(OC) Short Story for a friend Chapter 2 (Dom/Sub) would love some more feedback….. (Chapter 1 in comments)

The front door closes and they stand for a moment in the street feeling cool breeze of the evening. She realises there is no turning back now, a new door stands open for her, framing her companion in the light inside the car. He beckons to her ‘Get in princess’… She moves without thought or hesitation, closing the door behind her as she slides into the seat. He looks her up and down again, her breasts look full and soft, and her nipples are slightly stiff from the breeze outside, becoming just visible through her cotton vest.

As they start the drive towards the restaurant, her excitement building with anticipation, she begins to revel in the thought of completely submitting to the will of the man driving her into the night. Stopping for a red light, he places his right hand on her leg, slowly sliding his fingers up her inner thigh. Suddenly the slow warmth which had been briefly forgotten, bursts into life as she feels him brush against her swollen clit through the fabric of her pants. She had come without panties as instructed, and she remembered the silicone egg, still inside her, offering total control of her pussy to her lover. A slight gasp escapes her lips and he smiles as the result of his touch – ‘there’s my good little slut now’.

As if he had read her mind, she feels a low vibration deep inside her wet pussy, stimulating her to her core, but almost achingly slowly. She moans and looks over to see the remote has been taken out, and a finger hovering over the control. Her fingers are somehow already finding their way to her clit when she feels a firm hand around her wrist and hears an even firmer ‘No’. As quickly as they had arrived the delicious vibrations inside her stop. ‘Are you ready? We’re here’.

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