(ch.5)first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Ch.V

(The un-manning of Mr. Jones)

The trio arrives at the suite; Bruce opens the door naked; his cock swinging between his legs. As Bruce had been sitting in the hot tub, his cock and scrotum relaxed in the hot water, they seemed to hang even lower than Jessica remembers; his cock seemed to almost reach his knees, even though he is a tall man. Crystal pulls the towel off of Jessica revealing her gorgeous naked body.

Crystal: Bruce, Jessica is upset. Take her to the hot tub, get her a drink and take care of her, I’ll take care of baby boy over here.

Bruce: come dear, relax in the hot water. Bruce will take good care of you.

Bruce leads Jessica to the hot tub then gets drinks for the two of them. He gets in the hot tub with Jessica and pulls her over to sit between his legs and lay her back on his chiseled torso, while giving her a neck rub. She sat there between his rock hard thighs, his cock snaking beneath her, coming out from under her vagina and still looking massive. She can’t help but feel a longing to this massive cock, she craves it, and she just wants to grab it. Meanwhile, crystal was done preparing a now submissive Eric. Crystal leads Eric to the hot tub with a towel wrapped around his waist. ‘Are you ready for the big reveal? Or should I say: the small reveal?’ she pulls off the towel exposing Eric’s penis locked in a little pink cock cage.

Crystal: what do you think?

Bruce: perfect!

Jessica stares at Eric and says: just where a little dick belongs. I now see what you meant when you said ‘kinky,’ crystal. But why are you interested with little dicks when you have Bruce’s god like cock? (She reaches down and grabs Bruce’s cock, feeling it in her hand; she even can’t wrap her fingers around its thickness)

Crystal: well….. I’ve always enjoyed dominating little men, and well, with Bruce’s cock I don’t get to be dominant. I’ve been craving playing with Eric’s little penis since yesterday. Tonight you will feel like a woman for the first time in your life Jessica, so will Eric. Bruce will treat you right; he will be gentle and take it slow with you. I will take care of Eric and be gentle as well.

Bruce stands up, his cock right in front of Jessica’s face. Crystal says:’ go ahead honey, take it. Feel what a man’s cock feels like. Touch it, suck it, and worship it. And you Eric look at your wife. Watch her enjoy a real cock for the first time in her life. Once Bruce is done with her you will never be able to get near her pussy. He will stretch her out so much, that she will never be able to feel your tiny useless joke of a penis ever again.’ She then grabs his face so he can’t look away. He looks at his wife enjoying this massive cock and worshiping it. ‘Why don’t you show your wife how to properly suck a massive cock, it seems to be too big for her mouth,’ crystal tells Eric. She then pushes Eric into the hot tub and joins in as well; she pushes Eric’s head onto Bruce’s cock. Bruce grabs Eric’s head and pulls him in, while Jessica is still holding his cock. ‘Open wide’ crystal says to Eric, he complies as he has completely submitted to the alpha cock in front of him. He opens his mouth wide but still seems to be unable to wrap his lips around Bruce’s cock head. It is too big for him and is hurting his jaw. Jessica watches as her husband is submitting to a bigger and manlier cock, she now knows that their relationship has changed forever. The sight of Eric’s penis locked up in a tiny pink cage, while he is kneeling before and worshipping a ‘man’s cock’, is a sight that will forever be engraved in her brain. She is never going to un-see this sight. Eric is no longer a man in her eyes.

‘Why don’t we move to the bed?’ Bruce says while leading Jessica to bed. He then spreads her legs and starts to eat her pussy. He is gentle and seems to know exactly what he is doing. Crystal also leads Eric to bed and orders him to sit and watch his wife in a real man’s arms, as she gets ready. Jessica is really enjoying Bruce’s every touch, lick and kiss, she is soon wetter than she had ever been and is eager to take Bruce’s cock in her pussy. She feels as if she will only now lose her virginity. Crystal goes to the bathroom and closes the door. She emerges a couple minutes later wearing a massive, bright red strap-on dildo. Bruce gets off Jessica and directs her attention to crystal. ‘This dildo is cast off of Bruce’s cock; both you and Eric will tonight feel Bruce’s cock inside them tonight’ crystal announces.

Crystal then has Eric lay on his back next to Jessica and has his legs spread up in the air as she lubes up Eric.’ Here we go’ she says, as she and Bruce slide their cocks into Eric and Jessica respectively. Eric and Jessica look into each other’s eyes as they are both feeling big cocks inside them for the first time. They both realize that this is the beginning of a whole new life for them. Then Jessica turns away and closes her eyes as she dives deep into the pleasure she is feeling. She then starts moaning loudly and within two minutes of feeling Bruce’s cock inside her pussy, she climaxes. She feels an orgasm like never before. Nothing ever felt like this before. Bruce smiles and says: I’m barely even in. He then lies on top of her and starts kissing her, holding her head with one hand and spreading her leg with the other, as he slides his cock very slowly deeper inside; she starts to moan very loudly with pleasure. She thought having a cock this big fucking her would be painful, but it isn’t. ‘This is what sex is supposed to feel like’ she thinks to herself; the feeling of being stretched out and filled up was just unbelievable for her.

Crystal was enjoying fucking Eric. She was standing at the edge of the bed, sliding her cock into Eric’s tight hole. She was holding his balls very tightly, squeezing them hard as she pushed her cock in, inch by inch. Eric was not feeling pleasure like Jessica was though; he was in pain. Not only was his body was in pain, but his very soul. He laid there on his back looking up at crystal. She was standing behind his ass and wearing nothing but a cock that she is defiling him with. While he was Lying there, taking her cock, he felt as if he had waivered his manhood over to her; He was un-manned.

As the fucking continued, Eric was now succumbing to the idea of no longer being a man, but now he is crystal’s bitch. He accepts that with such a small penis he was never completely a man, but a sub-man; he now starts to enjoy having a cock inside him. Then he hears his wife’s moaning becoming louder and louder, mixed with Bruce’s grunts as he fucked harder and harder. Then crystal started moaning louder and louder. And now it was Eric; he was moaning as well, moaning loud like a little slut. The room was filling up with sexual energy. The sounds of moaning and grunting, the feelings of thrusting and being filled up. They were all now so highly charged with all the sexual energy, that they all climaxed together. Jessica was squirting all over Bruce as his cum filled up her tight pussy. Crystal came hard as she enjoyed dominating her bitch boy. Eric came without his penis even being touched, without being erect. He came from ass fucking! They all laid in bed very satisfied, relaxing before it was time for round: two.

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