further. The closer he got to her nipple, the closer to her clit his fingers roamed.

She hated him at the moment.

She felt the bottom half of her bikini slide off and he moved to the other breast to continue he torture.

But she was exquisite and his patience ran out and his lips closed around her nipple, his efforts yielding a louder moan from her, his finger found her clit and her moans increased in volume. He applied more pressure to her nipple and rubbed her clit faster, smiling as her hips moved to respond to his touch.

His attention moved to the other nipple with the same urgency, but this time, he bit down gently at first, but then harder; the pain and pleasure coursed through her body like electricity. He slid a finger into her wetness, deep inside first to add to her pleasure and then finding her favourite spot, before slowly bringing her towards an orgasm.

No sooner than he wanted though, he had to taste her first.

He kissed her on the lips again, the passion in their situation now evident as the kisses were prolonged, were incredibly intense and he swore she heard him moan her name into the kiss.

He didn’t let it affect his actions, as his next kisses rained down of the soft skin of her stomach (he marvelled how her body could be so perfect so soon after having a child) and left a stream of kisses down her sides, before slowly but surely leaving a string of bites across her waist and down her inner thighs; all while making sure she didn’t cum, he didn’t want to ruin it for her after all.

She knew what was coming but nothing could have prepared her for the combination of his skill and intensity. He attacked her clit, doing everything he knew to bring her to an orgasm and within a few minutes, he heard her breath deeply and her tense, signs of her impending orgasm.

He added another finger inside her and started writing the words “I want you.,” with his tongue on her clit, this combined attention sent her over the edge and she felt her whole body shake and she ran her fingers through his hair, holding him in place. He spanked her for moving, harder this time but this only added to the sensations for her.

He smiled knowing that her orgasm started on the “you.” and was pleased with his work, as he continued to tease her through the orgasms that followed, her moans a major turn on for him.

“Damn, where did that come from?” she thought, as the orgasms that followed gradually weakened and her body returned to some sort of normality, her legs slightly weaker than before.

She held onto him, partly for support, but mainly because she wanted him now more than ever. She kissed him gently and deeply while she regained her energy and enjoyed the experience of being part of the most powerful firework display on earth.

It was his turn now, she decided. She removed his shorts as quickly as he’d removed her clothing and pushed him against the base of the waterfall. He smiled in anticipation as she pressed her lips against his, her only goal to turn him on so much that he takes her on the spot.

She kissed him with the hunger and lust of a woman who knew what she wanted and exactly how to get it. Her hands travelled over his abs touching and scratching each one individually, eliciting a moan from him.

Knowing that she was getting exactly what she wanted, her kisses now settled on his neck, wet and slow, totally aware that he would be rock hard by time she came to suck his rapidly expanding cock. Her nails dug into his inner thigh and his moans continued to her delight as her kisses now followed where her hands had previous gone. She kissed and sucked lightly on each ab muscle and then down to his now rock hard cock and her fingers traced the remaining inches to the base of his cock.

She allowed no respite, or teasing for him as she dropped her lips down his cock, pleasantly surprised to find that it hit the back of her throat sooner than she expected. Her nails scratched against the soft skin of his balls, as he let out a powerful deep moan, thanking himself for the self-control he had somehow discovered.

She had every intention of destroying that restraint as both her little hands and lips surrounded his cock, sucking like she wanted to taste his seed. And sure enough within a minute or two she got what she wanted, but a little bit more than what she bargained for…

Knowing exactly what she was doing and what she wanted, he grabbed her by the throat, before kissing her deeply and her slapped both her ass cheeks, startling her, before picking her up and sliding her tightness down his incredibly hard cock.

She was so tight around his cock and he could tell she was having some trouble adapting to him. He gave her a minute to adapt while kissing her as a lover now, with a primal hint, with the promise of what was about to happen.

“Ready?” He asked.

She just smiled and dropped herself down his cock, pleased that he surprised her and didn’t just take her from behind. They both moaned into the kiss and this only spurred them both on, as all the energy and sexual tension of the last few hours were released in ten brutal minutes.

He slammed her down on his cock so hard that he thought he’d hurt her but she took it and by her reaction, she clearly loved it. Kisses turned to bites and bites turned to hickies as she orgasmed on him over and over again.

He laid her down on a nearby flat surface, grabbed her hips to raise them up slightly and continued knowing that he was close. He got faster and faster, feeling his orgasm approaching; sensing this she squeezed herself around him try to force his cum into her and within seconds she was filled with cum, 4 powerful squirts of cum. This triggered her orgasm that shook her from head to toe multiple times, as she grabbed him and dug her nails into his back.

Her orgasm continued for another 20 seconds or so as he held her, close, her hips still moving as she was coming down from the multiple orgasms that had just coursed through her body.

They lay there side by side both breathing heavily, enjoying what they’d both felt. “Damn”, they both said in unison and both pissed themselves laughing, walking into the warm water.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/cnvyja/long_fictional_story_about_a_woman_i_previously