**Well, hi! I’m completely new here and I’m trying to figuring out how this works.**
**I like to write little scenes and a friend of mine told me to put it out there and maybe to do something with it.**
**I’m a little insecure to post my writing, but here you go! I’d like to hear your feedback and opinions on it. And maybe even post more in the future or go another direction with it.**
**Please note that my native language isn’t English, so I’m sorry for any grammar mistakes, please point them out to me. I love to learn and get better at writing :)**
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Right now, this Sunday morning, I just woke up and I’m still in bed, my mind is wandering a little.I feel that my body and mind are longing for you, so much.
Just the littlest thought about you and me, it starts a pulse between my legs and makes my mind wander off even more. What would happen if I’d wake up in your bed, instead of mine?
You would probably be out of bed already, to make yourself some coffee and put the kettle on for me, just in case if I would wake up as well. When you hear me move, and hear me stretch the sleep off you come in and check on me if I’m already awake.You stand in the doorway and see my sleepy face waking up. I see you standing there, it makes me smile and I tell you a good morning.
I can see off of the look on your face that you’re in a mood. A mood that immediately wakes up all parts of my body.
The darkness in your eyes, your Dominant self is awake and it wants something from me. I feel butterflies in my stomach, not knowing what that Dominant, my Dominant is going to do.
A little nervous smile is appearing on my face and my sub inside of me has now fully been woken up. Patiently waiting what you’re going to make me do.
You step into the bedroom and command me to go lay on my back on your bed. My head slightly off of the edge. Now I know what is going to come and I’m getting excited for it. My mouth is already filling itself up with saliva, preparing for you to enter it.
You come closer and without touching me yet, you order me to spread my legs. I’m still a little shy so mentally I´m struggling a little bit. I love the vulnerability, the thought of you seeing every inch of me, having full access to me, but still I get a little insecure even though I know I shouldn’t be when I’m around you.
You walk around me to have a good look at me. You stand at my feet and I can feel your eyes burning into my skin. ‘I said spread’, you say while you’re grabbing my ankles and spread my legs properly. I feel a slight breeze between my legs because of the force you used. I gasp for air; this excites me for some reason. I feel your dominance, the thing I need right now. The need to follow your lead and the need to please you. I sink into my subspace.
Now lying on your bed with my legs fully spread apart. I can feel myself dripping down and making a little wet spot on the sheets. You haven’t even touched me yet, my body reacts so strongly to you.
I can see you looking at my pussy and you see it glistening. It puts an approving smile on your face; you haven’t even properly touched me yet.
I’m trying to avoid eye contact as I’m blushing. The fact that you’re really taking me in, that you are really enjoying my body with just your eyes, makes me squirm a little. The insecurity, fully naked, you having fully access to my body but still haven’t touched me yet. It turns me on even more.You see that I’m mentally struggling and it entertains you.
Finally you start to tease me with just your fingertips. At this point my skin reacts like electricity to your touches.You run your fingertips lightly over my highly sensitive skin, starting at my feet. The longing for you burns in my body.You haven’t tied me up this time, I’m completely free to move but you’re ordering me to not move a single muscle
I struggle as I feel your fingertips move over my skin. I want them to move to certain places. My neck, my nipples, down to tease my pussy and then I want you to make me cum with just your fingers on my clit.But you won’t. You’re denying my longings and you enjoy watching me squirm and struggle to follow your one rule. To lie completely still.
You remove your fingertips off of my skin, take a step back and remove your sweatpants. I take short glimpses off you, not wanting you to catch me staring. I see you’re fully awake and ready to take me in as well. It makes my breathing go heavier and makes me blush once again.
You walk up to my face and ordering me to stick my tongue out.
I right away do what you’re telling me to do as I’m getting greedy for a taste of your pre-cum.
You take your cock in your hand and slide the tip of it over my tongue. The sweet flavour of your juices excites me and makes me want all of it. I try to suck on the tip of your cock to get more of your flavours but as I try, you pull yourself away from me. ‘Did I say suck?’ you ask. ‘I’m sorry, Sir’, I silently say looking down, knowing that if I’m being greedy, I won’t get rewarded.
You tell me ‘The next time you disobey my orders, pleasure will be taken away from you’.
‘Yes, Sir’.
You tell me once again to stick out my tongue and this time you’re giving me your balls. ‘Now you may suck’, you say.
I straight away do what you’re telling me to do. My tongue is swirling around your balls, the saltiness, the taste of you, I love every part of it.
My breathing is getting heavier by the sounds of you enjoying yourself.
You remove your balls from my mouth and this time, without telling me a thing, you slide your cock all the way inside of my mouth. My eyes widen, muffled moans coming out of my mouth of pleasure.
By the way my head lays off of the edge of the bed, my throat opens up and I take you all the way in.
You can see the form of your cock on the outside of my throat sliding back and forth.For a minute you keep it as deep as possible and you feel the gagging around your cock. You see my muscles contract and my hands grabbing the sheets.
This view is sending you to the edge and with a moan you slide yourself outside of me to let me catch my breath and getting you off of the edge.
This you do this a few times more. I love the feeling of my throat being sore because of your cock.
My gagging on you has made you sensitive and as I’m doing a good job following instructions and letting you facefuck me, you decide to bend over me and slide one finger to my pussy, in between my wet lips, not quite touching my clit and back again. I’m trying to squirm my body so my clit will be where your finger is but obviously I’m failing.
You know it’s hard for me to focus at anything I do when you’re touching me, it entertains you. You know it makes my mind blurry and chaotic, trying to focus on pleasing you but also feel every single touch on my body.
‘Lay still’, you say with a deep voice and you give me a firm spank on my thigh.
Once again a muffled moan is coming out of my mouth while you’re still owning my mouth and throat.
I quickly do as you say and you continue to tease me.
Without even touching my clit you’re getting me on the edge. You know as my moans are getting louder and my breathing is getting heavier.
My hands are grabbing your legs, looking for something to hold on to. My nails digging into your skin, and then with just one touch of your finger onto my clit, I cum, hard.
The moans almost turn into screams and my vocal cords are vibrating on the tip of you cock which gets you unexpectedly over the edge as well.
You cum, deep in my throat so that I can’t taste you. That is my punishment for not doing as you told me to do.
The after feeling of that intense orgasm and having you cum in my mouth leaves me in an almost unconscious state of mind.
I’m trying to get a little taste of you as you pull yourself out of me, sucking on the tip of your cock.
‘Good girl’ you say, ‘now turn around for me on all fours’.
My whole body is still shaking of the orgasm you just gave me and I’m trying to not lose control of my body. I’m trying to get into that position and it takes a little effort to keep myself steady for you. As I’m in front of you, finally in the position you told me to go in, you firmly grab both of my arms, put them on my back and push my face onto the bed.
You’re holding both of my arms in one hand and push yourself deep inside of me.
I didn’t expect that, after your orgasm 2 seconds ago…
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/kcefxx/a_good_morning_to_you_sir_fm_bdsm
Super story. Thanks
Phew this was really good! I love the need she feels for him, the desperation in her thoughts and the way he has complete control. Very well done, can’t wait to read more!
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Nice story! You can read how the girl and the Sir have a special connection going on and it’s „their“ thing they’re living…
Just a few minor things: The story Tag is [Mf] because the male is the dominant. There are some small mistakes, you forgot the whitespace after the dot.