This is my first time posting something, and I know it’s long, but I wanted to share a story I wrote based on a picture I saw earlier today. Happy to take any notes! This is just a first attempt at anything longer than a prompt.
It was half past 4 in the afternoon and the heat of the day was finally breaking when Allison returned to the trailhead from her hike. It was a peaceful hike, she’d not seen or even heard a single person the entire time so she was surprised to notice another car parked opposite hers in the tiny gravel parking area.
“I guess this trail wasn’t as far off the beaten path as I’d hoped” she thought walking past the car toward her own. As she passed, she noticed a middle-aged couple was sitting inside. She got into her car, lowered the windows, and hopped back out to stretch while the car aired out. With each stretch she caught curious glances at the other car. “They look dressed for a house party rather than a hike,” she thought. From what she could see, the man was wearing a button down shirt and the woman had on a loose tank top.
Finishing up Allison looked over one more time and noticed the couple was now making out like some high school couple parked in… well a quiet parking lot. Allison stopped and starred for a few rapidly quickening heartbeats. They were fairly attractive. The man had a handsome face with a full brown beard and the woman had a beautifully sharp face. Both looked in good shape and ignored Allison as she watched one of man’s hands slide up the woman’s shirt to grope at her breasts. Feeling her face flush and heart flutter Allison sat back in her car.
Peering over her steering wheel she noticed the man’s shirt had come fully unbuttoned and the woman was now running her fingers through his chest hair. “I should go and let them have some privacy” she thought taking a few deep breaths, but just as the thought entered her mind she heard gravel crunching as a third car drove into the parking area. Inside was a younger man, closer to Allison’s age than the couple across from her. The stranger pulled up slowly, clearly looking at the couple who only paused a bit in their activities before resuming. The stranger pulled in and parked next to the couple; an odd move considering how busy they seemed.
Ignoring the stranger Allison looked back at the couple and sharply inhaled as she noticed the woman’s top was now off and the first man was sucking on her breasts. The woman’s hand had disappeared into the mans lap below the dashboard and was slowly pumping up and down. She knew she should go but she felt rooted there, getting more and more turned on. She loved how beautiful and confident this couple was. How they didn’t seem to care that two random people had just crashed their private make out spot.
Still staring at the couple, something caught Allison’s eye. The stranger had opened his door and was walking over to the couples car on the woman’s side. The woman made no move to put a shirt on, she even leaned back as the stranger walked up to her window. Even with all the car windows open, Allison could only hear a low murmur as he spoke with the couple. But she didn’t have to hear anything to notice when the stranger reached down to grab at the growing bulge in the front of his jeans.
Allison felt her stomach lurch as the woman leaned out of the window, lowering the new man’s jeans and boxers to release a growing dick which sprang free, swaying and twitching in the sun. He was well endowed and clearly more than happy to show it off. After a few slow strokes the woman took the stranger’s dick into her mouth. Glued to what was unfolding in front of her Allison reached a hand down her own spandex shorts and lightly moaned at the touch of wetness and the smell of sex.
Looking back at the first man Allison froze with surprise. While his hand had disappeared into the woman’s lap, his eyes were locked on Allison. He leaned over and said something to the woman who was still busy sucking the stranger’s dick. She paused, said something to the men, and slowly opened her door to get out. As the woman got out Allison noticed that, while she was still topless, she had on a bright orange ruffle skirt. Completely ignoring the gravel driveway the women knelt down and resumed sucking the stranger, pulling at his clothes while she did. Slowly, Allison began to play with herself as the man’s moans drifted to her through her open window.
After a few minutes the stranger was now fully naked, having stripped off his shirt and jeans. Allison heard a murmur as he said something to the woman and she replied with a nod before getting up. Standing up, the woman looked directly at Allison, dropped her skirt to the dusty ground, and stepped out of it completely naked. Both men (and Allison) stared transfixed at this powerful beauty, her sun covered skin broken only by two pink nipples and an immaculately trimmed pubes. The woman stepped forward, leaned over the hood of her car and spread her legs in a wide stance before looking back at the stranger.
Allison quickened the pace of her hand, blood now pounding in her ears as she watched the stranger come up behind the woman and kneel down before burying his face in her pussy. The first man was out of the car now, completely naked and taking in the scene as he stroked himself in the sun. Allison’s breath caught as the woman began moaning louder, grinding herself on her lovers willing face. In response the stranger reached up and grabbed her hips, encouraging her. The woman’s moans came to an orgasmic peak and Allison could see her leg shaking involuntarily. The scene was too much for Allison, she leaned forward to grind against her own hand and felt the orgasm flooding through her. Allison let out her own moan, not as loud as the woman’s, but clearly loud enough to be heard across the parking area. Coming down from her orgasm the woman looked over and smiled at Allison, letting out a laugh as she leaned more forward against the hood to let her lover get some air.
In her own afterglow Allison reached down, slid off her bottoms and threw them in the passenger seat. She’d never been naked in a car before but at this point the sexual energy was at such a peak she didn’t care. She leaned back spread her own legs and continued to watch the scene before her.
The stranger was slowly stroking himself and staring at the the woman bent over the car, his face still glistening with her cum, his dick hard as a rock. Allison heard the woman’s voice, indistinguishable, saying something to the stranger and he walked up close behind her still holding his cock. The woman’s ass obscured her view but Allison saw the woman’s mouth open and heard the moan as the stranger slid into her. Sliding two fingers into herself Allison watched as the man began thrusting slowly into the woman, one hand holding her waist, the other on her back, pressing her breasts against the hood of the warm car. The stranger began thrusting faster, his moans joining hers as they moved together.
Forgotten until now, the first man drew Allison’s attention. He’d stepped forward, still on the other side of the car hood, and was stroking so fast his hand was a blur. Soon he began grunting loud enough Allison could hear him over the lovers. She watched in awe as his legs nearly buckled and he thrust his hips forward, his cock twitching and spraying cum across the hood of the car. The sight of his cum spraying in the sunlight, almost hitting the passionate couple across from him, nearly sent Allison over the edge. She felt a surge of pleasure pulse through her as she watched him step back to catch his breath and keep watching.
The stranger appeared encouraged by the first man’s climax and redoubled his thrusts. Now Allison could hear a faint slapping accompanying each thrust. Punctuating the moans. The moans themselves had changed. The woman and the stranger began to sound primal, so full of lust they were oblivious to the world. The stranger moved both hands to the woman’s waist and murmured something. The woman rocked her head back, smiling, and moaned so loud Allison could hear clearly, “yesssssss!” The yell was met with a crescendo of grunts from the stranger and Allison saw the mans ass flex as he grunted “I’m cumming!” Allison heard it and saw the woman’s leg begin to shake again as she met the strangers orgasm with her own. Allison tilted her head back as her orgasm washed over her at the sight of the lovers overcome with lust, sweat glistening off their bodies in the sun.
After that everyone was quiet. The stranger stayed in the woman, bent over and resting on her back, rising and falling together as they caught their breath. Allison looked on as the man stood up and stepped back, letting a flood of cum drip out onto the ground. As the three people collected their clothes and returned to their cars Allison thought to herself, “maybe I’ll come hiking here again!”
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/t8ciji/public_voyeur_long
Really great story… would love a part two…