(First time writing, mostly looking to just share for fun and also get some honest feedback on the overall writing. This is a real encounter, written with a slight male-perspective slant. My new wife and I love talking and reminiscing about our many wild sexual experiences together, so i thought I’d finally put some in type, with some input from her included. This is one section from a larger story, so there may be a couple details that might seem out of context. Thank you for reading and hope you enjoy it as much as we did experiencing it ha)::
Although the open segment of the poorly lit bathroom was barely large enough to fit two people standing side by side, the shower itself was quite spacious. It had an extremely narrow entryway, but it opened up into a square chamber, which was covered from floor to ceiling with glowing white tiles. It was always more than enough space for the two of them to shower together and move around comfortably inside. Heather kept herself steady with one hand on the outer wall of the shower as she leaned in to turn the water on. Unable to reach the handle without stepping in, she lifted one of her long, toned legs off the ground to make the far stretch to give the handle a turn. The prolonged stretch showed off the full extent of the large, elegant tattoo that twisted all along her hip, ass and thigh. Undenounced to her, drowned out by the loud hum of the heavy rains outside, Aaron had already stepped into the doorway of the bathroom and was standing with his shoulder leaning against the wall. He smiled as he observed and admired every movement she made with her enticing hips and legs during the effort. Seeing this one simple act alone was enough to awaken a huge rush of blood to his groin and forced an unintended audible grunt of approval to come from his throat, which let her know that he was behind her.
She looked back over her shoulder, glancing at him with her slate-colored bedroom eyes and smudged eyeliner, giving him only a simple acknowledgment, “Oh…hello there stranger”, followed by a gentle bite on her plushy lower lip and a quick shy grin as she turned her attention back to the water.
Knowing full well that Aaron’s eyes were still dead locked onto the luscious curves of her backside, she began the very deliberate removal of her bikini. Using only her thumbs, she inched the solid black, velvet bottoms down and rested them snuggly under the perfectly horizontal shelf at the base of her ample ass. It revealed her symmetrical V-shaped tan line, which seemed to glow brilliantly in contrast with the rest of her sun-soaked body. With her hands now propped on the both sides of the shower opening, Heather shimmied her hips ever so slightly and began to work the material further down with her legs, locked upright and almost completely closed tight. She angled the upper half of her body deeper inside the dark shower and began to slither her hips up and down like slow moving pistons, moving the bikini further down with every shift. The anticipation was almost too much for Aaron to bare as he watched, fully mesmerized. With every bit of progress she made on moving the bikini lower, he could feel yet another rush filling into his shaft, forcing it to extend further and further down his inner thigh. The bikini finally dropped to her ankles and Aaron was left staring motionlessly and in complete awe. The only thing left in his line of sight was the enticing rainbow arch of her broad hips leading down the long path of her seemingly endless legs. The alluring stance allowed only a tiny focused glimpse of her delicate mound peeking out from the small gap between her thighs. It took every bit of restraint he had in order to stop himself from mounting her on the spot. Aaron was speechless and felt extremely fortunate to receive the exquisite visual gift she had presented to him. He wondered how he could even possibly desire her any more than he already did at that moment.
Breaking the silent standoff, she declared softly in a sultry voice,” I think the water is just right in here now,” then she defiantly stood up and abruptly disappeared into the shower. She closed the translucent curtain behind her and left Aaron standing alone in the bathroom.
He undoubtedly needed to join her inside of the shower after seeing her in all of her glory. As he began to undo the string tie on his surfing baggies, multiple strikes of lightning flashed and thundered outside the window. Heather pulled open a small peep hole in the shower curtain and peered out. With his attention on the window and the storm outside, he continued to slowly pull down the wet shorts as she covertly watched in wonder. Although she had many experiences with it already, the rather prolonged exposing of his length still left her holding her breath as his heavy cock was unfurling in front of her eyes like a fountain of skin. His length finally released with a gentle bounce and began to swing between his legs. The thought of him soon putting it inside of her instantly triggered her eyes to roll back into her head and a lump to form in her throat.
Clearing her airway, with her eyes still fixated on his generous manhood, she got his attention by asking him “I’m going to be in a lot of trouble, aren’t I?”
“What do you mean?” he said, turning back towards the sound of her voice and then realizing immediately what she was referring to simply by seeing the direction of her hungry gaze.
“Oh that. Yes, you can bet that by the end of this day, it will be punishing you dearly.”, he warned with a devilish smirk on his face.
Heather opened the curtain fully and motioned for him to enter. He stepped in and immediately wrapped his arms around her. Their lips locked into a long and deep, passionate kiss. He then whispered into her ear letting her know just how much he loved and desired everything about her. Covered in salt from there beach romp, they began the ritual of taking turns cleaning every inch of each other’s bodies as they always did during their routinely joint showers. She lathered his toned shoulders, chest and torso, admiringly swirling finger trails of soap throughout his body hair. She knelt down in front of him, running the suds up and down the length of his legs in broad twisting motions. With his phallus dangling in front of her face, she angled both her arms under the bridge of his legs to lather his tightened cheeks. She then scratched downward to his hamstring and pressed a single, long, puckered kiss to the broad head of his penis. Rising up to meet him face to face once again, she leaned in and locked eyes with Aaron. She placed her forehead against his with the intention of getting an up-close viewing of his reactions as she grabbed him. Knowing Aaron’s preference for rough and painful attention to his cock, she strangled his girth with as much force as she could muster. Both of her hands began to milk him in forceful downward strokes. With each long tug, the mixture of pain and pleasure forced Aaron to let out animalistic grunts. She found the sounds exhilarating and it inspired her to work even more passionately on him. His groans quickened as she choked, twisted and molested his cock even more vigorously. After only a short while, the combination of sensations created by her talented hands became so intense that it made his knees weak and had already brought him to feel the first twinges of an oncoming orgasm. He abruptly backed up and forcefully yanked himself away from her. She was left with her hands empty and reaching to grab ahold once again.
“No, no, no, my little brat.” he scolded, “If you keep going like that, you are going to ruin me. I don’t want to cum just yet.”
“But I love hearing and feeling you explode in my hands,” she begged with her lips pouting,” and I was so looking forward to seeing your mess dripping down my fingers and legs.”
“Don’t you worry, you’ll get to receive your mess soon enough.” Aaron commanded as he grabbed the soap.
He found himself fascinated with every curve and niche of her body as he began to clean and explore her. He slowly lathered along her arms and down to her hips. He squatted down in front of her and began slowly massaging and tracing the soap along her smooth legs. After inspecting the barely visible bare slit directly in front of his face, he glanced up to make a connection with her beautiful eyes. He peered through the cleavage of her gently rocking breasts as he gave her hidden clit several firm licks in a come-hither motion. It sent a flush of warmth throughout her body and caused her to shutter. Only wanting to give her pussy an initial tease, he brought his face and hands up to give her breasts some deserving attention. Within only seconds, the gentle sucking and caressing on her hard nipples immediately began to overwhelm her, forcing her to slump towards him with weakness.
“Oh my god that feels insanely good. They are so fucking sensitive today”, she said apologetically with a look of slight shame on her face,” I love it when you explore with your mouth, but I do need to wash my hair, baby.”
Without hesitation, he spun her around and resumed wandering with his mouth and hands on her backside before the shampoo interfered. He moved down to her ass to give it a few playful love bites, while his fingers dug aggressively down her arched back and around her waistline. While she shampooed, Aaron felt enthralled with feel of her soap covered skin in his hands and it compelled him to press his lower body against hers. Before long, the smooth friction between them as they pressed together was more than enough to bring his dick to full attention. As Heather began lathering the chunky curls of her hair with an abundance of conditioner, he pushed his hardened shaft snugly into her closed thigh gap. The clumps of excess conditioner dripped all over her body and made the long trip down the channel of her spine and then directly into the pocket where he had inserted himself. The new slick sensation felt exquisite, prompting them to buck mutually against each other. Moving in unison, they created a pattern of long strokes in which the wide tip of his cock would fully part her slender pussy from end to end. With every repetition, the curvature of his length pressed and glided firmly against her clit, and then exited where she could clearly see him protruding out in front of her. The tease of penetration built an even greater anticipation for her to finally take him inside of her, but she knew that he would take her only when he was ready.
Without looking back at him, Heather brought everything to a halt by reaching between her legs with one hand to cup his taught testicles. She then grudgingly forced her sharp fingernails directly into his soft taint with such force that it nearly drew blood. Aaron’s only response was a loud, shuttering grunt of approval, allowing her to continue without objection. Keeping the painful pressure constant, she dragged her razor-like tips up through the ripples of his sack, incising the entire underside of his shaft, and then ending with a surgical flick off of the pinnacle of his tip. She accosted his length several more times, with every pass making him even harder than the one before. The end result left his manhood so engorged that the moment she moved forward, his cock sprung upward and slapped his stomach, with it seemingly reaching for the ceiling above. She backed herself against him once again, now trapping the spectacle between the rift of her cheeks. He spread her cheeks open began rubbing the angry veins of his shaft up and down against her asshole.
“It has taken me months to finally accommodate that big thing in my pussy comfortably…do you really think you are going to fit that in my ass?”, she asked rhetorically, sensing that it was undoubtedly what he wanted to do and that she would never deny him regardless of her concerns.
Giving no response, Aaron continued grinding himself lengthwise. Her puckered asshole began to involuntarily flex against him from the friction. He looked down to see that pre-cum had already been pouring out from atop his flushed head. The conditioner had also drenched it, giving it the appearance of being covered in icing. Although he had never experienced his cock quite this hard or swollen, he thought that surely the combination of his own natural lube and the conditioner together would be more than enough to allow for him to initially enter her. Aaron reached down and grabbed both of Heather’s wrists, then forced them up to an elevated spot on the tile wall above her. Anticipating exactly what was expected of her, she spread her legs adequately and presented herself to him in a tripod stance. She was propped perfectly, with a full open view of her magnificent, upturned cheeks at the bottom of her elegantly sloped back. He grasped himself at his base and poised his curved, veiny slab against her entrance. Flush with an unimaginable amount of blood, his manhood appeared nearly purple in contrast with the color of her tiny pastel pink button. He attempted his first push cautiously and managed little more than to make a slight dent in the top of his mushroomed head. He gathered more lube around his tip and made a second, more aggressive attempt to enter. Heather panted heavily and continued to brace herself in anticipation. Each push forced her to squeal in distress, but she did not retreat. After several more failed hearty attempts, Aaron began to wonder if he would ever be to breach the threshold of her impossibly tight asshole. Unwilling to concede to possibility of not being able to experience her in this way, he squeezed one more large puddle of conditioner directly onto his still rock-hard tip and gave one last slow, but forceful thrust.
As this point, time stood still for both of them. The loud and struggled encounter became completely motionless. With the exception of the heavy drum of rain outside and the patter of shower water hitting the wall, the chamber had gone silent. The quiet was broken by the onset of Heather’s panicked fingernails chattering and scraping on the tiles above her head. Nearly every inch of Aaron’s large shaft had fully impaled Heather’s tight tunnel in one abrupt moment, leaving them both in shock and frozen in place. She had swallowed him so deeply and so tightly that he felt like she had locked him in a vice grip, leaving his cock begging for a release. The sheer volume that entered her so quickly had instantly paralyzed her with a nearly unbearable pressure. She could feel him ballooning and expanding within her ass with every one of his heartbeats.
Still holding her breathe and barely able to lift her head, Heather managed a whimpering request to her man, “Please, just don’t fucking move…please”
His hands hovered motionlessly above the breadth of her ass. With his mouth agape and drooling, he replied only with a fractured, “No…problem.”
After fully regaining his faculties, Aaron looked down to assess the situation. All of the lube had been forced completely downward. It was now puddled in his pubic hair and on the one remaining unburied inch at his base of his shaft. It was apparent to him that virtually none of his pre-cum or the conditioner had made its way inside of her. It left them locked in place with little hope for movement. He cleared the mess away, which revealed the bittersweet, but glorious sight of his girth stretching her wide open. Heather finally released her breath and began panting heavily. She peered back and nodded to signal to him make an attempt at breaking the stalemate between their bodies. Aaron slowly and cautiously attempted to pull his shaft back out of her. Her opening clung and stretched outward with him and made no progress because of the vacuum seal they had created. The shift only tugged her entire body towards his. He tried pushing himself further inside of her, but it only forced her entire torso forward. She was simply locked on too tight, and her tunnel was unforgiving. After several more attempts at the painful tug of war, Heather decided that she would be the one to make the risky move. She pleaded with Aaron to stop trying and began to walk her arms slowly down the wall so that the entire upper half of her body was horizontal in front of him. Without any further warning or instruction, she aggressively pushed off the wall with her hands, slamming Aaron against the opposite wall, creating a loud slap. Screaming in agony, she pulled away slowly, towing his cock and hips off the wall. She then angrily repeated the same effort until at last, her asshole finally consumed his last remaining inch. She had now claimed him entirely with her round ass cheeks now firmly parked entirely against his hips. Finally, they both felt a partial relief from the extreme pressure now that they had achieved movement within her. It was evident that the gridlock was broken and there was a chance for further movement. Her immediate thought was to retreat from his cock altogether to get some additional relief from the anguish of still having him fully stuffed inside of her, but she could still very much feel Aaron throbbing anxiously. She knew he would be more than ready for some serious fucking. She was not going to leave her man unsatisfied just because of the bizarre incident. She began her plan to work on him just as she knew it would be expected of her. She could feel the friction clinging to every protruding vein as she cautiously backed off of him, stopping atop of his still rigid head. Aaron thought that surely this was the point at which she would admit defeat by releasing his cock from her clutches entirely. Instead of freeing him, she kept herself vacuumed on his tip and began swirling her hips in smooth circular motion. The unexpected signal put a huge smile on his face. The spiral provided his piston with an unreal pleasure, with a sensation similar to her swirling her tongue on him while sucking at the same time.
In a deep guttural voice, he declared his pride and approval, “Oh my, that’s my good girl. I was hoping you wouldn’t tap out on me. We are nowhere near done here. I know you’ll show me what you are capable of.”
Inspired by his words, she brought her playful movements to a halt and began the difficult task of retaking the rest of his cock back inside of her once again. She applied significant pressure and began to rock her hips side to side, reclaimed inch after inch consecutively. Her breathing became exhaustive, and her moans became louder as she reached his base. The achievement was all she needed to give her the confidence to unleash her talents on him. She lifted her hips off of him and began dropping herself on him repeatedly in an up and down motion while squeezing the ring of her opening around his meaty girth. She increased her pace after every jarring drop against his pubic bone. Before long, she was bouncing freely on his fullness. Aaron watched her every move with amazement and selfish appreciation, creating an even greater lust for his beautiful lover. He struggled fiercely against the urge to cum. Her motions lit his cock up so intensely that he felt like he was in the midst of a continuous orgasm. He couldn’t do much more than to resist, enjoy the show and hold on for dear life. He stood against the wall grunting uncontrollably, with his hands behind his back and hips held upward. He simply wanted to absorb her focused energy and listen to her incredible moaning and wailing. She continued on fucking Aaron with every last drop of sexual energy left in her reserves, until she began to run out of steam. She ended her marathon with one final scream as she rested her asshole fully impaled down to his balls.
“God damn, what you just did to me with your ass alone, has got to be the hottest thing I have ever seen. You take care of your man like no one else I have ever encountered. Other men might kill to have a woman like you doing such things to them. It is my turn to take control. I hope you’re ready for everything I need to give you”, Aaron whispered directly into her ear as he positioned his hands on her waistline.
“’Fuck yes… I’m all fucking yours.” she panted.
Aaron wrapped one arm tightly around her waist and began to run the other up between her cleavage towards her neckline and covered her mouth. He needed to give her a taste of what she would eventually expect and proceeded to animalistically plunge himself significantly deeper than at any point in the during their encounter. He watched the profile of her eyes widen in panic and she let out a muffled cry through his clenched fingers. He repeated the quick thrust again using the leverage of his grip on her waistline against her, sending her into a dizzy euphoria. Her yelps and cries became more broken with every punishing penetration further into her depths. Sensing that he might be pushing past her physical limits too quickly, he promptly reset his pace and aggressiveness. He slowed his thrusts and began retracting and refilling her limited space over and over with less intensity. He removed his hand from her mouth and joined it with his other hand which was cupping and firmly caressing her nipples. The new gentler attack on her body gave her a sensation of blissful ecstasy and her moans returned to that of pure pleasure. Aaron could tell by her reactions that the drop in intensity was exactly what she needed at that moment, but he also had no doubt that he would return her to this complete submission eventually. For now, he would continue take her pleasure to a feverish level before he unleashed on her. He fucked her ass continuously but progressed only as her body signaled its readiness along the way.
Testing her with every move, he pumped into her with greater veracity. He began to pull as much of her body in as close to his as possible. Using his feet, he forced her legs inward until they were entirely closed shut. The stance forced her asshole to clamp around his cock with a renewed pressure. He reached up and pulled her arms down tight to her sides along the matching lines of her torso. With no hands left on the wall to keep herself supported, Aaron kept her angled, leaning upright entirely with the strength of his owns arms. His left hand remained grasped around her breasts, giving attention to both of her erect nipples, pinching them between his fingertips. His placed his right hand firmly against the base of her neck. They were now essentially spooned and locked together from head to toe. With every part of their bodies flush together, he knew would be able to ravage all her senses and feed her all of his energy. As he quickened, his hand had begun to apply ample pressure to start restricting her breathing and his other limbs had virtually bound the rest of her body movement. Both of their breathing became extremely heavy and Aarons moans had become equal in volume to that of Heather’s. Their noises released in unison with utmost pleasure during every collision between their hips. He bound and squeezed her closer and closer to the point that she was helpless to move in any way. As he cut off her breathing completely, Aaron could no longer hold back his aggression and thrust as deep as he could. Holding at maximum penetration, he gave her dozens of quick and violent thrusts until he could feel her body start to give way to sexual delirium. He could feel her jaw clenched and saw her eyes rolling back as her body shivered within his clutches. He could feel his orgasm beginning to build rapidly and it inspired him to unleash everything he had on her. Holding off his full release for as long as possible, he feverishly ravaged her insides until she was completely rag dolled and virtually limp within his clutches. He slowed to a stop and grinded his hips in circles until he reached his crescendo. The sheer power and intensity she felt from his raging cock before the moment of his release made her feel as if it might lift her entirely off the ground. Heather quivered and shook as she felt every convulsion forcefully expanding and levering within the entirety of her ass. The seemingly endless loads of warm cum exploded into every void that was not already filled by the excess volume of his cock. The finale of their chaotic scene became so loud that the noise became almost deafening inside of their own echoing, personal sex chamber.
As his last twitches emptied into her, he unlocked his hand from her neck, but continued to hold her close and rested his face in the middle of her back. They both stood wrapped, feeling each other’s bodies vibrating from head to toe. They attempted to catch their breaths for several minutes and reluctantly began to unfurl. He eventually released her limbs and returned himself upright in order to inch his manhood out from within her. To his amazement, her pink ring still gripped and clung to him every inch of the way. As his still plumped and swollen tip exited with a pop. As his spent cock dropped heavily, so did the abundance of ejaculation he had emptied inside of her. The seemingly impossible amount of cum streamed steadily out of her slightly gaped hole and drenched much her pussy before traveling in huge gobs down both of her legs. Heather gasped with relief and turned back towards Aaron. They both stood staring at each other with mutual smiles of complete satisfaction on her faces. They embraced and kissed passionately once again and spent several more minutes gazing in unspoken amazement over what they had just experienced together. He stepped out of the shower to allow her to do some more needed clean-up. Aaron took one last lustful scan of his woman’s enticing body and closed the curtain.
“You have got to be the sexiest fucking creature to ever walk this planet, woman”, he declared to her as he grabbed a towel.
“Every part of me is perfectly matched with every part of you, so we are even, baby.” she replied with a giggle, “Give me a few minutes to get this ungodly amount of cum off of me and then I’ll attempt to walk again, you insatiable monster.”
“Well, you definitely got the mess you were wanting so badly, hah,” Aaron quipped as he exited the bathroom, “If you are still walking straight once you are out of there, obviously I didn’t do my job well enough baby.”
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