Critical Fail (or Success?), pt. 3 [Fantasy][Succubus][Non-Cons][M/FFFF]

There are few crises worthy of such a gathering. Only two situations in our order’s impressive history have brought such talent together. To hold myself and my comrades in high regard may tread the dangerous line of _pride_, but only a fool would consider us less than legendary. My group alone consisted of one of the world’s most powerful white witches (many still question the order’s decision to allow her in), a mechanical warrior with strength and talents honed over centuries, and myself. Potentially the greatest paladin warrior to ever walk these lands. Now, answering this most noble call, I may solidify my place in history.

Our mission sounds simple enough. Some succubus or another has been wreaking havoc along the countryside. We’ve handled a few of these lusty beasts before, but this one was concerning to our wizened leaders. She’s left devastation in her wake, and even somehow earned a devout following? Puzzling, to be sure, they’re usually more along the lines of mindless slaves to their urges. Such has been my experience, at least. We accepted the mission, along with no fewer than seven other capable parties. This demon will be reduced to ash within a fortnight.

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_How foolish we were_. So _certain_ in our own abilities, so ___naive___ to think this would be easy. We were walking through a wooded area, not dense enough for much of an ambush, but they still managed to catch us by surprise. Our metallic companion was the first to fall, a near imperceptible combination of kicks and punches before any of us had much time to react. The aggressors were gone as quick as they struck. I took position around Flora, my mystical companion. My shield guarded her on one side, sword at the other while she prepared a spell. Something giggled as it ran by some trees a few yards ahead, drawing my attention. Flora sent an Illuminated projectile in its direction, shattering trunks and setting nearby trees ablaze. I turned at the sound of twigs cracking under footsteps behind me, barely registering a pink figure before sudden pain and darkness consumed me. My consciousness faded with the sounds of screams.

I woke some time later. My surroundings had changed, and my armor and clothing beneath had been _removed_. Light danced across rocky walls, a fire burning somewhere deeper into this cave. An unfamiliar smell hung heavy in the air, mingling with the musty fragrance of damp stone. I turned my head to search the new area, sharp pain stabbing at the base of my skull. Flora was laid out face down along the opposite wall, also naked. My eyes lingered far longer than a celibate warrior should allow, and my shame rose almost as quickly as my neglected manhood. The moaning echoing throughout the cavern didn’t help my growing lust.

We weren’t restrained, which I thought was odd, so I tried getting up. It took considerable effort, but I finally got to my feet with a grunt, and made my way over to my fallen companion. She was still breathing, but looked to have been _badly_ beaten. Her typically dark, silky hair was soaked in blood, bruising already evident on her cheek, arms, legs, and buttocks. We must have been out for a while, likely due to some sort of dark magic. Our gear was nowhere in sight, and I wasn’t sure which way to go to retrieve it. Or at least something to defend ourselves while we escaped.

Unfortunately, the time had run out for any escape. A beautiful, _horrifying_ creature stood silently in the narrow chamber. The light flicked over her pink skin, giving it the appearance of thousands of shimmering diamonds. Muscles tensed and relaxed tantalizingly when she walked to me, her wide hips swaying seductively. Her full breasts jiggled with each step, a stiff, violet nipple on each. Long, silky crimson hair bounced behind her with each step. My already hard cock stiffened further, almost painfully so as she approached. I recognized this as the succubus we’d been sent to eliminate, but every fiber of my being wanted nothing more than to _fornicate_ with this demon.

She smiled warmly at me, put her hands on my shoulders and let her fingernails scratch across my chest teasingly as she dropped to her knees before me. I made no motion to interrupt, no attempt to fight as her head fell to my crotch. Her hand wrapped around the base of my throbbing member, and she looked up, directly into my eyes as her long, wonderful tongue slid up the length of my cock. She moaned as she licked over the thick head, savoring the bliss already leaking from my tip. A playful giggle slipped from her lips just before she swallowed my full six inches into her mouth. She held there, nose pressed into my pelvis with my tip brushing the back of her throat for a magnificent pause, then pulled away. Her lips stayed wrapped around me, sucking expertly as more of my shaft emerged.

My glistening manhood popped from her mouth, and we shared a satisfied sigh. Her hands remained on my groin, one hand cupping my balls as the other slowly stroked along my shaft. She muttered something I was too far gone to hear, and her curse took immediate effect. A tightening pain struck my manhood, my attention flying down to the demon kneeling at my waist. Every beat of my heart made my erection throb, and I watched it grow with each palpitation. Her warm, violet eyes gazed up at me as my cock expanded towards her, thickening veins bulging beneath the taut skin along my meaty rod. It grew and grew until I feared it would burst, but I was far too stunned to do anything about it. But, what could I do?

The expansion finally ceased, and shaky breaths trembled from my chest. The demon stroked up and down my altered shaft, her eyes sliding up and down its length in rhythm with her hands. Her fingers couldn’t wrap all the way around my new girth, and I could feel a new heaviness swinging between my thighs. She hummed to herself, and I could see her cheeks and lips shift as she rolled her tongue within her mouth.

“_Before I get too carried away…_” she said, more to herself than anyone else.

She pulled a vibrant, pink pebble from her mouth, something like a smoothed gemstone. One hand settled at the base of my cock and angled it up, the hand with the stone wrapping around my eager cockhead. She positioned the rounded stone against the tip of my member, and guided it inside. A mixture of fear, fascination, and lust swirled in my mind and chest as I watched the pea-sized object disappear into my erection. I felt it slide down, aided by her fingers as they descended my shaft. It arrived at the lowest portion of my manhood, and then with a little effort, slipped somewhere __deeper__.

“_Can’t go getting burned by holy seed now, can I?_”

The demon smirked at me as the ground fell out from under me. I fell, landing flat on my back and gasping for air. The vile, intoxicatingly beautiful creature moaned happily to herself as we both watched my manhood throb, and white cream slowly begin to drool from my tip. Looking at my new member, I felt as though it had more than _doubled_ in size. She crawled up between my legs, staring at the monstrosity she’d built in my lap.

“___Fuck__, _even your_ ___balls___ _grew,_” she breathed, her own lust dripping in her words.

Her mouth opened, dark lips spreading wide as her face approached my throbbing member. I reached for her, but my body felt encumbered. My movements were sluggish, and then halted completely by other hands. Three more women gathered around me, restraining my arms as the beautiful demon enveloped my cock in her marvelous mouth. I groaned at the sudden and unexpected pleasures sweeping through me. The other women were _unsurprisingly_ naked, each the pinnacle of perfection. It was as though I’d been restrained by marble statues of goddesses come to life, my eyes lingering on gently swaying breasts and pink flesh between parted legs. My hands grasped at them, holding a thigh of one kneeling woman, and calf of another. The third had one foot on my chest, and I let my eyes wander up her toned leg, then focus on the dripping slit high over me. Arousal and lust leaked down her leg, gleaming in the low lights as her foot left my chest. I got one look at the glorious monstrosity eagerly sucking at my oversized shaft before her thighs filled my vision.

A hand at my head guided my face forward, my mouth coming into contact with something warm and wet. I opened my mouth and set my tongue to work on the delicious folds presented, happily abandoning my promises of “_chastity_” and “_purity_,” or whatever they were. This woman’s sex tasted _amazing_, and I wanted to savor every last drop of her pleasure as my own built ever higher. Hands began stroking up and down my shaft as the demon continued suckling, and an unfamiliar sensation crept up. I groaned into the woman at my face as my once ignored cock pulsed, my long forbidden seed filling the mouth of the creature I’d been sent to kill. I brought both of my now freed hands to the smoothed ass of the savory woman letting me feast upon her, holding her mounds tightly as I pushed my face harder into her. She screamed as her body began to quake in my grasp, and I felt the demon release my still pulsing manhood from her mouth.

Another set of lips took their place atop my gushing tip, warmer and wetter than the last. The woman at my face bucked forward and fell from my hands, and I was once again able to see my surroundings. The demon was on her feet, watching intently as one of the other women lowered herself onto my sizable erection. She was more slender than the others, shorter and thinner. Her breasts weren’t as large, but fit her frame pleasantly. The hair curling down to her shoulders was a glimmering shade of auburn, and her emerald eyes burned into me. Another groan left my chest as I watched my enhanced meat disappear inside her, streams of juices draining down my length beneath her warm tightness. She moaned softly as inch after inch sunk into her with another woman kneeling next to her. The other woman put her hand over the stretching pink of her friend, then used her fingers to rub at her. The impaled woman shrieked, her body quivering over my hips. Her tightness increased significantly, and my waist became drenched as she trembled. The sensations redoubled the pulsing of my cock, and I could see a slight bump form in her abdomen when she leaned back. She wiggled back and forth, and I groaned at the sensations of her constricting tunnel massaging my thickness.

The woman who I’d tasted moments ago seemed to regain her composure. Her quivering legs came back into view as she pushed herself back up, kneeling over my face again. The woman impaling herself on my organ began ascending, sliding up my pole as my mouth found its juicy meal once again. Nectar from the female flower coated my tongue as the other woman began to slide back down. Every tantalizing inch of her pussy on my cock sent joyous jolts of pleasure through my body. My toes curled, stomach convulsed, and legs twitched as another orgasm approached, but all I really wanted to do was continue licking, sucking, and slurping at the delicious flavors _this_ woman offered.

Loud moans echoed through our small chamber as the women rode my engorged manhood and mouth, their pleasure serving to draw out my own. I could feel my climax nearing the edge, something they all seemed keen to experience. The woman at the side of the one repeatedly sheathing my meaty sword within herself placed her hand on my balls, massaging them as they tensed. Rippling thighs shook around my face as the woman atop my mouth succumbed to ecstasy, falling forward once more. Spasms quaked through her, and I was again permitted to see the petite woman at my waist. Sweat streaked down her body as she rose and fell, inches of thick shaft emerging from her tightly stretched entrance before sliding back inside. A small, pink bead poked out from under a hood of flesh atop her sex, and she trembled when the woman beside her rubbed her fingers around it. I saw and felt her tense as an orgasm took her, moments before my own struck.

My rigid member shuddered within her folds, erupting warm ropes of semen into her convulsing body. Each pulse along my manhood flooded more of my essence into her, and her moans evolved into shrieks of delight as more and more pumped into her womb. The woman next to her applied pressure to her shoulders, forcing the girl further down onto me as my goddess knelt at my side.

“_Look at her womb, love,_” she whispered.

I could hardly hear her sacred words over the sounds of the smaller woman’s unrestricted pleasure. Pink fingers guided my eyes to the young woman’s midsection, where the small bump of her flesh struggled to contain my thickness. The bulge grew with every pulse of my cock, distending her belly further as my seed flowed deep into her loins.

“_There are no rules here,_” my new deity continued. Her hand slid down my chest and over my stomach as she went on, “_Just love_,” pink fingers approached the final inch of exposed, throbbing shaft beneath the girl’s split pussy, “_lust_,” her fingers slipped up my uncovered member and grazed over her fluttering lips, “_and sex._”

My mind started going fuzzy after that. Each woman took turns on my cock, toying with whoever was on top. They would play with each other’s bountiful breasts, sometimes fingers, sometimes mouths. Their hands would constantly rub between the legs of their penetrated friend, each sudden increase in pleasure sending my own orgasm higher. All three ended up filled and covered in my thick, pink tinged seed. I laid there, mostly unmoving while they all had their way with me. My last conscious vision was the demon arriving back between my legs. She grasped my pleasure slicked, still cuming cock in one hand, and used the other to guide another of the pulsating gems into my tip. The seed stopped flowing once the gem slipped inside, getting worked down my shaft like the first. She put another one at my tip and slid it in, then another. They all found their way to my lowest point, and then slipped beyond, one after another. The cave went dark, but my _being_ awoke.

_…breathe…_

_…fuck…_

_…breed…_

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