[TRANS] Feedback Wanted Please

Only open if you like Trans girls. The following is an excerpt from a short story. Those of you who are into trans girls, does this turn you on in any sort of way? And if so/if not, why?

Any feedback greatly appreciated!
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*Today is my day off, tired from early mornings, a week of work and a double gym session. I recently joined the local sports club to learn a new outdoor sport, tennis in this case.*
*The coach has encouraged our group to do extra practice at the weekend to improve our game. He randomly matched us up with someone we didn’t get to play with at the training session. He wanted us to take advantage of the free courts on a weekend morning and put into the practice the skills he’d taught us.*
*I’d been matched with Jen, a smiley girl, she was tall and slim with long flowing brunette hair, but oddly nervous. She was dressed in typical tennis attire, white top, short pleated white skirt, and what looked like brand new, gleaming bright trainers.*
*We said our hello’s amongst some other, almost awkward small talk, as most would with a stranger. We tossed a coin to see who would serve first, I won, and choose to let Jen serve. Serving in my eyes was one of the most difficult parts of the game, I didn’t want to embarrass myself in front of a stranger.*
*Jen threw the ball up and went to hit it, missing it completely. She laughed awkwardly, as did I, I knew I wouldn’t have done better. I nervously yelled have another go, I didn’t even know the rules at this point.*
*Anyway, she had another go, the same result, no serve and a little frustration from Jen. I now say third time lucky, one of those go to English sayings we often say without thinking about it.*
*Third time lucky. I could see Jen had a little anger in her eyes this time, maybe it was determination. This time she throws it higher, reaches high up into the air with her racket, however this time something took me by surprise. As she stretched high to reach the ball, the front of her skirt caught a gust of wind and blew up. My eyes didn’t know where to look as I saw her skimpy white knickers full on from across the court.*
*What I saw was a bulge, something that couldn’t be mistaken. Being male I knew what it was. And I also knew it was definitely larger than average. This instantly confused me, somewhat startled me even. I missed the return and Jen got the point. I couldn’t even muster up any words to reply to her.*
*However, this large, unexpected bulge, the last thing I was expecting to see today, had really piqued my curiosity.*
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Thanks

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ulmx6o/trans_feedback_wanted_please