*Author’s Note: Breakfast in bed and video masturbation… Great start to the day for Kelly! What will the rest of his day involve? Previous chapters and other erotica can be found at* r/KellyBoomErotica. *Enjoy and DMmeYOURpussies.*
**- Chapter 16: Was I A Good Cumslut? -**
“There’s so many good ones in here,” I noted while flipping through a record crate. “Steely Dan, Stevie Ray Vaughan, Supertramp…”
“If you want to listen to any of them, the record player is under the register,” Charlie offered. I pulled a Stevie Ray Vaughan live album out of the crate and handed it across the counter to her. She dropped the needle on and Stevie’s unmistakable guitar riffs started playing throughout the shop. I noticed the only other person in the store start tapping their feet and nodding as they browsed through a crate towards the back. Charlie hopped up and sat on the counter. As usual, she was wearing a sundress and I couldn’t help but wonder if she was wearing panties underneath. *Jeez, even after mental torture last night, then jerking off with Jamie this morning, I’m still thinking about Charlie’s panties.*
I resisted the urge to directly ask Charlie about her pantie situation and instead asked, “So, how much more of *Untitled* have you written?” She gave me a queer look, so I continued, “I gather your book title will not be *Untitled*?”
Charlie giggled, “Oh no, that’s just a placeholder. I’ve probably written another 2,000 words, but I haven’t edited it at all.” I nodded along knowing not to ask if I could read anything she hadn’t reviewed yet. She bounced up and down a little, “So, tell me! What did you think of it so far?”
“It’s so good!” I exclaimed.
Charlie beamed, “You’re not just saying that to be nice, are you?”
“Not at all. Honestly, it’s a great start!” Her expression focused when I continued, “But I have some notes.”
For about the next hour, interrupted periodically by customers, Charlie and I discussed her novel. She was very receptive to my thoughts and edits. She explained more of her world’s backstory, and how it would be slowly revealed, continually shaping the characters that lived in it. I was wholly impressed by how meticulous she’d crafted every character and location. How elaborate her plot was to unfold, and how intricate each character’s motivations and actions played into the plot. She had a clear idea of the ending, but wouldn’t tell me – stating she wanted it to be a surprise – no matter how hard I’d pleaded. Until finally she conceded an inch, “Fine! I’ll tell you one thing that will happen near the end. However, I’m *only* telling you because I need your… expertise.”
My eyebrows raised with excitement and curiosity. “Yes ma’am. Happy to oblige,” I said in my exaggerated Southern drawl.
Charlie giggled then retorted, “Don’t get all Southern charm on me. I just… I don’t know how to describe the scene.”
Wanting to help, I said earnestly, “Lay out the scene for me then.”
Charlie glanced around the shop to confirm there were no customers. Even though the shop was empty, save the two of us, she leaned forward and whispered, “Before the final climax with the shadow cult, Pacu and Loris are going to fuck.”
My jaw dropped, “What?! They’re sworn enemies. How…”
Charlie cut me off, “I’m not going to tell you anything else.” She then smiled mischievously.
“Ugh! Then why tell me?”
“To torture you.” *Torture… Why am I not surprised?* She giggled then continued, “I’m not gonna tell you details about how they end up in the situation, but I do want your input. See, I want to write the chapter from Pacu’s point of view. So, can you describe what it feels like to fuck a woman?”
I shuffled my feet and fidgeted with my hands, not out of embarrassment or discomfort, but at being caught off guard by the question. “Um… I… Eh…” was all that came out.
“You have had sex with a woman before?” she asked with concern on her face.
“Yes!” I blurted out defensively.
Charlie giggled, “Relax, I’m just teasing you.” A wide smile returned to her face. I couldn’t help but blush and returned her smile. “So, what does it feel like to have a boner?”
“Alright, I’ll play along,” I replied while shaking out my shoulders. “It feels good, obviously,” Charlie nodded while reaching for her notebook. “It throbs a little. It’s kind of like after a workout,” she gave me a puzzled look. “Not the sore or achy part, but you know when your muscles are swollen and firm, and you feel strong and powerful.” Charlie nodded while scribbling notes. “A boner feels strong, and it feels good to flex it, bend it, massage it just like stretching after a work out.”
“This is great. Keep going,” she encouraged, not looking up from her notebook.
“It’s sensitive all over, but the frenulum is particularly sensitive.”
Charlie looked up at me pensively, “So, what’s it feel like when your cock goes inside a pussy?”
I closed my eyes thinking about the satisfaction of that feeling while also acknowledging that it’d been quite a while since my cock was inside a pussy. “Mmm, so good.” *I bet Charlie’s pussy is amazing!* “The physical sensation is wonderful… Like putting on warm clothes after you’ve been caught in a cold rainstorm.” Charlie hummed in quiet understanding. “But the mental sensation is just as good. I’m sure you know what I mean when a hard cock fills you up.” I started getting aroused as I transitioned from just describing things to making it more personal.
Charlie bit her lip and I noticed her cheeks beginning to flush. She kept taking notes and asked, “What does it feel like to have a pussy squeezed around your fat cock?”
*What I would give to finally squeeze my fat cock into a pussy.* “Amazing! The pussy walls are smooth, yet the texture… the ridges massage my cock in wet warmth.” Charlie began subtly rubbing her thighs together. “The feeling is great, and I really love watching my dick slide in and out.”
“Mmm, I bet,” Charlie moaned, no longer hiding her arousal. “Do you like watching in any specific position?”
I didn’t try to hide my arousal at that point either. I shoved my hand into my pants and shifted my semi-hard cock. Charlie watched me and bit her lip again. “Not really. I love playing with her clit if she’s on her back, but I also love the view in doggystyle.” Charlie continued to moan and take notes. “Massaging her asshole is great too.”
“Mmm, you like ass play, don’t you?” she asked with a smirk on her face. I almost said it out loud, but only thought, *You have no idea*. She looked back down at her notes and asked, “What’s it feel like to cum?”
“I like to clentch my cockhead allowing the pressure to build up. My cock swells even more with a pleasurable throbbing. The rest of my body starts to tingle and my vision goes fuzzy. It’s kind of like the moment before a sneeze, and then the pleasure of releasing the sneeze. Except *way, way* better!”
“Mmm, yes!” Charlie put her pen down and leered at me. “And where do you like to cum?”
I leered back at her, “You want to find out cumslut?”
“Mmm, I want you to cum in me *so* bad! But…”
“No but! Please, I want to fill up your cumslut pussy.”
Charlie twitched everytime I said *cumslut*. “But,” she continued. “I’m on my period.” I have no qualms about fucking a woman on her period, but I didn’t want to seem too desparate and continue begging, so I just nodded in understanding. Charlie hopped off the counter, “Come back here.”
The register area was in the middle of the store, surrounded by counters, and elevated about a foot above the rest of the store. I stepped up into the little space and Charlie dropped to her knees. “Whoa, what if someone walks in,” I asked while she fiddled with my belt.
“You better help them. Excellent customer service is important.” She ripped my pants down to my ankles, my full erection sprang free, and peered up into my eyes. “I want you to describe what you’re feeling.” I was in shock that this was actually happening, but managed to nod my approval. She grinned, then flicked her tongue on my frenulum. My cock twitched at her touch, and Charlie said, “This *is* the most sensitive part!”
“It’s ticklish in a good way,” I explained. Charlie then sucked in my cockhead and twirled her tongue in circles around it.
I sighed heavily, then she sucked off my cock with a pop and said, “Tell me how it feels,” and returned to sucking.
“Your lips are smooth and the roughness of your tongue feels great on my head.” Charlie moaned around my cock. “The suction in your mouth is nice.” She sucked harder on the tip, then began taking my shaft into her mouth. “Mmm, yes. Rub the base of my cock with your tongue.”
The bell on the front door chimed when an older guy walked into the store. I jumped a little in shock and tried to step back, but Charlie gripped my ass and held me close. I stared at the guy, wide-eyed, and he said, “Hi. Do you have any Billie Holiday albums?”
I looked down in panic. Charlie was looking up at me with my cock still in her mouth. She used her eyes to point to the far side of the store. I followed her eyes, then pointed to the sign that read “Jazz” and muttered “Maybe over there.”
The guy gave me a queer look, but slowly walked to where I was pointing. I kept my gaze on the guy as he flipped through records. There were quiet, but unmistakable sounds coming from Charlie eagerly bobbing back and forth on my cock. I wanted nothing more than the guy to leave, but he slowly worked his way through numerous crates. All the while, Charlie was alternating between sucking and deepthroating. At one point she gagged on my dick, then coughed. The guy looked over and I faked coughing into my hand.
Charlie was an expert cocksucker so it didn’t take too long for my orgasm to build. I started tapping her shoulder, hoping she would slow down, but she did the opposite and took my cock deep down her throat. She repeatedly swallowed while vigorously massaging my balls. I tightened my whole body hoping I could hold off just long enough for the guy to leave. Charlie slid my cock from her throat, then her mouth, and I thought she was going to stop. I peered down at her and she had her mouth open wide, tongue sticking out. Then she began rapidly jacking me off. My orgasm rolled over me like a wave crashing, and I spurted cum into Charlie’s mouth. She closed her mouth to swallow and my second spurt shot all over her face. She licked her lips and opened her mouth just in time to catch my next blast. Mouth still filled with cum, she began sucking me off again. I involuntarily grunted, shot my eyes away from the amazing sight of Charlie’s cum covered face sucking my cock, and faked another cough because the guy was looking at me.
Whether he couldn’t find what he was looking for or was weirded out, he walked to the door and muttered, “Thank you.” I didn’t move or say anything.
When the door shut with a bang Charlie released my cock from her mouth having completely sucked me dry. All I could do was stare down at her as she used her finger to slide my cum down her cheeks and into her mouth. Satisfied she’s gotten everything, she said, “Was I a good cumslut?”
“Holy fuck Charlie!”
She giggled and stood up. “That was yummy. I’ll be right back,” and she confidently strutted to the bathroom, that amazing ass bouncing under her sundress.
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