I post this just for people to read it. It is the first story I have written in my life (the first and it has to be a pornographic one, wow). It is written without any experience, so some parts can be laughable or nonsensical. In addition to letting me know if you liked it, I would like you to comment on my way of writing, I ask for advice to improve writing skills; Give me your observations, if you can. That’s all.
– “Well, let’s go!” – Linda tells me, her arms are folded and her face is indifferent with shades of impatience.
Linda is a pretty nice twenty year old girl. She’s my coworker; a party girl, outgoing and who has no problem saying whatever comes to her mind even if it sounds rough. From time to time she uses rude and sometimes double meaning language that tends to annoy me, but it’s nothing that I can’t bear. She is completely different from me: quiet, almost asocial, with a more respectful and literal language that that prefers to go unnoticed.
She just dragged me from my workplace during break time, put me in a spacious mixed bathroom with her, away from the offices and… asked me to allow her to perform oral sex on me.
– “Come on, I know you’re of legal age, there should be no problem.” -She reminds me. – “I wouldn’t ask you if I knew you wouldn’t accept.” –
Certainly, I don’t know Linda very much. I went to work in a notary’s office a couple of months ago, however, I am not really hired. I help make the work of several employees easier, in addition to constantly organizing a warehouse where they keep thousands, if not millions of documents and I get paid for it. I have not had a very long interaction with her; I’d say we get along, but we’re not friends.
As much as I wanted to keep my pride intact and disprove her last sentence, I certainly want to have that experience. Something so strange that it looks like a hentai episode. Plus, it would just be oral sex, right? I am not committing myself to anything.
– “Why would you ask me for something like that?” – I’m still determined to keep my pride. – “We’re not even close enough to be friends. And it’s certainly not that I like you very much. I mean, I do like you, but- ”she cuts me off, leaving my sentence unfinished.
– “Listen,” – she begins, sheepishly and softly, – “I recently broke up with my boyfriend. I had a fairly long relationship with him and yes, we had sex, without a doubt, the best that he could offer. ” At this point, I begin to deduce what she is about to tell me. “But lately I’ve been feeling a little needy for, you know, ‘love’” .- she says as she makes quotes with her hands. “And even though I have better friends than you, they are all married in their thirties or boys with a girlfriend.”
I admit that the last sentence offended me a bit, but she is right. I open my mouth, trying to find the right words to deny the request when she approaches me, involuntarily (or maybe not) giving me a view of her cleavage, she puts her hands on my chest, looks at me and begs me one more time. – “John, I know we don’t even know each other well enough to be friends, but, beyond letting me see that you are a charming boy, respectful and determined to help others, I find you very cute to be pleasant” .
At this point, I try with my whole being to refuse to give in; I can’t do something like that. All my principles screamed at me to reject her and get out. However, the lust along with the flattery from her binds me like shackles on my wrists and makes me stay in the same place. – “Fine” – I give in.
Linda takes a couple of steps back and exclaims, -“Good! Let’s do it! ”-. I slide down the toilet seat to sit down and start to pull down my pants. My penis is already erect, eager for the promised gift. Before I can pull my underwear down, she is ahead of me; she kneels down as she grabs the elastic of my boxers and pulls them down for me, exposing my penis. “Oh” – she says – “very … hairy.”
“Damn”, I think. If I had known that she would be doing me this favor right now this morning, I would have trimmed my hair. “I’m sorry,” I whisper with all the shame of the world.
“It’s okay,” she answers me and she gives me a funny look as she takes my member and begins to gently masturbate it. I can no longer sit. Linda lets me know, “I’m going to start. Just let me know when you are coming ”. That said, she begins to gently lick the tip of my penis, just enough to send a shiver through my entire body that makes me shudder. I try not to make embarrassing noises but a sigh escapes me. She shoots me a look but she continues to lick my penis, wrapping her tongue around it. I just look up so as not to meet her gaze, holding my hands behind my back. After a few seconds licking, she starts sucking the head of my phallus. The intensity of the pleasure I feel intensifies. This time I don’t hold back and let out a slight moan, but she doesn’t flinch and she continues to suck, sucking more and more of my penis until she puts it whole inside her mouth. She increases the rhythm and intensity of sucking while I feel a pleasure that I never felt. I am about to ejaculate.
– “Linda, I -!” – She stops sucking but continues masturbating while she takes a piece of toilet paper, folds it and places it on the tip of my penis. When I ejaculate, all my semen stays on the toilet paper that she throws away once I stop cumming.
I sit on the toilet, panting, while Linda gets up. She approaches me and leans down a little trying to look into my eyes, but I look away. “Thanks, John”, she whispers to me. “No need”, I reply blushing. She then straightens up and walks out the door.
– “Prune the area a little for next time, okay?” – she tells me before leaving.
– “Next time!?” – I asked surprised.
– “Don’t you want to do it again?” –
– “Eh … Well, yes … I would like to.”-
“Very well!” she exclaims and smiles at me. Then she leaves, leaving me alone in the bathroom. I lean on the toilet tank, thinking.
What the heck just happened!?
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