This is the first story I ever posted. I realize it should be spellchecked and it could use some rewrites, but I want to hear people's opinions. It's basically a bit like Doctor Who but with a lot of sex and violence. I hope to make it into a series, but won't know when I will be updating. I hope you enjoy and please leave a comment to tell me what you think! Atticus Williams.
Prologue
Some people inherit a watch when their grandfather passes. Other people get a house or lots of money. I wasn’t one of those people. I got something a lot more valuable. I was seventeen years old, almost eighteen when I sat at my grandfathers deathbed. The cancer had finally gotten to him, after all those years. Though you would never be able to tell. He still looked fifty, just as I had always known him to look. I wasn’t sure how old he was, but he must have been well into his eighties, since my father was now in his fifties and the youngest of his siblings. Even now, when my grandfather looked worse than ever, he still looked radiant. If I didn’t know any better I would think he just came from a holiday. I thought it must be because he was so content with his life, and at peace with it being over. No one else was in the room, everyone had gone down to the hospital restaurant to get some food. I wasn’t hungry so I stayed in the room. My granddad looked at me and grabbed my hand. ‘Granddad?’ I asked. ‘Adam, it’s time.’ His voice sounded tired. ‘Time for what?’ ‘Time, for you to have it. I have to move on to the next life, you have to live this one now.’ ‘I know, granddad. But don’t die yet! Wait for the others to come back.’ ‘I can’t plan these things, Adam. I’m being called for. But before I go…’ ‘Who’s calling for you granddad?’ He smiled and said ‘No one, Adam. Look inside the drawer of that cabinet over there, and get it out okay?’ I walked over to the cabinet and chose the highest drawer. There were only socks and underwear in it. ‘No not that one! The one beneath it!’ I pulled the second drawer, and in it was one little black thing. It looked like a lighter, but much longer and thinner. Like a pen. ‘Granddad? What is this?’ ‘You will see for yourself boy, when you become a man. When will you be turning eighteen?’ ‘Next month.’ ‘Good, I want you to promise me that you will not touch it until then, okay?’ ‘What?! What for?’ ‘Just promise me. You can only use it when you become a man. Obey the wishes of your dying old man!’ ‘Okay, I promise then.’ ‘Good. And try to use it for good. Just like I did.’ ‘What do you mean?’ ‘You’ll see. Well, my job here is done. Time for me to go.’ ‘What? No, wait!’ ‘Don’t worry Adam, I want to go, because I did well with the time that was given to me. I have no regrets, and led an adventurous life, but everything has to come to an end. Just press that button for the morphine alright? I don’t want anybody else to see me dying. Such a grim business.’ I couldn’t help sobbing a little, but I pulled myself together, and pressed the button. ‘I don’t want you to go granddad!’ My grandfather sighed with pleasure, and lay back. ‘Goodbye Adam, I’m sure you’ll have lots of fun.’ And with that, he didn’t speak any more.
Chapter one
The day was July fourteenth, my birthday. Finally I turned eighteen, and could do what I wanted. Drink, smoke, drive. So much freedom. But that morning, I had no idea how much freedom I would be getting. It started in bed with a sloppy wet blowjob from my girlfriend, Alison. I woke up with my dick almost half in her mouth. She seemed to have trouble fitting it, but was determined and tried to push it further. I moaned in pleasure and grabbed her hair. I pushed her down further on my cock, but now she really seemed to be chocking so I let go. She took her mouth of it and I saw she had tears in her beautiful blue eyes from almost choking. She smiled and said ‘Happy Birthday, you sexy boy! Or do I have to say “man” now?’ I laughed and said ‘Come here you cheeky slut, I want to kiss you!’ ‘Not until I’ve made you cum. You know, I think your cock grew bigger overnight. I used to fit more of it in my mouth.’ ‘Yep, that’s what happens to men when they grow older. Now out it back in your mouth!’ She didn’t need to be told twice, so she grabbed my dick with two hands and started giving me the best blowjob she ever had. And she was already great at it before! The great thing about her blowjobs were the wetness. She would use so much spit that there manifested a pool of liquid on the bed. ‘Take out your boobs.’ I commanded. ‘Of course, sir,’ She said with a cheeky smile. She whipped out her beautiful chestnut hair, and took off her – correction; MY – “Adventure Time” t-shirt. She wore no bra, so her beautiful C-cups bounced from under it, her big nipples totally erect. I sat upright and started sucking and playing with her boobs like my life depended on it. She moaned, and I felt her legs twitching. But then she tensed up and pushed me down on the bed again. ‘No, today I take care of you. You don’t need to do anything.’ She then put my long thick cock between her beautiful breasts. She started licking the tip of my penis and dropped a lot of saliva on it. Then she started massaging it with her boobs. It felt so warm and comfortable that I couldn’t help but moan. ‘Oh you beautiful sex beast,’ I said She giggled her naughty giggle, and stopped all of a sudden. ‘I want to fuck you, Mr. Big Dick.’ She looked so dirty when she said that, I loved it. She pushed aside her panties to show her beautiful wet pussy. She had shaved it into a landing strip. ‘Oh, damn, that looks hot.’ I said. She just smiled again, grabbed my cock and tried to sit on it. ‘Oh yeah, it grew bigger, I’m sure now,’ Alison said. ‘It barely fits, even though I’m wet as fuck.’ ‘Just push, baby,’ I said. After some time trying to push it in, it finally did and slid all the way in. She screamed so loud I had to push my hand on her mouth so my parents wouldn’t hear. Her pussy felt a lot tighter, and it was wetter than ever. I couldn’t help but moan loudly too. She started moving up and down slowly. It made squishing noises from her wetness. I grabbed her beautiful peach-shaped ass with two hands and massaged it. She started moving faster and faster, all the way up from the tip then down to my balls. While she did this her eyes were closed and her tongue hanging out of her mouth. She tried to moan softly, but I could see she wanted to scream with pleasure. This image made me so horny, I had to cum. I said this, and she got off my cock and to the side of the bed. ‘Cum inside my mouth, baby. I want to taste your juicy, thick cum!’ She said this so hungrily, I came straight away in her open, welcoming mouth. It was almost too much for her to hold in, but she swallowed quickly gave her adorable smile afterwards. ‘That was awesome, Adam, I love having sex with you!’ ‘You did great, Allie, that was the best birthday present I ever had.’ She came to sit on my lap, and we snuggled. ‘What’s that?’ She asked. She was looking at my bedside table. On it was a black box. I immediately got excited. ‘Oh yeah!’ I almost screamed with joy. ‘I inherited it from my grandfather. He said to use it when I turned eighteen. Not before.’ ‘Well, you’re eighteen now! Go on! Use it.’ I smiled and sat up. Alison gave me the black box, and I opened it. I got the black thing from it and looked for a button to press. I found it on one side, and pressed it. From the other end came a green light. ‘What is it?’ Alison asked. ‘I don’t know,’ I said. ‘My granddad never explained. Looks like it’s just a green flashlight.’ I was disappointed. ‘Maybe it’s a magic wand,’ Alison said. ‘Or am I mixing it up with this?’ She grabbed my penis, and I laughed. ‘Can’t be as good as my penis,’ I said. Then it happened. It was all very quickly. Suddenly, Alison wasn’t holding my dick anymore, and there was a bright white light everywhere. I couldn’t see my surroundings at all anymore. And then, I was in another room.
Chapter two
‘Welcome sir, I’ve been expecting you,’ a male British voice said. ‘Who- who are you?’ I said, stammering. ‘I am your servant, Atticus,’ the voice said. It was pitch black, wherever I was, so I couldn’t see anything. I sat on what seemed like the floor. It felt cold, because I was still naked. ‘If you’re my servant, could you turn on a light or something?’ ‘Of course, sir.’ A light went on and I could see where I was. It was a big entrance hall, with what seemed like computer-walls everywhere. I was alone, with a man in a black suit. I assumed he was Atticus. ‘Better, sir?’ ‘Where the hell am I?! What is this place?’ ‘This is your spaceship, sir.’ ‘My… spaceship?’ ‘Yes sir, Mr. Paul Ashcroft gave it to you, when he died.’ ‘My granddad’s name was… Paul?’ ‘Yes sir, even though, that was not his real name. His real name was Ashikatu Blarfgel. He came from the planet Neblar. A very rich and interesting planet, if you one day like to go, sir.’ ‘My grandfather was an alien?’ ‘Yes, sir. I understand this might come as a shock to you, but he was also a human. He just came from another planet, that is all.’ ‘That is all?! What the hell is this? Some joke?’ ‘I assure you not, sir. This is all real, you have your own spaceship, and can do with it what you like.’ ‘What did my granddad have a spaceship for? He never went anywhere on holiday. Why would he go to space?’ ‘On the contrary, sir. He went on holiday, practically all the time. People on earth just didn’t notice, because time works different. He could be away for years and be on earth again just a second after he left.’ ‘Right, and where did he go to then?’ ‘All kinds of planets, sir. He loved exploring everything. Everyone from Neblar does. They’re natural tourists. They go and visit different cultures, but don’t affect them. That’s not what they want, you see sir. They just want to observe.’ ‘Don’t these other cultures have different languages?’ ‘Of course they do, but Neblar people have a translation function in their brains. They can understand any language, just as you can now.’ He explained everything as if I should already know this. I agreed with that. Why wouldn’t my grandfather tell me about all this, if he gave me his spaceship as a present anyway? ‘So, I’m Neblar too?’ ‘Half Neblar, sir. Your mother is from earth.’ ‘Right, well, prove it to me then. For all I know, this is some practical joke.’ ‘All right sir, but let’s get you some clothes on first.’ ‘Oh, yeah, right.’ Atticus gestured for me to stand up and follow him. In the welcoming hall, there was a big round lit up floor. It was glowing baby blue. Atticus stood on it, and gestured for me to do the same. ‘Executive room!’ Atticus shouted. All of a sudden, that bright white light again, and all of a sudden we were in a different room. It was even bigger than the other one, but it was a lot cozier. In the middle was a huge bed. So huge, I think twenty people would fit in it. On the left side was a huge desk, and next to it a personal bookcase with a lot of interesting books on it. On the left side was a big bath and sink. Behind me there were two doors. Atticus opened them to show a giant walk in closet. ‘Welcome to your room, sir. This is where you will spend your time when you’re aboard the ship. The other rooms are for guests.’ ‘Guests?’ ‘Yes sir, this is a holiday cruise ship. Completely commercial, how else do you think your grandfather could pay for this?’ ‘Right, that makes sense.’ ‘So, sir, where would you like to go first?’ ‘Well, um, I don’t know. What are some nice planets?’ ‘May I surprise you, sir? ‘You know best, I suppose.’ ‘If you would, sir…’ He held out a piece of clothing. It were red trousers and a black shirt. He also gave me a square hat to wear . ‘This wardrobe has fitting clothes for almost every culture in this galaxy, sir. Now, it is yours.’ ‘Wonderful. So, where are we going?’ ‘You’ll see, sir. Here take this.’ He handed me a long sword, still in its sheath. I grabbed it and pulled out the sword. It was beautiful. Long and sharp, and still shining like it was freshly made. ‘So, this culture is still living in old times then?’ ‘Something like that, sir. You’ll also need this.’ He handed me a gun the like I had never seen before. I looked at him questioningly. ‘This is a “Flashcanon” sir, very powerful. Best to keep this a secret when we are on the planet though, they’ve never actually seen anything like this. Just for emergencies.’ When I was dressed up and weaponed up, Atticus said. ‘Ready sir? Do you have your hitchhiker’s pen?’ I got out the black light pen. ‘So, that’s what it’s called? Stupid name.’ ‘Good, sir. You’ll also need this.’ He handed over something that looked like a watch. ‘That’s our communication device. When you need something, just call me with that button.’ ‘You’re not coming with me?’ ‘No, sir. This is something to be done alone. Besides, you’ll do more than fine.’ There came a beeping sound from Atticus’ wrist. ‘Excuse me, sir.’ He looked at his watch and pressed the button. A voice said; ‘We’re here.’ ‘Just in time, thank you Mr. Apple. Ready, sir?’ ‘I think so,’ I said. Atticus walked me to another of those teleportation floors that was in my room. I stood on it, a little scared. ‘Sayonara, sir,’ Atticus said with a smile. A bright white light blinded me again and all of a sudden I was in a forest. It seemed a very peaceful and nice forest. Birds were chirping and water was flowing. Everything seemed normal.
But then I heard a loud roar above me.
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