Oh, Miss… [Primal, hunted, CNC, choking, losing consciousness]

First time posting. Enjoy?

*TW: CNC, Choking, Losing Consciousness*

It’s been leading up to this, the way you looked at me when we met, I knew I was going to be your prey in some way; your eyes piercing into me so fiercely I had to look away. You approached me, grasped my hand, and introduced yourself. I was petrified. I had to physically will myself to breathe, look up, and reply in turn. Your smirk was knowingly evil, I thought I could ward you off with returning your strong handshake, but that made your smirk twist into a smile that lured me in, and made my eyes wide with fear.

“Ma’m, I can help you here.” The timid young bank teller snapping me from my trance, I snatched my hand away, turned on my heels, and went about my business. I could have sworn I heard a chuckle from behind me as I fled to the teller.  Almost simultaneously, the spot next to me vacated and you were silently, suddenly next to me, just as swiftly going about your business as I. He’s trying to catch up. A thought flitted across my mind, no, no no, there was nothing wrong with that interaction, I thought. Nothing wrong with this reality just my reality.

“Thank you very much” I grabbed my receipt, smiled at the teller, and stuffed the thin paper into my bag, doing my best to hide my inner monologue and not look at…you.. I couldn’t help it, I swiveled back to the counter, you weren’t there, I whipped back towards the front door and there you were, poised at the door, beckoning me with your cold eyes to come and let you hold the dokr for me. It’s a challenge. The feeling surged through me. Do not allow him to make you his prey, make eye contact, assert your confidence. My breathe caught in my chest as I saw a face of recognition surge across your face, you instinctively postured forward, grinning. As I approached, chin up, pretending to be ready for this…beast transforming in front of me, made my body tensed and my mind twitched as you in one intimidatingly graceful motion opened the door and postured yourself behind me the tip of your boots inches behind my heels, hand sweeping my brown curls to one side and breathing into me:  “Have a lovely day miss….” Your breathe dropping to an almost inaudible growl next to my ear. My body surged with so many emotions I had no chance of controlling. *I always thought I would stand and fight. I am a fighter. But I didn’t. I did everything short of breaking into a sprint. *

“Miss!! Miss!!” A young female gently called from behind me. I was almost off the sidewalk, I could see my car. A wave of horror engulfed me, my car keys aren’t in my bag. They aren’t in my hands, they’re with the pretty young teller holding them up in the doorway, next to you. “You forgot your keys!” She warmly smiled as I made a ‘silly me’ gesture and attempted to paint a false smile on my face.

“Here.” You  smiled as your hand tactfully plucked the keys from the tellers slender fingers. “I’ll walk them over to her”. I froze,  you turned towards me, arm still holding the door open for the young woman. She thanked him, dismissing my deer in the headlights stare and the door swung shut. The tinting blocking out the inside of the bank, making a black backdrop as you approached me, face unreadable. I watched as your gaze lifted from mine, scanning the parking lot, the key fab positioned in your palm, one strong finger pressed the unlock button. My Honda CR-V lit up indicating it was unlocked. “Why don’t I walk you to your car, you seem flustered, is everything alright?” A taunt disguised as concern. You gently guided me to walk in front, giving me the almost unbearable sensation of being stalked, appraised, meat. We reached my car, and before I could turn around you had invaded my personal space, once again growling in my ear. “Are you petrified, excited, or both?” My legs clenched together as my head instinctively fell back. Your arm wrapped around my neck, elbow in front of my chin, and you barely needed to squeeze for me to feel the blood being cut off making my head swim.

“Both” I managed to whimper out. You immediately released me, and slapped the keys into my hand. I was able to turn around then, only to see you returning to your vehicle. The parking lot was dark now, I scrambled into my car, fumbling with my keys, backing out as quickly as I could, I didn’t even bother to put on music, I had to get out, even though I knew there was no escaping this. I was getting exactly what I always dreamed of. To be hunted. The reality was finally setting in. Adrenaline surging through me as I peeled out of the parking lot. A black SUV of sorts languidly following me. Where the fuck do I go? My brain was malfunctioning. Out if nowhere the SUV following me passes me on a double yellow and cuts me off, breaking harshly. I squeel almost to a stop. “Jesus fucking Christ! Shit! Motherfucker!” The SUV started to move again, indicator light blinking left. I knew I had no choice but to follow. The road was winding, and ended at a house, more like a ranch style home. I couldn’t really tell in the dark. The SUV stopped, and I see your unmistakable silhouette framed by the porch light. You come over to my car, and knock on the window. I take a deep breathe, and unlock the door. The door pops open, and your large hand extends out, fingers unfurling, revealing a card. You turn and walk away, into the ranch house.

*A timer has been set as you read this. You have 10 minutes to get your bearings and find a place to hide, or to run. Once I find you, I will take you, your time is now, rabbit. Now run. *

I immediately went to start my car. “Fuck this.” As I tried to back out, I ran over spikes. Rendering all my tires flat. “Fuck!” I slam my hands on the steering wheel. I fumbled out of the car, and flung my heels at the ranch house deck, and ran. I figured the horse barn would be dark enough to blend into the shadows. As I approached and slid the barn door open, I was relieved to see an almost pitch black barn illuminated only by the starlight peeking through the roof. I scampered around as quietly as I could, silently sobbing and enraged. I found a ladder, I climbed it, and climbed into an empty feed barrel, trying to silence my heavy breathing, focused on the horses sounds in their stalls.

It felt like hours, until I heard the silent footsteps of boots on hay. And a deep, dark, chuckle. I started to panic. *What does he know that I do-*just then I saw it: the green blinking light in the corner of a night vision camera. I never even had a fucking chance. I heard the creaking of boots and hands climbing the ladder. “Did you really think you could hide from me in my own barn?” Your words oozed out. Such a low tone it almost sounded like thunder a hundred miles away. My pussy clenched at that sound. I was sitting in a puddle of my own juices by now. “You really think you had a chance to get away once you foolishly followed me here? Stupid girl.” I felt the vibration of your boot meet the wood floor of the landing and approach my “safe” place. The Barrell suddenly tipped and your hand clenched a fistful of my hair. I yelped and you pulled me out of the Barrell. You sat down, my back to yours, your legs wrapped around mine, holding them open, I could feel your throbbing cock on my back, my bare feet splintered and sore kept trying to gain traction but gave up once your arm once more wrapped around my neck, and you squeezed. I lost Consciousness.

I woke up to cool air all over my body. I was naked. And you were standing over me. I tried to scramble up and when I went to sit up your hand met my cheek so hard I fell back again. A painful groan escaping my lips. In my panic I didn’t notice you were naked. Lean, and muscular my mind panicked and pussy ached as my eyes fell on your cock, swollen, between your legs. I knew what was going to happen, and there wasn’t any way for me to stop it. You were on top of me, positioning yourself between my legs. You reached down, fondling my slit. “Mmm…so wet for me.”  I tried to push his hand away. “Oh, you want to play games still? Good” your hand creeped around my throat. Cutting off all blood flow. Before I passed out again, I felt you entering me, shoving your full length into me as I spasmed around you.  When I woke again, you were thrusting viciously into me, hand lose around my throat, raggedly breathing. I moaned, you snapped your eyes to mine “you keep squirting on my cock, I’m so close, one more time” and your hand clenched down once more, my pussy clenching around your cock once more as the world went black. When I awoke, you were pumping the last of your seed into me. Moaning “you’re such a good little cum dump. Your pussy can’t get enough.” My legs were shaking. He was right. I was laying in a puddle of my own juices.  *I loved this. *

I wake up in the ranch house. I am wrapped up in a blanket, and you are spooning me.

“You did so well my pet.” Your deep soothing voice behind my ear as you smoothed my hair. “I am going to fill the tub, and while you soak, I will be making dinner. We will be eating in bed by the fire tonight. Drink a glass of water and then I’ll pour you a glass of sparkling if you’d like.” Your lips grazed my cheek as you effortlessly rose from the couch we were perched on and glided to the bathroom. I took a sip of my water and rubbed my sore neck, sensations flooded me. I can’t wait for that to happen again. I smile to myself. And take another sip.

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