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CHAPTER 2
“Come on boys, there are 10 more of you. Don’t keep me waiting,” I said, looking over my shoulder and wiggling my ass. I felt Charlie’s cum start to leak from my pussy and drip onto the futon below. There was going to be a stain there but I was too horny to care. I’d wash it later. Right now, I needed more cocks and much, much more cum.
“Oh come on boys,” I said “fill me up, I need it real bad!”
Another boy came up behind me and started to line his cock up with my pussy when I had an idea.
“Wait, you sit down and let me get on top of you.”
He moved and sat down next to me and I got a look at the nice hard cock that I was about to take into me. I looked beautiful, veiny and thick. This was going to be so good. I straddled him, lined him up and slowly slid down onto him, savoring every single centimeter of that rock-hard dick entering me. The ride down was a lot smoother than I thought thanks to Charlie’s jizz and my delicious juices lubricating my cunt.
“Oh…” I whimpered, “oh… yes…” I bottomed out on him. That’s when I realized that I hadn’t even asked his name yet. I looked him in the eye, gently rotating my hips.
“Well hello, stud. What’s your name?”
“I’m Seth. It’s a pleasure to get to know you, Holli,” Seth said in a measured tone.
“Mmmm, you’re about to get to know me a lot better, Seth. But first…” I looked over my shoulder again addressing the other nine boys still standing there naked, “Boys, I two more holes completely available for your use. Why are they empty?” This seemed to finally wake the boys up to the fact I always want cock and will almost never not want cock. They all rushed over to me and lined up. A tall, black boy lined his BBC up with my ass. I had never had a cock that big in my ass before, but I was excited to try. I rocked back making his cock push open my sphincter. It hurt so good as my ass opened for him. After what seemed like an eternity of the most pleasurable pain the head of his cock finally made it inside me. At this point I turned around and asked him his name.
“I’m Sean,” he said as he pushed his cock further into my ass. I whimpered even more. The two guys in me started getting into a rhythm. I was building to an orgasm fast, but I only had two cocks. I had the potential to work at least three more cocks. I grabbed two cocks with my hands, those boys were named Chad and Brian, and then took a cock that belonged to a Jason into my mouth. I was working five cocks and I had never felt so slutty. I let the cocks inside of me do the work there. They kept pumping in all three holes and I just enjoyed the sensation of being totally filled. Instead, I put more effort into the cocks in my hands and jerking them well. It only took a few minutes before I felt my orgasm approaching.
Taking Jason out of my mouth for a few seconds, I moaned “Oh my god, guys, I’m gonna come, fuck me harder and don’t fucking stop!” Jason, apparently taking my instructions to heart, grabbed my head and shoved his penis back into my mouth and began to thrust like a man possessed. I could taste his precum leaking almost constantly now. The dominance he began showing with my mouth got me even hotter than before. As soon as I remembered to breathe through my nose I gave myself over to the pleasure I was feeling. A giant cock belonging to tall, muscled man was in my ass. A cock so thick I could feel each vein it had was in my pussy. Jason’s cock, average in all respects, was making me hotter with each thrust in my mouth. The two in my hands, both somewhere in the range of average felt beautiful. I was wanted to say something but Jason was relentless.
“Mmmmmm,” was all I could manage. And then, “MMMMMMMMMMMM,” as they kept pumping and thrusting and kept sucking and jerking until I had an orgasm I swear might have actually made me pass out. My pussy pulsed and pulsed and Seth and Sean groaned as they felt the motions of pussy involuntarily made. They had soaked my hands in precum by this point. And hopefully soon they would soaking me in actual cum.
And no sooner had I thought that that they all begun to erupt almost simultaneously. The two in my hands went first. They blew covering my shoulders and some of my tits. Then it was Jason, who came like a dam had burst in his scrotum. Thick, delicious, sticky cum right from the tap. While I worked on swallowing him Seth came in my pussy. I’m sure went up directly into my womb, but he came so much that it was leaking out of me on his cock. Then, finally, Sean came. He blew up in my ass. I swear I could taste it in my mouth from how much and how forcefully he came. It was amazing and I just focused on the feeling of being totally and completely filled with cum and cock.
After a few minutes Sean plopped out of my ass, cum beginning to leak out, Jason, Brian, and Chad moved away from to recover and watch the next batch of boys fuck me. I got off Seth, cum dripping out of me, dripping off of me, and back into position.
“Round two!” I wiggled my cummy ass. There was zero hesitation this time. A pair of huge hands picked up, sat in spot I was not two seconds ago, and then impaled my ass on his cock reverse cowgirl style. No sooner had he bottomed out that a cock shoved itself into my pussy, my hair was grabbed and brought to groin level with a cock that promptly entered my mouth and finally in an attempt to stabilize myself my hand actually found another cock. Well, round two indeed. This time, because they knew what was happening they must have planned something because the cock in ass and pussy, whose owners were named Jimmy and Carlos respectively, had a rhythm right away. With my free hand, I was actually able to stabilize myself and I closed my eyes and really let myself enjoy the bodily pleasures that were coming to me.
Someone’s hand found its way to my clit and they began to rub it vigorously. Just getting up to the point of being too much but deliciously skirting the line.
I came multiple times after that. I lost count after 4. I don’t know how long those last four guys fucked me but it I was fully and completely satisfied when they came. I had another huge orgasm as they filled and covered me in cum. My mouth housed Will, an Asian boy, whose cum was lighter than Jason’s but just as tasty, and Elliot, who was in my hand blew onto my chest. Then Jimmy came in ass and Carlos in my pussy. I got off Jimmy after Carlos pulled out of me, and sat on my futon covered in cum. The boys got dressed and decided to head back to their dorms to finish setting up their rooms. I counted the cocks that I had just fucked, lightly stroking my pussy again. Charlie, Seth, and Carlos all pounded my pussy, Sean and Jimmy gave me the anal fucking of my dreams, Jason and Will fed me their cum, and Chad, Brian, and Elliot covered me in their warm cum. But wait. That was only ten cocks. I had started with eleven. What happened to the last one?
“Guys, is there somebody missing here? I thought I would have eleven cocks, but I only had ten.” I said. After exchanging flattering comments about how insatiable I am, they said concluded there was an Indian guy named Raj, who was actually Jimmy’s roommate who seemed to have slipped out.
I had prepared myself for eleven cocks, I was not going to be cheated out of a cock! I needed that cock dammit!
“Jimmy, would you send him to my room, please.” I said.
“Of course,” he said. He and the other boys left and I waited for Raj to come.
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