First time writing and posting. Feedback welcome!
I’ve been fantasizing about you since the first day we met. It took me weeks to find the courage to start flirting with you, but once we began it was oh so easy. It’s almost embarrassing to admit how often I’ve touched myself imagining it’s your hands slowly working up my thighs to part my warm, wet pussy. How many times I’ve slid my fingers into myself and brought myself to orgasm all while holding your sexy face in my mind.
I dream about you fisting your hand in my hair, exposing my neck to your lips. I want so badly to have your lips and tongue on me. To feel you kiss me. To feel you run your hands all over my body. I want your fingers inside me, moving in and out until you make me cum. I want to watch you lick my sweet juices off your fingers.
I long to kneel in front of you and worship you cock with my mouth. To feel your length in the back of my throat. I’d suck, lick and kiss your gorgeous dick with my warm willing mouth until you pour yourself into me. I promise I’ll swallow every drop.
You would always tell me you loved to eat pussy… I dream about you licking and teasing my clit with that quick tongue. Burying your face in my hot pussy while you slid a finger in my tight ass. I get so wet thinking about you licking and fingering me until I scream your name and am begging you to fuck me.
In my fantasies you wrap your strong hands around my throat and make me beg over and over for your hard cock.
Once I’ve satisfied your demands you oh so slowly slide the head of your dick inside me. I imagine how good it will feel with that first thrust driving your entire cock inside me. My dripping pussy clenches around you and we begin to move. So slowly at first but quickly building to hard demanding fucking. I cum again and again as you make me yours.
I fear you are becoming an obsession, one I can’t quit until I can have you.
My mind, my heart and my body aches because I know I never will, you will forever be my unfulfilled fantasy.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/qtj7oi/unfulfilled_fantasy_mf
If this is really your first writing then please keep writing more. It’s quite well written and your spelling is good, which is often not the case. A little more descriptive sentences would be great eg. how he felt sliding down your throat, how you felt when his hand could control you so easily…
I’ve been writing dark (actually so dark it could be black lol) and twisted erotica for a few years and you def held my interest. Maybe expand it to include an actual meet….
Excellent writing and such a hot story !!! Can’t wait to read more !!!
!updateme!