Hi all, so this is my first time writing for others to see – constructive criticism always welcome
Chapter 1 – A new awakening
As The man walked into the the bar on this crisp night, he commanded my attention straight away. He stood about 6ft 2″ tall wearing a Matt looking dark blue suit complemented by his expensive looking brogues, his crisp white shirt unbuttoned enough to show a hairy patch on his chest but reserved enough to not look silly. He sat down at the bar 2 seats away from and ordered a scotch on the rocks , I watched him for a moment ” Hard day?” I asked, he looked at me said nothing then downed his scotch and started to make his way to the parking lot… Now I am usually a reserved woman who shy’s away from strangers but not tonight, fuelled by an afternoon of drinks due to me losing my job at the accountants I USED TO WORK AT I was determined to not have this man treat me the way he just did.
I grabbed my coat and purse and headed after him, “Hey asshole..” I shouted across the parking lot, he stopped dead and stood there facing away from me, realising just how cold and sobering the weather was my heart started to beat hard in my chest, small sweat droplets formed between my breasts.. he turned suddenly and slowly started walking towards me, covered in shadows from the dim lit street lamps of the parking lot.
I was determined to stand my ground and show no fear.., he walked till he was about 2 feet away and stopped… His cologne swept over me , hints of wood and vintage tabacco..god he smelt good.
“Your either incredibly stupid or incredibly smart..” what’s this guys problem… But I stood my ground ” all I asked you was how your day is going, and you couldn’t even grace me with an answer?” He stood motionless staring at me , my heart was beating out my chest now and I felt a familiar heat between my legs why was I getting turned on.., before I had a chance to comprehend the situation his hand had latched to my throat.. “listen lady unless your gonna use that pretty mouth of yours to make my night better fuck off”.
now, I do not for the life of me know why but I moaned softly, now up untill now my sex life has been pretty vanilla tried anal once or twice but just pretty standard as standards go, a second later I feel his hand on my pussy almost lifting me off my feet, I instinctively reached for his cock and there it was, his long rock hard cock straining against his suit pants…
First time writer, let me know if you like it so far… If it gets received well I’ll continue the story.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/rkl0zc/a_new_awakening_fm