Hello! I am currently taking orders for custom kink/fetish literature commissions! Have someone you cannot help but think about fucking? Have a fetish you are dying to have played out? I may just be the gal you’re looking for!
I am happy to indulge your kinks, fetishes, fantasies; Whatever turns you on, I’m thrilled to write. My rates are based on kinks, as well as length.
Every story is 100% custom typed for you to meet your every desire. My rates are on a client to client basis & as based on kinks, as well as length.
Below I will share snippet of a story I wrote for a client, this way you can get a taste of my writing style & see if I am someone whose work you’d get pleasure from reading.
If you are interested I would love to talk with you. Email: [lilithkmae@gmail.com](mailto:lilithkmae@gmail.com)
Yours,
LM
Upon request, I pulled my vibrator out of the box, sitting it on his asshole. I turn it on, giving him a slight preview of his fantasy. Sliding it up and down his taint, gently massaging his prostate.. Bringing him to full erection. My goal after getting him erect is to milk his prostate, giving him the ultimate pleasure. Between his moans and seeing pre-cum drip from his penis as he sits on all fours, I realize that I am completing my job.
I then decide to take the vibrator and catch some of his pre-cum from his erect cock. Once I have a decent amount of it coating the vibrator, I starting sliding my hands up and down it so that it is completely covered. I hand it over to my partner and he excitedly starts sliding it up and down my lips.. teasing me. He pushes the tip of the vibrator into me, letting me feel some of the pulsating rhythms.
He starts to get a firmer grip, sliding in and out of me at this point. Along with the pleasure from the toy, he starts licking on my clit… Pushing my body to the limits. He decides to stop teasing me as my body tenses up from this immense pleasure, and allows me to finally cum.
After we are able to get myself off, it is now his turn to feel more pleasure during this sexual encounter. He gets on his back. He is stroking his cock as he lifts his legs in the air, exposing his asshole. This being his first time with a toy, I slowly push it inside him with the lowest vibrating setting on. He starts to moan so I know that he is feeling the pleasure I was feeling only moments before. Realizing that his cock is filling up with his cum, I start going a little faster so that he is able to release his balls. The faster I go, the more I able to see the satisfaction in his face. We push him together with compromise, draining him.. orgasm complete.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/8zrjaw/im_an_erotica_writer_can_i_be_of_service
As far as advertisments for your craft go, this is doing a piss-poor job. The technical side alone is a mess. Too much repetition (check the number of times you used “I start…/he starts”). There are logic holes – was he teasing her with the toy or his cock? Look at the “He starts to get a firmer grip, sliding…” part. The sentence before that was about the toy.
There are too many punctuation and typing errors and then, to top it all off, the narrative simpky is boring. Erotica is more than description of movement or action. To get a reader invested past the “oh, kinky” stage, to really get them hot and wet, you need to focus on the chemistry between the characters, more reactions from him, more thoughts from her. Describe the thrill she feels, the feeling of power at having such a willing and eager playmate. Show his reaction of having his butt probed with a toy – something few men are comfortable with at first.
So, again, as an advert for a paid service (Or are you writing for free?), this isn’t doing the trick. If anything, it will scare potential customers away. Even if you’re a new writer trying to get exposure, you should always, always put your best foot forward. Don’t type your stories on a phone. Edit before posting. If in doubt, edit again. It’s all about that first impression.
Read your own post to yourself. Do you want to pay for anything this sloppy? Very few people will.