Hello everyone.
I am brand new to erotic writing and I actually wrote this as a role play, but anyway, if there are no takers to it I am very tempted to develop it into a story maybe even a screenplay. Enough of my yabbering, enjoy…
*As Rita peers to her cork pin board hanging on the wall, she scans each of the plumber business cards until she spots one attached with a photo. An athletic but well built chap, a secret photo of him wearing just jeans and a pair of gloves tightening a large outside valve with a wrench, the name below saying ‘Mark’. Rita standing in her lounge looks back towards her kitchen as she holds a spanner wearing only a silk gown. A set of pipes start to fizz and spit water around a joint, water seeps out onto the worktops and floor.*
*Rita grabs the phone and dials the business card number, it rings… ‘Hello?’ Rita says as it’s answered ‘Hello, Mark the Plumber here, how can I help you?’, ‘Yeah, I’m having some trouble in my kitchen. Well, there I was buttering my toasted scone, and then suddenly the pipes on the wall started to leak’. Mark has a thought for a moment ‘How much are they leaking?’ Rita responds ‘Hmm, it’s kind of making a mess, it’s quite bad I’d say, is this normal? I mean I know nothing about plumbing’. At that moment the pipe starts to burst around the nut, Mark hears it on the phone ‘Good lord, that sounds pretty bad, ok lady, whats your address?’, Rita replies with ‘545, 69th Street, apartment 127’ as she bites her lip, Mark pauses for a moment and then reassuringly says ‘Good, I’ll be there in 15 minutes, see you soon’. They both put the phone down as the water starts to flood the floor.*
*She decides to tighten the pipe slightly, just to stop it flooding too much, she checks the other pipe joints and the flow valve in the cupboard to make sure it’s still on. She then stands back and nods in satisfaction. Rita starts to peer out of the window to the parking lot, she remembers Marks bright yellow van from her stalking session a couple of weeks ago. She cannot contain her excitement as she lightly touches herself over her silk gown. The yellow van arrives in the parking lot, she smiles in delight and runs to the door. As Mark gets out the van, she stands in position at the front door and drops the gown off of herself.*
*Mark walks towards the door and rings the doorbell, he is calm and even though it’s an urgent job, he has all the tools ready to fix whatever faces him, it’s not a big deal as he whistles while he waits. Rita slowly opens the door, he doesn’t even have a chance to say hello when he notices Rita’s naked body on full display. His jaw wants to drop, but his professional manner takes over. ‘Hello…. I’m here to check out your pipe?’. There is an awkward silence, but Rita replies in a very soft tone ‘Well of course you are, come in and take a look’. She welcomes him in and he heads straight for the kitchen, very apprehensive, he isn’t sure what to think.*
*He spots the leaking pipes on the wall, then he walks over to investigate further, he traces the pipework through the work top ‘May I take a look in this cupboard?’ he asks, ‘Why sure, what is it your looking for? The stop cock?’ she says in a suggestive tone. Feeling even more apprehensive, he opens the cupboard door and starts to clear space to find the valve. He then reaches back to his tool bag searching for his adjustable spanner. Surprisingly, he can’t find it, he looks back to see in the bag and then looks up in shock and awe.*
*Rita is standing right in front of him with his spanner in her hands. She starts to slowly lick the chrome handle, and then begins to rub it down her chest, across her belly button and just touches down below before heading back up.*
*’I really like a man with big tools, are you gonna torque me up?’ She says suggestively. Mark looks away for a minute and then says, ‘…it’s feeling awfully hot in here, like your heating is stuck on, would you like me to check that out too?’.*
Many Thanks!!
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/otx275/short_unfinished_erotic_story_the_plumber