Please excuse the grammar and typos, I haven’t edited yet. Just thought I would share the scene with you all. This is the first time I’ve ever share my work with anyone other than my husband. This scene was inspire by my husband we did this very thing the night before I wrote this.
Val leans up against the door, hair still wild from sleep, her green eyes sparkling and she has a sly smirk on her face. She takes my breath away; she is the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen. I thank whatever forces had her crash into my life. She slowly stalks towards me, a lioness with her kill in sight. She reaches for my button and zipper, pushing my jeans and boxers to my ankles before pushing me back onto the edge of her bed. She takes my semi hard cock in her hand and brings it to her mouth, it only takes a few flicks of her tongue before she has me rock hard. She takes it so excruciatingly slow. Running her tongue from my tip down to my balls before slipping them in her mouth one at a time while squeezing my length, then back to the tip. She swirls her tongue around my head a few times before plunging me to the back of her throat. It takes everything I have in me not to explode and coat her mouth. She finds her rhythm and my hand threads through her hair tugging it lightly just the way she like its. I’m getting close, I know I should stop her because I really want to cum inside her but I can’t seem to pull her away. Her mouth feels fucking amazing.
“Little one, if you don’t stop now I will coat your throat.” I say trying to ease out from between her lips. She doesn’t let me, she squeezes the base of my dick harder and takes me as far down as she can, then I’m coming. She swallows every last drop and sits back with a satisfied smile on her beautiful face. I scoop her up and throw her on the bed and rip her sleep shorts down her legs and spread her legs wide. Her pretty pink lips are already slick with her need. I lean in and take a long swipe from her opening to her clit. Her sweet tang is so addicting I can’t get enough of her. I dive in and eat her like I’m a man on death row and she is my last meal. I savor every moment, her legs are shaking and she is right on the edge and I thrust two fingers into her to tip her over. She isn’t even able to form any coherent words, just a long stream on moans. My name and oh gods are thrown in the mix as well. I lick and suck her through one orgasm and on to the next. When her after shocks finally subside she is laying there like a wet noodle.
“Well, that was unexpected.” I say, pushing her crazy hair out of her face.
“I’ll say I was just planning to get you off before work, I didn’t expect you to return the favor.”
“I’ll never leave you hanging and not return the pleasure. It pleases me to see you get off. I love how responsive you are to my touch and how little effort it takes to get you there. Few women are like that, they take a long time to get there if they even get there at all.” I say nipping at her neck sending chills down her body.
“How about a couple more before I have to head to work.” I say grinning, working my way down to her breast, biting her nipples through her thin shirt before pulling it over her head.
“Yes, please Jax, I need more of you. I want you inside me, please.” she begs, reaching for a condom. I as I pull away to put it on my straining dick, she slowly circles her clit waiting for me to take her. I want to be slow but I need her too much, I push her hand out of the way and I slam into her with one hard thrust.
“Fuck, Jax oh fuck” she screams I tilt her hips up to an angle I know that I’ll hit her sweet spot. After a few thrusts she tightens, and her breath hitches so I know I’m hitting it just right. I push in and hold it against her g-spot as she starts to spasm around me and I can feel her sweet juices drip down my balls. A scream of ecstasy rips from her throat as she is still pulsing around my cock. I start moving again to give her a minute to come down before I do it again. I do this several times before she is begging me to stop “Fuck Jax I don’t think I can cum anymore please.”
“Little one, I think you have one more left in you.” I say taking her legs throwing them over my shoulder pounding into her hard and fast, her orgasm comes out of nowhere and this time she takes me with her over the edge. I release her legs and slowly slide out of her. I go take care of the condom and get a warm wet rag to clean her up too. She just lays there, never taking her eyes off me. After I’m done, I gather her in my arms until her breath slowly evens out. I don’t want to leave her, but I have to get to work and I have to see if I can get a hold of Sonja to find out what she knows about Cucuy. Anytime I thought Cucuy might have sniffed out my whereabouts, I left that place before he could get his hands on me. I will keep her safe no matter the cost. I don’t know what it is about this beautiful woman, but I’m hooked.
“Sleep well little one, I will do whatever it takes to keep you safe. Even if it means leading him away from you and disappearing from your life.” I whisper and kiss her softy before gathering my clothes.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/iq7w5y/mf_oral_vaginal_val_and_jax_a_scene_from_my