Hey guys, I started writing erotica just recently. I wrote this just a few days back. It’s just based on one my countless fantasies lol. Would love to hear what some of you think of it and how/where I can make it better.
It’s a cool winter’s day in Switzerland and I’m sitting in a cafe busy on my phone. I stare outside thinking of how boring of a weekend it’s gonna be. That’s when I see you. I couldn’t take my eyes of you. I could pass it off and say there were no words to describe how gorgeous you looked but no. This was different. It was a different feeling all together. It was more perverse yet I couldn’t think of anything else even if I wanted to do. Thoughts just rushed to my head. Every small detail about how you looked was driving me crazy. You grab a cup of coffee and sit on the table right opposite me. During the next couple of minutes we just exchange a few looks. There was also something about me that got your attention. We knew we both were physically attracted to each other. It had been quite a few minutes after you finished your coffee that I decided to walk over to you. We end up chatting away about things that weren’t exactly what we both were actually thinking of. Realising this I invite you over to my place. We walk in through the door as I close it behind us. We just stand there staring at each other. That’s when we realize what exactly we wanted. I slam you hard against the wall and we start making out so torridly. It didn’t really matter that none of this made sense. What mattered more was what was happening right now. We start kissing so wildly… you quickly start to unbutton my shirt….I push you off for a bit…I take your jacket off and pin you against the wall. You try getting at me like a wild animal reaching for food, but I push you back and cover your mouth with my hand. I pull your pants off. You slowly start calming down. I kneel down in front of you and place my hands on your supple ass. Your skin felt so soft. I pull you closer and kiss your snatch through your panties. I just could not wait to taste you. I slowly pulled your panties off and stood up. I pulled your hands together and tied them up with your panties. I pulled you by your hands and made you sit on the carpeted floor. I took your top off, your bra and i quickly got a tie and blindfolded you. Telling you to stay on the floor I went to the kitchen for some some supplies. I come back and sit next to you. I place my hands on your cheeks and lick your lips. I give you a wet sloppy kiss and push you back against the couch. I pushed your legs apart. I took my pants off and just sat there. You looked so fucking amazing. Your hair grazing over your perfect tits. I notice you were already dripping wet and pull you closer. With your legs around my hips, I wet my fingers and slowly slide em over your pussy. You shiver as I touch your clit. I run my fingers in circles over it as slowly as I could while at the same time licking your neck. I lick my way down to your nipples ,nibbling on them as I continue teasing you. I lay you down on the floor on your belly and spread your legs wide open. I open a jar of Nutella and pour it as a long streak from the back of your neck all way down till your toes. I place two fingers on the back of your neck and two at the tip of your toes and slowly start dragging them along your body and just as they’re about meet I slide two fingers up your succulent pink folds and the other up your juicy ass. I slide em in nice and deep. You let out a deep moan and I could just feel your body squirming with pleasure. I twirl my fingers deep inside making sure you feel every bit of it. Just watching you moan and tremble was driving me crazy… I slowly pulled my fingers out….and tasted them…tasted so exquisite…I let some chocolate sauce drool over my throbbing cock, grabbed your hair tight and just rubbed the tip of my cock against your clit. That’s when I just couldn’t hold back anymore. I push my cock deep inside your quivering pussy,both of us moaning in ecstasy ,I pull your hair harder making you scream out as I start pounding you passionately. I snuck in a few fingers up your tight ass and timed it with my thrusts. I started to finger you and fuck you so madly… nothing else mattered right now. I turned you around and pulled you on me wrapping your legs tight around my hips,my cock still stuffed inside your dripping peach,I took some chocolate ice cream and smeared it all over your lips….some of it dripping down your chin. My hands were covered in chocolate as i untied your hands and took your blinds off. I locked my chocolate covered hands with yours and we both looked at each other with such mad savage desire. I bite your nipples triggering you off to a fuck filled frenzy as we both start fucking so crazily! We smear each other with chocolate and we just can’t stop. I hug you tight ….as I feel every bit of your luscious pussy loving my cock . I bite your lips,your chin,your nipples,I pull your hair …I lick your face and i just lose myself in you,fucking you like there’s no tomorrow. Our bodies covered in chocolate, we kept at it, addicted to each other. Every kiss,every lick so passionate.I just didn’t wanna stop. I could feel you were getting closer and closer to cumming. I grab your face, telling you to cum with me and we were just fucking so………now is probably the time for me to say that there were probably no words to describe how passionately we were making love.
I look straight into your eyes, you looked straight into mine and just like that we cum. We cum together. We cum so hard our bodies just embrace in a world of orgasmic bliss and i completely fill you up. I could feel every bit of your pussy squirm and squeeze my cock. Both of us still stuck in a state of intense pleasure… shivering and trembling. Both of us just licking each other as we try to catch out breaths. We just lay back down licking the chocolate off of each other, my cock still buried inside you ….
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