I shut the door behind me and let out a sigh of relief. *Finally, I am home for the weekend.* I’d just finished a 12 hour day at work and was so tired I was tempted to simply head to bed right away. I hung up my coat and took off my shoes, resolving to do just that, when I heard my girlfriend call out from the kitchen.
“Josh, is that you?”
I started down the hallway towards the bedroom and replied, “Hey Ally, yeah, it’s me. I might skip dinner tonight, I’m beat.”
But before I reached the door I heard her laugh, “Oh, I’m pretty sure you’re not gonna want to miss dinner tonight.” I could almost hear that coy smile of hers in her voice, and I immediately turned around to go to the kitchen. *What’s she up to this time?*
As I got closer I could hear the clinking of dishes and she seemed to be humming softly. I rounded the corner and stopped dead in my tracks. There she was, setting the table like she did every night, but instead of her usual t-shirt and shorts she wearing a small black apron that barely covered her crotch. I couldn’t see her bra or panties, and I didn’t know if it was because of the apron or if she simply wasn’t wearing any. But I could see her sheer black stockings with floral lace tops, and the sleek black garter belt straps that were holding them up. They disappeared beneath the apron, and all I wanted was to rip that skimpy thing off to see what was underneath.
Ally looked up at me, grinning, “Well hello there. You like what you see?” She reached behind her and I heard a loud *snap* of a garter strap slapping against her ass. I didn’t bother replying and rushed forward. I was already hard, and all I wanted was to push her up against a wall and pull down that apron to bury my face in her tits.
She put up a hand to stop me, “Oh no no no. You have to WAIT.” *Fuck that, I want her now.* I continued forward. Quickly, she pulled out a chair and moved it to the side of her. WhenI was close enough she reached up to grab my shoulders and pushed down HARD, forcing me into the chair. I started to stand up again, and she slapped me playfully, “Josh, the fuck did I just say?”
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/mbnfff/first_attempt_at_erotica_feedback_is_much
Haha, this is very cute! Are you going to continue the story?
It is cute and I must say, kept me wanting to know more about this writer.