Hey readers, I’ve just “published” my very first short erotic story and I have a handful of promotional 100%-off coupons left, so if anyone’s interested in grabbing a lightly sci-fi/espionage themed story for the price of free, I’d love it if you checked my story out, and I’d REALLY love feedback, since this is my first foray into the genre. Be brutal – let me know if you think I can’t hack it, let me know if you hate something about it but see potential, whatever. Pretend it wasn’t free and let me know if you’d have been pissed off if you’d paid for it! [https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1067492](https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1067492) (There’ll be a yellow “Buy with coupon” button in the upper right until the last of them are gone.)
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/rx52mm/roast_my_first_story