I’ve never shared anything I’ve written in public before though I’ve shared stuff with individuals from time to time. So I’m genuinely curious what people think.
This is something I wrote for someone else and it’s written sort of strangely since it addresses the reader. But hopefully it’s still enjoyable to some?
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Imagine that you are meeting me at a coffee shop today before I have class and while you should be at work. When you walk into the coffee shop you can see me waiting for you just inside.
I’m wearing a short black suit skirt with gray wool thigh high stockings and tall 5″ oxford style shiny black patent pumps. For a top I’m wearing a long sleeved suit top that’s very form fitting and you can catch a glimpse of my bare breasts as you look down my cleavage on your way to counter. Around my neck I’m wearing a shiny black leather choker, it’s my way of displaying that you own me when we’re in public.
I’ve got speech class today and we were told to dress like we would for a corporate environment. I couldn’t help but go a bit sexier than I’m sure the teacher intended.
You grab yourself a coffee and get me a tea and we sit and talk for a bit.
The whole time I’m being flirty and touching your hands with mine when you say something funny and you enjoy the view of my bare thighs and the small glimpses up my short dress that you occasional get as I shift my position on the stool I’m sitting on.
There’s a younger man sitting behind me and a bit to the right and he can’t take his eyes off of me.
Suddenly I stand up take your hand and place it on my bare thigh enjoying the feeling of your warm hands as they touch my sensitive skin. I bend over and whispers in your ear, “I’ve got something to show you.”
You catch the envious look on the younger man’s face as you stand up and he watches me lead you to the bathroom door.
I pull you in after me and lock the door not knowing that we were observed.
I drop to my knees immediately and start unzipping your pants.
Then I take you into my mouth and start bobbing up and down; slowly at first, then faster as you harden.
“Am I making you feel good?”, I ask in my sexiest little girl voice.
I don’t wait for a response and immediately get back to work.
After a bit I look up at you and say quietly, “You can take charge whenever you want… and you don’t have to be gentle… your girl just wants to please you”.
So you grab my head by my hair and push me down slowly onto your cock as I look up at you with my big eyes that are beginning to tear up from your cock forcing it’s way into my throat.
You look down at me with my lips now at the base of your penis and then look in the mirror to see the bulge of your cock as it fills my throat, my choker now very tight against my neck. You watch as I struggle to lick the base of your cock with my tongue while your cock fills my mouth and throat and you enjoy the sensation of my throat continually pulsing along the length of your cock my throat massaging your penis with each struggling attempt to swallow.
You start fucking my throat with a slow and steady pace enjoying my soft tears and the tightness of my throat around you, watching in the mirror as the bulge in my throat comes and goes with each thrust.
Finally, you pull me up to my feet and push my face against the wall and put your hand up my skirt to pull down my panties only I’m not wearing any.
Your pulse quickens with that realization and then you feel your penis twitch with anticipation as you discover that I’ve also had steel butt plug in in my ass this entire time. You quickly plunge your penis into my wet pussy.
I whimper at the feeling of your cock making it’s way in.
You fuck me that way slowly for a bit your penis lubricated with my saliva and now my pussy juice as well.
You grab me by my choker and pull my head back forcing me into an arching position with my butt nicely in position.
“This is probably going to hurt a bit.” you say.
You yank my butt plug out enjoying how my ass tries to hold onto it stretching and grasping at it as you pull it forcefully out of my ass. I gasp as the widest part escapes my ass and then gasp again as you push it roughly back in and again as you quickly pull it back out.
“Oh…” I whimper.
Then you put your rock hard penis at the entrance to my ass and slowly push yourself in holding me tight and pulling back on my choker to keep me in position as I involuntarily try to pull away.
Despite the butt plug having prepared things a bit my ass resists at first but then gives in as you force you way deep into my ass and start fucking me slowly enjoying my moans and whimpers as you have your way with my body.
“Oh…” I whimper softly with each thrust of your cock into my little ass.
Despite my high heels you’re almost lifting me off my feet with each forceful thrust into my ass, letting me back down onto the heels as you pull back out, my ass gripping your cock tightly as you position both of our bodies for another thrust.
You give me the occasional break by switching to my pussy for a tiny bit before returning to my ass with more vigor.
Eventually you feel yourself close to cumming and you pull out and let go of your grip on my choker and smack me on the butt hard causing me to squeal with delight.
“On your knees…”
I drop back to my knees and open my mouth like a good little girl and you finish in my mouth cumming with my pretty lips wrapped around your penis as it pulses your satisfaction into my throat.
I look up at you when you are finished, your cum displayed in my open mouth and wait, until you realize that I’m asking for permission to swallow.
You nod, “Yes”, and I swallow and then smile up at you while I use my mouth to make sure your penis is all nice and clean. Then you zip your pants back up and step out of the bathroom.
The younger man is still sitting there with an envious look on his face as you walk to the door of the coffee shop.
I join you outside after fixing myself back up in the mirror and have a big smile plastered on my face.
You give me a hug pulling me up to your height in your embrace.
“Thank you, that was wonderful,” I whisper in your ear and then bury my face in your neck before you place me back down on the sidewalk.
After turning to walk back towards the colllege I shiver as I feel my pussy juice leaking out and making a cold trail down my leg and let the memory of the feeling of your cock in me give me warmth.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/80ydyi/short_but_dirty_imagined_coffee_shop_sex
The sex scene itself is good, satisfying to say the least. However, the transition from the casual date to the sex part wasn’t taken care of, it was too fast and too undetailed. You had a few grammatical mistakes as well.
Everyone’s a critic. I read this and wanted to get to know you to fuck you right away. That must count for something. I clicked on your profile and was disappointed not to see pictures. But I wasn’t disappointed with all of the insight you’ve been dropping on reddit that only stiffened my cock and tantalized my imagination with the thought of meeting you.