This story is mostly true, but I changed a few biographical details and tried to make it fun to read. This happened a long time ago, so it’s about as true to life as memory will allow. It’s my first time writing a story like this, so I hope you like it; supportive critiques on writing style would be great, but if you have anything super negative or hostile, I’d ask you keep that to yourself. Writing this was pretty personal for me, but I’m thinking of trying to write more and personal stories seem like a good place to start.
My first serious crush was Amy, a girl in high school with long light brown hair, fair skin, and a smile that cut me right down to my core. She was the friend of several other friends of mine, and we would hang out a lunch and on breaks, as we didn’t share any classes. We became friends, and then bit by bit I started trying to spend more and more time with her. She was so fun, happy, and brought a special kind of light and joy into my life that I’ve never really found anywhere else. We would talk and hang out for hours, always as friends. After a while, she hinted that she had a crush on me, and we began slowly and awkwardly to express ourselves physically.
One day sitting outside by the picnic benches we were sitting chatting with a group of friends, the kind of group where everyone is talking to everyone at once and no one is really paying attention. She was sitting on my lap wearing a big sweater, and I sat there with my arms around her waist. That day I wanted to see what I could get away with, and under the cover of her sweater I slid my hand up the inside of her shirt. She was still chatting with someone, but made no move to stop me. I reached up to feel her breasts, and then slid my hand under her bra to feel her bare skin. Her nipples hardened as I bushed my hand against them, and she didn’t stop me. I didn’t do this for long, as it was hard to push my luck as it was in front of that many people.
The next day, we were hanging out together with another friend of ours during a free period we all had. We were sitting in the empty gym, and bit by bit she and I started touching more and more, bit by bit. After a while, she found some excuse for the two of us to leave, and we went to another empty room that was attached to the gym. She took me over to a corner desk, and I sat on the edge, where we made out for the first time. She felt so good, and her mouth made me feel like I was on fire. We were young (both a few months past turning 18), so what we lacked in grace in technique we more than made up for in ferocity and enthusiasm. After we made out for a while, she got a funny look on her face, as if she was considering something.
I asked her what she was thinking.
“Oh, never mind. It’s nothing.”
“No, tell me”
“No, it’s crazy”
I put my hand on her cheek and kissed her again. It was long, sweet, and I could feel her soft tongue eagerly probing.
In a rare moment of self confidence for a shy kid, I said “I think I know what you want…”
As she looked down, I unzipped the fly on my pants. She bit her bottom lip and watched as I pulled out my throbbing penis.
“Is this what you want?”
She nodded, and wrapped her hand around my shaft. She leaned forward and took the head of my penis in her mouth. The feeling of her lips and her tongue was like nothing I had ever experienced before. She was so hot and so soft. I ran my fingers through her hair as her head bobbed up and down. Her hand squeezed me gently, and lips ran over the crown of my cock. She pulled me further into her mouth, and started running her tongue around the head while squeezing me harder. She looked up at me and let my cock slip out of her lips.
“Is it good?”
“Yeah…” was all I could manage to say.
She went back to sucking me, then running her lips over the side of my shaft while using her hand to massage the head. She ran her tongue along the underside of my cock, from the bottom all the way up to the top, and then took me in her mouth again. While she was doing this, I reached my hand down and cupped her breast. She was wearing a shirt that meant I couldn’t reach inside, but I could still feel how hard her nipple was. She moaned softly when I gave her a little squeeze, and then a little more when I gave her nipple a light pinch.
It all felt amazing, but I knew what we were doing was dangerous. Straight across from me, I could see through the little window in the side door that led from the hallway into this little side room of the gym. At any moment, someone could look in that window, or worse, walk in the door.
I mustered every ounce of will I had to say “Hold on a sec”
My cock slipped out of her lips, and she looked around with her hand still on me, realizing what I had just thought of. I slipped off the desk and sat down on the ground. She knelt down in front of me, quickly looking around. Now that we were given a bit of protection from view by the tables and chairs, I opened up the top button of my pants and pulled my penis and testicles out of the top of my underwear. Amy wasted no time.
She grabbed my shaft again, and licked along the shaft once before taking my cock in her mouth once more. With her other hand, she gently stroked my balls. As she sucked my cock, I brushed her long hair out of the way so I could watch her lips sliding up and down. She looked at me without saying anything while she kept sucking. She started to pick up the pace, keeping me in her mouth while pumping her hand up and down my shaft. Everything felt so hot, and I knew I wouldn’t be able to last much longer.
“I’m gonna come” I gasped.
She took my cock out of her mouth just long enough to say, “It’s okay”.
She kept sucking me, faster now. I could feel my orgasm building up. As she sucked, she pumped her hand harder and harder, until I couldn’t hold back a moment longer. I felt my orgasm explode out of me and into her mouth. My back arched and I shuddered while she kept sucking me. It felt like my whole body was on fire. She slowed down, but kept the head of my penis in her mouth while the last spurts came out, pumping me more with her hand to get out every last drop. When I was done, she stood up and ran over to the garbage can, and I watched her spit my load out. She came right back, and knelt down with me. She leaned over me, grabbed my cock again, and gave me another deep kiss.
Her lips felt softer than before, but so good. I ran both of my hands over her breasts while she kissed me. She was straddling me, fully clothed, but my cock was still out. I ran my hand under her shirt and over her soft belly. Her skin was warm and perfect. I raised my hand a little further up and felt her soft breast over her bra…
“Not right now…”
She looked around, and must have seen someone walk by the window. She started to get a little nervous. I wanted to keep going, but sense was starting to return to us. We realized that we were in a public place, and that our other friend was still waiting for us over by the corner tables. I pulled my pants back up, and we got up from the ground. I wrapped my arms around her, and we kissed again, deeply and passionately. Her lips were soft and her hair was slipping out of place. I cupped her breast again over her shirt, but she looked around again with that nervous look, and I knew it wasn’t the time to push it any further. She kissed me again, and I felt her soft tongue probing so eagerly.
“Should we go back?”
“Yeah, I guess so”
Even so, we kept making out a little longer. My hands ran down her back and grabbed her ass, pulling her into me.
“That was amazing…”
“Thanks”
Again, her soft mouth pulled me in.
“Hey, Amy”
“Yeah?”
“Tomorrow, I want you to wear a skirt”
She gave me a mischievous smile and bit her lower lip again.
“Okay.”
END
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/cglc1o/my_first_crush_f_xpost_from_rgonewildstories
truly my fantasy! elaina if youre out there, lets fuck!