Been enjoying writing erotica, still new though so I hope you like it. Really hope I’m using the right tags..
It was a hot summer day as they drove down the highway, windows rolled down, wind whipping through her hair. The smoke from his cigaretter trailing out the window as he drove, one hand resting on the door the other on the wheel. The music was blasting through the speakers; her vibrator was also blasting on her clit. She was wearing a short sundress, no bra, panties around her ankles. Her hard nipples evident through the thin fabic, her dripping pussy making a wet spot on the seat. She moaned aloud to the rythmic vibrations on her clit that pulse up through her body. “Oh fuck!” she breathed, grabbing at her own breasts, she leaned back into the chair looking over at him. He was watching from the corner of his eyes smirking, he took a quick look away from the road to her squirming body and reached over to fondle her tit. “You’re so fucking hot!” One hand on the wheel, cigarette between his fingers, other hand groping her tit and pinching her nipple, eyes back to the road ahead. The sensation of his touch on her nipple sent a wave of pleasure down to her groin, she was so close to cumming. He removed his hand suddenly and the car slowed down. “Damnit.” she swore, and adjusted herself trying to hold back the orgasm. “You could have made it through the light, I was just about to cum.” They came to a stop at the now red light and she purposefully didn’t look at any cars that might be there feeling rather self conscious; her body ached for the light to change. He adjusted the bulge in his pants. “You’ve got an audiance, I think they wanna see your tits.” he reached over to grope under her dress as he gestured with a nod at the car on the right. The group in the car were pointing at her, hollering and gesturing for her to flash her tits, she could barely hear them over the music plus her shyness and trying to hold her back her orgasm. It’s not like she hadn’t flashed her boobs in the car before, but it was much different while her whole body was vibrating with pleasure. Fuck it! She thought to herself with a bolt of confidence, and slid down the straps of her dress, turning her body so she could lean her plump perky tits out the window. They all cheered, one held out a phone taking a picture or maybe video, she felt a bit of panic well up that immedietly subsided into arrousal at the thought of herself being shown around. As her tits hung out the window he had his hand on her ass, sliding it down to her wet cunt. He slid a couple fingers into her pussy, alongside the virbrator, and with all the stimulation going on she couldn’t hold back a moan. He then rubbed her juices over to her ass just barely teasing her hole. “Oh fuck!” she gripped the edge of the window, then she was forced back into the seat, as the car took off, trapping his hand beneath her. He wiggled his fingers around, they brushed against her openings, and she couldn’t contain herself any longer. “Fuck yes! Yes!”, she screamed as the waves of ectasy washed over her body. She leaned against against the dash, her body spasming, her pussy throbbing; she was entirely unaware of her surroundings for a moment. “Fuck, that’s so fucking hot.” he said. The vibrations were now too much on her senstive, overwhelmed clit, and she fumbled with the buttons to turn it off. He removed his fingers and stuck them into his mouth sucking off all her juices, before returning them to the wheel. She leaned back, waiting for her breathing to steady, with a lazy smile on her face. The cool air coming in through the window felt nice on her flushed face, and bare chest. He adjusted his cock again before putting a new cigarette in his mouth and lighting it; he took a drag. “You’ve made my cock so fucking hard. Maybe I should find somewhere to pull over so I can fuck your brains out.” “We’ll definately be late if we do that.” she breathed out, still a little breathless. He shrugged “So?” he took another drag then added with a wink, “I’d be more than happy to be late.”
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tznnvx/caught_at_a_red_light_mf_mast_exhib
It’s easy to get lost in a large block of text. My feedback would be to add some spacing for easier reading. Especially during dialog.