>*(as the title suggests, this came to me in a dream. very new to writing erotica, so my apologies if it’s not super juicy. would like to maybe come back to it in the future.)*
You were in my dream again, only this time, I remember.
You say we’re in Montreal but how should I know? I’ve never been. It looks like a film set; cardboard storefronts and hundreds of people babbling about in French.
I’m wearing a skimpy black dress underneath my winter coat, which swallows my tiny frame. I can’t remember your face.
We take a turn down a cobblestone street and the adult theater is in front of us. An old white man pushes past us as we enter. His fly is still down.
You rent a private room. It costs you $50. We ascend a creaky staircase to the second floor and enter through velvet curtains. The lights are dim, romantic almost.
You ask if I want something to eat.
“No,” I laugh, while pulling off my coat. Porn and popcorn aren’t really my thing. I still can’t remember your face but I’m flushed, embarrassed. When was the last time I dressed up like this? Have I ever?
I lean over the railing separating us from the rest of the theater and flash you my pink thong. Below us, couples quietly take their seats. You join me momentarily. I’m amazed with your self-control.
The picture starts so we take our seats on the small couch. On screen, a man laps hungrily at a woman’s cunt. She screams in pleasure. I hear a cry from the audience down below, clearly enjoying themselves. My stomach twists as I pretend to watch.
You put your hand on my knee and start to play with my fishnets. I smirk, wondering if you’ll go further. Such a gentleman, no, you pause to gauge my reaction. Our eyes meet as I sink back into the couch. Cautiously, I reach up to play with your hair. You shudder at my soft touch. My nerves are on fire and it’s a wonder I can focus on this one task.
You wait for me to make the first move.
I lean in, our lips meet. And it’s all over.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/omcyxt/you_were_in_my_dream_again_only_this_time_i
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