While he sleeps [m/f]

Hi, this is the first time I ever post an erotica online and I'm not very good with English.

It's not finished yet but I hope enjoy it, please feel free to leave a comment and language corrections :)


He sneaked his hand inside my shirt and caressed my boob looking at me in the dark, I look at him surprised as he makes a silent noise with his finger. As I started to get hot and feel my blood rushing he began to fiddle his fingers on my nipple… Making it tickle and get hard, which made me feel good at the same time I wanted to moan and cry.

He noticed me feeling the pleasure as he then grabbed my boob tightly and got closer to me. His face right in front of mine, he kissed me and stuck his tongue inside me mouth… As we began to taste each other, he slides hand downward.

Surprised, I grabbed his hand and looked at him, I whispered ‘We are going to wake your brother…’

‘It’s ok… ‘He said, as he sank his tongue on my neck and began licking and sucking it. I let his hand go and he kept going down inside my panties… I felt his fingers passing through my pubes ‘I didn’t shave…’ I said embarrassed. He didn’t respond as he had reached my clitoris and began to rub it in circles. That made me grab onto his shirt and squeeze my legs together.

Then he looked back at me and got on top of me. As he looked firmly onto my eyes he sled his fingers to my pussy lips… And began to rub them… and rub… I started to get very aroused… I could feel my pussy releasing wetness… the slimy kind…. I could feel his fingers slide easily as he kept rubbing me. 'Omg…' I thought to myself My body was shaking in pleasure, and out of the blue… He stuck a finger inside me… As it took me in surprise I almost moaned until he had to kiss me to keep me quiet.

He stuck his tongue inside me mouth as a gag to prevent me from making noises. It felt good…. so good… But also hurt… the good kind of pain… I never have done this before… Before I realized he had two fingers inside me, which made me feel even better… full… stretched… I could feel something build up down there…

It was pain… tickle… all at the same time… It felt like I wanted to pee but it wasn’t that either… I began to shake my head as I was about to explode. He pulled everything out, fingers… tongue… and looked at me again…

I had his and my saliva dripping all over my mouth… I was breathing heavily… almost panting… He whispered o my ear as he bit his lower lip… 'I’m… so… going… to fuck you…' The mere word 'fuck' made me so horny… so horny I felt vertigo… I really wanted him inside me…. I wanted to feel my pussy even more filled than just two fingers… I wanted to know how it felt to be stretched by a cock… how it felt to have something reaching the deepest part of your body… I was on fire, my blood boiling, and my face probably red like a tomato… I stuttered 'I… I want your cock inside me…' i said shyly He smooched me lightly as he got down and quietly pulled my shorts and pantie off… I arched my back to help him do it… As he pulled them off and threw them nearby, I closed my legs embarrassed but he grabbed them from under my knees tightly and spread them so easily… Exposing my pussy… He was so using a little bit of force on me… that it made me feel so vulnerable to him…

Then he bended down towards my pussy and smelled it lightly 'You smell good' he whispered as he gave me a lick I lost it, inside my mind i was going crazy 'WTF is going on?! Why does this feel so fucking good?!' It felt so good…

He kept licking me, complete licks from my asshole to my pussy reaching my clitoris… Where he casually made stops to suck and quickly fickle his tongue as he used his fingers to pull the skin. He kept doing that over and over… It felt so good I wanted to cry. I hold onto the sheets to tightly to avoid making noises, while I was looking at his brother sleeping in the other corner… Worried we might wake him up. ‘AHH!’ He stuck his tongue inside me… I felt his slimy… warm tongue go in and out of me so easily… The sensation of something wet, warm, soft going in and out of me was making me feel so good… I was about to…. cum… And right before I did, he pulled his tongue out and gave my pussy several licks while spreading the lips with his fingers. He stood up and looked at me as he was on his knees on the bed. He was rubbing his cock through his pants. I could barely see a bulge in dark but I could tell that… He was very hard.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/3j0hss/while_he_sleeps_mf