One of my first attempts at erotica, and the first one I’m actually posting anywhere, so I’d love to hear what people think. It ran considerably longer than I anticipated, so this is just the first half. Enjoy.
[Okay, actual story now]
This trip was exactly what they needed, a chance to get away from their jobs and families and just unwind. The three of them had been close friends since their twenties, and had grown only closer in the two decades since.
The hotel was nice, but not too fancy. They’d saved a lot of money by going in the off-season, with the added benefit that there weren’t too many people around. In fact, that night as they sat in the hot tub they found they had the entire area to themselves.
There was Janice, the health nut, slim and fit with short hair that she’d sooner die than admit wasn’t naturally blond. She had the body to show off, and dressed appropriately in a black halter-topped bikini. Sitting to her right was Sharon, her long mousy brown hair tied up to keep it out of the water. The years had put a few extra pounds on her, but to her fortune she carried a lot of it in her chest and butt, wrapped now in a very modest red two-piece bathing suit Finally with short dark curly hair, there was Cathy, the largest of the three women. Her size hadn’t come with age, rather she had always been and quite content to be “fat and happy.” She had poured herself into a simple one-piece suit, it was… blue.
They sat there in the whirling water, talking about old times and sipping tropical drinks. The conversation soon turned to their sordid affairs, or rather unsordid, as it seemed to revolve around the things they hadn’t done.
“You’ve never taken in the backdoor?” Sharon asked in sly surprise.
“No,” replied Cathy, “that’s weird… and Bob’s way too big to fit back there?”
The other women eyed her, finally Janice asked what they were both thinking. “How big IS he?”
Cathy held up her hands about six inches apart, then slowly started moving them out to the familiar length of her husband’s cock as a grin crept across her face.
Sharon splashed at her, “Oh come on, he is not!”
“Swear to God,” replied Cathy, “Not an inch less and thick as my wrist.” She put her hand around her wrist to illustrate her point, “Maybe a little thicker.”
“Well, I don’t think I’ll ever look at Bob the same way again,” Sharon said before taking a long sip of her drink.
Feeling like she’d suddenly put herself in the spotlight, Cathy turned the topic to her friends. “What about you two, how big are your guys’ things?”
Sharon and Janice thought for a second and both held up their hands fairly average lengths apart before all three collapsed in a fit of giggles over the absurdity of suddenly all knowing the size of each other’s husbands’ dicks.
Once the laughter subsided Janice kept things rolling, “So, what else HAVEN’T we done? Sex in public?” both women shook their heads, “I suppose none of us have been with another woman.”
“Nope,” said Cathy.
“I don’t think I’ve ever even seen another woman’s vagina” laughed Sharon.
“I’m not sure I’ve even seen mine,” replied Cathy with a chuckle.
Janice raised an eyebrow, “What, you’ve never just accidentally SEEN another woman in the locker room or something like that?”
Sharon thought for a moment, “Well yeah, but that’s just a little bit, I’ve never seen like, the whole thing up close.”
“Oh,” replied Janice, “In that case, neither have I.”
After a brief laugh the three grew silent. Here they were in this hot tub, nobody around, dressed in bathing suits, they were all thinking it, but waiting for someone else to suggest it.
Finally Cathy broke the silence. “Well… we could just like… show each other,” she managed to spit out while avoiding eye contact. And after a few seconds of without response blurting out “No, nevermind, I’m sorry, that’s weird.”
Finally, Sharon replied, “I mean, we’re all adults, there’s nothing weird about looking at each other’s bodies right?”
“Absolutely not,” chimed in Janice, “If anything it’s healthy curiosity.” “So, who goes first?”
The three friends looked at each other in silence. “Well it was Cathy’s idea,” Sharon eventually brought up.
Cathy’s cheeks flushed, she looked at her friends waiting for her response. Eventually she managed to sputter out a reply, “O… okay, but you have to promise that you’ll do it too.” Once both women had sworn oaths that were sufficient to convince Cathy of their intent to comply, Cathy climbed up onto the edge of the hot tub and timidly spread her legs. She looked away and grabbed the edge of her bathing suit, then with a quick “I can’t believe I’m doing this,” pulled it to the side.
Sharon and Janice gazed intently into the dark curly hair between their friend’s legs. “Can we… get a little closer?” asked Sharon.
“Um… yeah, fine,” Cathy replied, “Just hurry up.”
The two women floated over and looking closer could see her plump outer lips meeting together in a single clean slit through her crotch. “Could you maybe… spread it a little?” asked Janice.
“Oh jeez, are you serious?” asked Cathy, face growing redder by the second.
“Please?” added Sharon.
Cathy sighed, “Fine.” She reached down and gently parted her mound, revealing her thin pink inner lips, pressed together and meeting under her hood. Cathy’s friends just looked on silently, they had never imagined this was what Cathy’s vagina looked like, they had never really considered it before at all. By this point Cathy was beet red and running out of new levels of embarrassment. “Okay, that’s enough!” she said before covering herself and slipping back into the water, “who’s next?”
Sharon and Janice just sat there quietly. “You… both promised!,” Cathy sputtered out nervously. She was already imagining the two of them telling everyone about the dumb thing stupid Cathy did on their trip when Sharon pulled herself up on the edge.
“Okay, I guess I’m up,” she said nervously.
Cathy and Janice moved in closer as she pulled her bottom aside. Water dripped from the thin carpet of brown hair as they eyed every fold. Her lips were thick, and darker than the surrounding skin, completely different from Cathy. Sharon reached down and gave them a light tug, “I guess I’ve got a bit more down there, but nobody’s ever complained,” she said with a sly smile before letting them fall back into place. Unlike Cathy, Sharon looked directly at her friends as she exposed herself. If anything it felt liberating, like she had been keeping a secret from them that was finally revealed.
“Could you… spread it a little? Cathy sheepishly asked.
Sharon considered it, “Well,” she eventually said, “one good turn and all that.” She reached down and gently pulled her labia apart, Cathy couldn’t help but think that it looked like a butterfly spreading its wings. After holding it for a bit, she let them snap back together, covered herself, and reentered the water. “Well Janice, you’re the only one left,” she said with a smile.
“And now we finally get to see if you’re a natural blond,” added Cathy, provoking a laugh from all three women.
“Oh you think so?” Janice said as she stood up. She hooked her thumbs under the sides of her bikini bottom and yanked them down. When she straightened herself, Cathy and Sharon found themselves staring in defeat at her completely bald crotch. “Well girls,” she said patting her mound, “I guess the mystery remains.”
“You naughty girl,” said Sharon, “I never would have expected.”
Janice just smiled as she sat down on the edge of the hot tub, raising one leg and resting her foot beside her. “Well,” she said gesturing towards her pussy, “Come take a gander.”
They moved in and saw exactly what they were expecting, tight, thin, perfectly symmetrical lips, a perfect shade of light pink sticking out of the smooth tanned flesh surrounding it. It was a very “Janice” vagina. As they watched, she pulled on her mound and let it snap back with a slight jiggle. “Well girls,” she smirked, “what do you think?”
They both thought she was showing off, but chose to keep that to themselves. “Looks great Janice,” Sharon said politely.
“How much did all of that cost?” asked Cathy, prompting a series of playful swats from Sharon.
Janice just smiled, “this is all natural,” she said in an intentionally ambiguous tone, “you can touch it if you want.”
“Are you serious?,” asked Sharon.
“Sure, there’s nothing wrong with that,” Janice replied casually, “Just don’t go inside me or anything like that.”
“Yeah no, I’m good,” said Cathy, holding her hands up and returning to her seat at the other side of the hot tub.
Sharon kept her eyes fixed on Janice, a strange anticipation building inside her. She reached out her hand and gently brushed along the outside of Janice’s lips with her finger. It was so smooth and soft that she got chills. She ran her finger down the center, the soft lips parting slightly as she did. Deep inside she felt that this was as far as she could go, she lowered her hand back into the water and just started for a few more moments.
[End of part 1]
As I said, things ran much longer than I had intended, so part 2 coming soon, and a maybe follow up if people like the story. Also, [follow me on Twitter if you want](https://twitter.com/GD_Effing).
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/lq4ubs/girls_trip_part_1_fffolder_womenexhibitionism
Great first go if it is.
Really great descriptions of the women all very distinctive. The conversation and what they say seems quite natural and a good fit for the story as well.
I like how it’s written, and not in a porn style