Hey guys, this is my second story about us. Please give me any feedback good or bad.
Some backgrounf on us from out last story: I’m Lexi(18F) I’m 5’3″ and very petite. I have long brown hair and eyes. In this story im wearing short athletic short, tight ones, and a crop topMy bf is J(18M) hes 5’10” and very muscular with blonde hair and blues eye. He was wearing boxer shorts
“I want to try something more” i said sitting on my bf’s lap. We were on his couch making out and dry humping like we had the day before. “like what?” he asked. “Oral?” I questioned. “Sure” he grinned, picking me up and caring me to his room.
“I want to give it to you first” I said as he laid me down. “Really? Why?” he asked “I just do now go get a shower first” I stated. He gave me a mischivious grin and walked into the bathroom.
I got more and more horny just sitting there waiting for him. I had never done this before and was a little nervous, maybe I should’ve let him go first. Oh well to late now. I slid my hand over my thin shorts “how am I so wet?” I mumbled as my bf walked out the bathroom door.
“Ready? How do you want to do this?” he asked “I guess sit there” I pointed to the end of the bed.
I knelt in front of him and pulled his shorts down before he sat all the way down. I had never seen a penis in real life before and J’s didn’t dissapoint, at almost seven inches long and pretty thick I was a little worried about doing this.
“It’s okay Baby” he said, he must have noticed my shocked face. “If you don’t-”
“No it’s okay” I cut him off, “it’s just so big”
He chuckled as he tucked a loose strand of hair behind my ear. He slowly took my hand and wrapped it around his dick, it was large red and glistening with pre cum. I began to stroke him and I heard him sigh with pleasure. He ran his finger through my messy bun and coaxed my head toward his cock.
I slipped my mouth over the head of his cock and he moaned “oh baby that’s it”
I started bobbing my head up and down, I didn’t know what i was doing but he seemed to like it. Pretty soon my jaw got tired and I started to lick it like a lollie pop. First his shaft then his head, then back to his shaft till my jaw felt better. Pretty soon my mouth was back over his cock, I could get a good 5 inches in my mouth till I felt like gagging.
J was having the time of his life, he was moaning softly and still playing with my hair, although my messy bun was just a mess of brown hair at this point.
“I’m close” he mumbled as I sucked away. I wasn’t sure if he wanted to swallow it or not. Frankly, I wasn’t sure either.
“Babe wai-” I had just taken my mouth off to see what he wanted when he shot his stream. I jerked my head back asit went in my mouth and all over my face.
“I’m so sorry” he gasped as he ran to get a washcloth. “I’m so sorry babe” he said as he came back and started wiping he cum off my face
“It’s okay” I giggled “besides it doesn’t taste to bad” I said as I licked the last bit off my hands
“so you’re okay” he asked
“Yes silly” I said and kissed him “now it’s your turn”
His smile returned as he pushed me back onto the bed. He layed on top of me and began kissing me passionatly has his hand drifted down. I felt his hand slide over my shorts across the wet spot. “you’re so hot” he whispered. I guided his hand inside my shorts and panties, I moaned into his neck as his fingers traced over my shaved and wet slit. “Yes baby” I begged. He began to circle my clit and I felt a familliar tingle well up inside me
He pushed my shirt up and kissed down my belly I was so turned on a that moment. When he got to my shorts he slid them and my thong down at the same time. “come on plaeease” I rushed him along, pushing his head down.
He took a long lick up mu pussy as I shivered with pleasure, he did it again, and again. He the put his mouth over my clit and stated sucking. “Oh baby” I moaned, my legs were wrapped around his head and I was pulling his head into me. I squeeked and squealed as he brought me to orgasm. When I had finished and finally relaxed he crawled up beside me and cuddled me. “How was that?” he asked me “great” I mumbled as I driffed off to sleep
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/m6mi3o/first_time_oral_real_story
This feels so raw and personal, I love it! Really hot. I like that a lot of it is just casual language woven in, that makes it really comfortable and relatable, you know?