Chapter II
(Revelation)
Eric and Jessica get to their room and stumble into the shower. They are both slightly drunk and tired from being in the sun all day. They both strip off and Jessica’s eyes are transfixed on Eric’s penis. Eric noticed, he knows that look, he has seen it before.
Jessica: you really do have a small penis dear, don’t you?
Eric: ummmmm I guess it’s not as big as other guys….
(As they continue to shower….)
Jessica: yeah…. Did you see Bruce… he is massive!
Eric: ummm yeah I guess….
Jessica: having sex with him must really painful for crystal…. Not like yours it just slides in no problem….. Sometimes I don’t even feel it inside until you tell me….
She says with a giggle, then turns off the water and kisses and hugs him. They both then rap towels around their waists and leave the bathroom. Jessica heads to the balcony and sits out there. Eric follows her.
Eric: you really enjoy being topless now, don’t you?
Jessica: yeah it’s liberating.
Eric: people might see you…
Jessica: its fine, plus we’re four floors up; I mean they really have to be looking for us.
Eric: I guess so…. Ummm I have a question for you…. Do you like Bruce’s penis more than mine….
Jessica: don’t be silly dear, why would you say that?
Eric: well… because of what you said earlier…
Jessica: honey I love you, I couldn’t care less if you had the smallest or the biggest penis in the world. I love your penis because I love you. I mean sure I was intrigued when I saw Bruce’s massive print. Sure Bruce’s looks more aesthetically pleasing. You know what I mean? His is…. How should I put it? It’s manlier. I mean it’s weird how much smaller your penis looks compared to him. But yours is normal right? Or is it smaller than other guys as well?
Eric: ummmm I guess its low average.
(With that she reaches over and pulls off his towel.)
Jessica: let’s see….( She reaches over and grabs his one inch soft penis and inspects it), so it seems to be on the smaller side. It definitely is smaller than the Bruce’s.
Jessica: I think it’s cute.
She then gets up and heads to bed, leaving him exposed on the balcony. Eric stood there naked not knowing what to think or do about what just happened. His wife just told him for the first time that his penis is small. Jessica on the other hand laid in bed thinking about Eric’s penis. Why did she leave him exposed naked on the balcony? Why didn’t she call him to bed? Is he no longer sexually appealing to her? Eric was the only man she had ever been with and she loves him dearly, she never thought his penis was too small, but now she realized it was. She is intrigued by Bruce’s massive cock. It is bigger and more alluring; it somehow makes him manlier. Just the thought of a big manly penis hanging between his legs made her hot and horny. Did she crave Bruce’s massive cock? Or is it not Bruce himself but just a bigger penis than her husband’s? Eric’s penis now seemed so incredibly miniscule and insignificant; as if it was non-sexual like a baby’s penis. Had she missed out on better sex? She starts thinking about how she almost feels nothing when they have sex, and how Eric has to perform cunnilingus and finger her to make her cum. He doesn’t even do a good job at that either, she constantly has to give him directions and half the time he fails to get her to finish. But he is a good man; he treats her well and loves her. She loves him too. But just the thought of how small she sees his penis now is upsetting her.
Then Jessica’s thoughts are interrupted by a woman’s voice yelling from the street: ‘look at that guy’s tiny dick’. Both Eric and Jessica hear her. ‘Get your little dick to bed,’ Jessica calls Eric. ‘We don’t want the whole town to know how cute your little penis is,’ she says while giggling. Eric blushes and follows Jessica to bed; she gets him into spooning position with her butt pressing against his penis, she then giggles and says: ‘hahaha your cute little penis is tickling me.’
They both wake up an hour later; Eric wraps the towel again around his waist and goes to make coffee.
Jessica: why are you covering up, trying to hide something?
Eric: ummm no
Jessica: then show me the goods.
Eric drops his towel to the floor, Jessica looks at him and says:’ there is he worlds cutest penis.’ they both have their coffee naked in bed and then Jessica suggests they start getting ready for their night out with Bruce and crystal; they don’t want to be late. They head to Bruce and crystal’s room and knock on the door. Crystal opens the door to what seems to be the royal suite. “They must be wealthy” Eric thinks to himself.
Crystal: come in, come in…. Bruce is in the shower. I’m sorry we are running late, but we couldn’t help ourselves, swimming always gets us horny.
Jessica: that’s ok, we understand.
Crystal was wearing very deep V neck, backless red satin dress that opened down to her belly button, showing her exquisite cleavage. The dress was long and had a slit open all the way up to her curvy hips exposing her entire left leg. She looked at Jessica and said: oh honey is that what you are wearing? Its fine for a bar night but not suitable for dancing, I’ll loan you one of my dresses. She then gets a silky short black dress from the closet and hands it to Jessica. “Here try this on”. Jessica takes off her clothes down to her bra and panties.
Crystal: oh honey, you really are a prude, these dresses are supposed to be worn braless, and those panties won’t do. Crystal then digs out a tiny little thong from her suite case, with what seems like tiny crystals adoring it. “Here change into this”. As Jessica strips down completely, the bathroom door opens and Bruce walks out completely naked drying his hair with a small towel. As he was walking out Eric and Jessica looked at his massive swinging soft cock. Bruce stands there looking at Jessica completely naked and says: wow you are stunning. Jessica blushes and covers her vagina and breasts with her hands. Eric gets up to help her cover up as she wears her new thong and dress, Crystal throws Bruce’s boxer shorts at him and orders him to get dressed: stop flaunting your cock, no one wants to see it. I’m sorry guys, he’s almost always naked, as if he wants everyone to know how big his cock is, who cares right? ‘I’m not wearing boxers tonight; they won’t do with my new dancing pants’ Bruce replies. He then wears light grey dress pants and a black button down lycra slim shirt. The shirt complemented his muscular body and his cock print was very clearly visible through the thin pants’ material. His cock print was almost too clear, down to the very last detail. ‘I can move better in these’ Bruce announces.
Jessica wears her new dress, a short backless black satin dress, deep V neck that shows her cleavage and two slits on both sides that go up past her hips to show the thong crystals underneath. ‘Wow looks better on you than on me” crystal says, “My boobs are too big for it, you can keep it”. Everyone is ready now and they leave to the dance club.
They get there, Bruce orders a bottle of vodka for the ladies and a bottle of fine scotch for the men, he then hands Eric a massive Cuban cigar and lights one up himself. The party is in full swing and everyone is having great fun. Bruce and crystal get up do dance, while Eric and Jessica stay at the table. Jessica looks at Eric smoking his cigar and says,’ that thing is massive, looks like your smoking Bruce’s penis, hahahaha,’ Eric blushes. They both sit and watch Bruce and crystal dancing so provocatively, it was a sensual erotic dance. Eric couldn’t help but feel inferior to the man that Bruce is. Jessica was turned on by the couple’s erotic energy. Bruce and crystal finish their dance and get back to the table.
Bruce: wow that was fun.
Jessica: you guys looked great out there, you really can dance, I’m jealous.
Crystal: why don’t you guys go dance.
Jessica: oh no, we never tried tango, we would look like idiots.
Bruce: if Eric doesn’t mind, ill dance with you.
Jessica: but I never danced tango
Crystal: don’t worry honey, Bruce is great at tango, you just follow his lead.
Jessica: (turns to Eric) what you think dear?
Eric: ummmm I guess you could try.
Jessica and Bruce get up to the dance floor, he holds her in position, her back to his front. They are about to begin dancing, Jessica could feel Bruce’s massive bulge pushing against her back, she likes it. Bruce begins dancing, taking it slow and leading Jessica. Touching her body sensually, swinging her away and then pulling her back into the safety of his big muscular arms. Caressing every inch of her body, she is entranced by him. His massive cock was swinging with his every move only to hit her body like a pendulum. As they were dancing, Eric was sitting there watching his beautiful bride, his beloved, taken in the arms of a bigger man, a better man, an alpha male. He is sitting there feeling inadequate as a man, somehow emasculated in the company of Bruce. Bruce ends the dance with one final swing; a Grand finale to Jessica’s most sensual experience of her life, pulling her dress straps off her shoulders exposing her almost naked body to the whole club, as if he were asserting his dominance over the inferior man’s wife, to the sound of applause from the whole club. Jessica, unlike herself, did not blush this time or try to cover up. Instead she grabbed the dress off the floor, held Bruce’s arm and walked back to the table wearing nothing but her thong. She waited to get to the table to get dressed again. Eric said nothing, as if he was submitting to the alpha male’s dominance over him. Jessica sat there tired; but not from dancing, she felt as if she had climaxed. She then asked crystal for a cigarette and sat there smoking it. But she didn’t sit next to her husband, she sat next to Bruce. She didn’t plan it, it just happened as if by nature. She rested her head onto Bruce’s big muscular chest and thanked him. The night went on, everyone got drunk, before they left Crystal suggested they all go to the beach together the next day. Jessica was excited at the idea of spending the day with Bruce and Crystal. Eric could not interject.
Eric and Jessica get back to their room; Jessica jumps Eric and starts kissing him and undressing him. ‘Did you see me dancing?’, ‘it was so exciting!’, ‘did you see me when Bruce stripped me in front of everyone?’, ‘I didn’t care…. It was so weird’, ‘so exciting!’ with that she had completely undressed Eric and stripped off herself. She started riding him hard and for the very first time in her life climaxed from intercourse. She never climaxed from intercourse before. Then she rolled over and went to sleep right away, leaving Eric lying there with a full erection. He did not cum! This has never happened before. He just lied there confused and unable to understand the events of the day.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tk2xzo/ch2first_time_writing_need_thoughts_and