Elisa and the Stranger: Part I [MF]

It was around 10:30AM.

Elisa was not a morning person. She knew she had to get to her film class at noon. Reluctantly, she pulled off her heavy blanket. And it was heavy — 10 lbs actually. It was one of those weighted blankets she saw on TV infomercial one night — an impulse buy after few glasses of Sauvignon Blanc.

Her apartment was chilly and her small nipples perked up under the baggy pajamas as she got up from the bed. On her way to the kitchen for a cup of coffee, she realized that she forgot to buy some from the Whole Foods the day before. She had a proclivity for forgetting such things.

‘Oh… great’ — she said to herself, and started to get dressed.

Elisa decided to head over to Cafe Lokal — the coffeeshop across the street, which was usually empty around that time.

It was a “I need a Mocha” kind of Monday. A bit gloomy and grey — typical winter morning in Vancouver. As she enters the dimly lit caffeine dispensary, the front door swings open to an impeccably stylish man walking in behind her; the mellow breeze from outside allows her to get a whiff of a stranger’s musky cologne which he must have sprayed on his leather jacket that morning. As someone who is petite and shy, Elisa is mildly intimidated, yet can’t help but to feel attracted to this tall athletic man with broad shoulders right next to her. She convinces herself that he is out of her league as her eyes keep wandering around. He stares into the distance while talking on his phone, and she gets the feeling like he hasn’t acknowledged her presence.

Elisa senses a tone of asperity, and a look of slight exasperation on the stranger’s face as he carries on the private conversation. It doesn’t take long to realize that he is arguing with a woman who sounds like his girlfriend. Elisa tries to imagine what she would like: someone with large breasts which he likes to cup from behind when they cuddle; or perhaps one of those girls on Instagram who posts pictures of her ass in skin-tight yoga pants?

Elisa can sense his towering presence right behind her as he hangs up the phone without the usual pleasantries. She places her order at the counter and goes into her bag to grab the wallet.

‘Damn it! Not again’ — she tells herself.

Elisa forgot her wallet at home. As she profusely apologizes to the barista for the earnest mishap, the stranger suddenly steps in and offers to pay for the mocha. She looks incredibly adorable attempting to thank him, but he says — ‘I just feel like talking to someone who is a good listener.’ Elisa gladly agrees to the innocuous offer as they grab their drinks at the counter. The stranger asks Elisa about her plans, and she mention the class at noon. He tells her that it happens to be in the direction he is heading. Naturally, he offers her a ride as long as she agrees to chat on the way to school. Despite being a complete stranger, Elisa’s mischievous curiosity suppresses any sense of apprehension, and she agrees to his proposition.

They get into the stranger’s black Challenger; it still had the new car smell to it. As the he vents about his capricious partner and the issues of his personal life, Elisa pretends to listen with the occasional nod and affirmation. Amid the rambling, she suddenly realizes how long it has been since she was intimate with a man. Not just some random guy from school or online, but a real man — like this handsome stranger with a chiseled jawline and thick wavy hair. Elisa missed having a cock in her mouth, and the satisfaction of hearing a man moan with pleasure as she finished the job. It has been too long. The craving had to be satisfied.

As Elisa starts to speculate what this stranger would look like with his clothes off, a sensation of warmth and wetness emanates from between her thighs. Elisa’s heart starts beating faster. Her reserved personality takes a back seat as the sudden rush of dopamine courses through her veins, and the sexual urges dominate her innocent mind.

She is not leaving his car without making him cum.

‘Stop’ — she suddenly exclaims — ‘pull over.’ The stranger is a bit taken back by this sudden command, but politely obliges. As soon as the car is in park, Elisa unbuckles her seat belt and leans in for a long kiss. He instinctively reciprocates; it would be hard for any man to refuse those full luscious lips. She runs her hand down his firm chest and abs, and gently place it in between between his thighs. He recognizes Elisa’s intentions, but tells her that she doesn’t need to express her gratitude this way. She brazenly responds by telling him that the *real* favor would be letting her blow him. The stranger pauses in disbelief. Without uttering a word he just goes back for another kiss as she unzips his pants and wraps her fingers around his already throbbing erection.

Elisa slowly licks the tip and gently puts her wet lips around the stranger’s hard cock. He gingerly places his right hand on the back of her head as it moves up and down in his lap, reclining the seat slightly back to get a full view of that beautiful sight.

Those tantalizing lips produce such soft sucking sounds that would drive anyone wild. Elisa doesn’t waste any time as she engulfs the entire length of his cock while swirling her tongue around the tip. He releases a groan of pleasure which only encourages her to keep going. Her warm little mouth feels incredible on this cold winter day. Elisa lifts up her head, as she continues stroking, to see that look of undeniable satisfaction. She puts that wonderful mouth back to work, faster and faster, as the stranger moans — ‘You’re going to make me cum.’

That’s exactly what Elisa wanted to hear. It’s been six months since her last blowjob, but she still got it. She picks up the pace a little more now.

The fellatio gets interrupted by a phone call. The car displays caller as “Rachel” on the screen which gets immediately declined by the heavily breathing stranger. ‘That must be the girlfriend’ — Elisa thinks. This thought makes her even more aroused and she feels her panties getting wet from excitement.

‘Don’t you dare stop now’ — the stranger mutters. Elisa focuses on sucking the tip of the huge cock as she strokes the rock-hard shaft. As he gets closer to climax, he asks if she wants him to cum in her pretty little mouth.

‘Mhmm’ — she gently murmurs with that thick cock in her mouth. Within seconds, Elisa feels the hard cock pulsating as he releases a thick load on her tongue. She waits for the very last spurt of cum as the stranger pumps his load in her mouth — nearly spilling out from the corners. Elisa swallows her sweet reward and smiles as she looks up into his eyes.

She licks the tip of his cock just once more before sucking it dry, just to make sure she got every single drop of that precious cum…

***TO BE CONTINUED…***

# Author’s Note:

Thank you for choosing to read my story!

I’d really love to know if you enjoyed it. Any and all feedback is appreciated, so please let me know what you thought — good or bad. I am open to any suggestions or constructive criticism. I hope to build a collection of my own stories and perhaps get them published some day. If you did enjoy this one and think you’ll enjoy more of my stuff, please keep an eye out for more of my stories.

Also, I’m always up for a chat and keen to hear what you guys think so feel free to PM me.

With love,

Blake

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