I’ve just completed editing the whole book about a first person view, of a man setting up the entire weekend to explore his sexual fantasies with a girl. The graphic detail I added is to make you feel, like it’s happening to you, from his eyes.
Any volunteers want to read it and give me their honest feedback?
I’m looking for likes, dislikes, what made your heart race, what you want to see more of, what made your breathing heavy, and what made you wet.
Please message me your email if you’re interested.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/knxuak/just_finished_my_first_erotic_book_looking_for