surrender is freedom
a release felt throughout the cosmos
that reside within this body
i hand over the reins to you
do what you want, Daddy.
trust and a thrill
breathing heavy, screaming shrill
you give me every drop
as i give you my all
again and again
until you command, ‘Stop!”
you say you love my pleading
i say you’re cruel
leaving me aching and needing
even if for a game
its still such a shame
just a moment without your cock
please Daddy, paint my insides with your cum
yes, i’m your cumsult
it shouldn’t be a shock.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/slchry/please_daddy
Very nice free verse, reminds me of what I had, I miss her.