As the title suggests, this is a fantasy about a sexual encounter between me and the friend in question.
This is my first piece of erotica, so I’d appreciate feedback and suggestions for improvement.
I come home to find you reading on the couch. You’re wearing a simple black cami with jeans that hug your curves in all the right places. We hug for what feels like hours, relishing each other’s contact. We kiss deeply while I lovingly caress your lower back and butt, dipping my hands under your waistband from time to time. You pull away from our kiss to unfasten my belt and pants.
You gently feel my bulge of arousal through my boxers then push me down onto the couch. You plant a soft kiss on my lips and whisper, “Watch this.” You step a few feet in front of me and begin to teasingly peel off your cami. I stare hungrily at you as I realize that you aren’t wearing a bra.
You turn to face away and pull the cami over your head, tossing it away. You continue to your pants, and slowly glide them down your butt, revealing your perfect globes of flesh to be covered by my favorite blue and black panties. You bend over to finish removing your jeans as I begin to tease my manhood.
“Like what you see?” you teasingly ask. I’m speechless at your seduction. I get up from the couch and turn you around to face me. Our lips lock only briefly before I sweep you up and place you on the couch. I move toward your breasts, but you are having none of it. You grab my necktie and pull me into another kiss.
We caress each other’s tongues for several minutes. You gasp as I begin to rub your womanhood through your panties. I begin to slowly kiss down your neck until I reach your breasts. I softly kiss across your chest, driving you mad as I carefully avoid your nipples.
I feel your feminine nectar begin to fill your panties as I gently suckle each of your nipples. I time my licks of your nipples in sync with my rubbing of your labia and clitoris. You moan in ecstasy as you convulse in the sweet throes of orgasm.
I softly kiss my way back up to your lips as you recover. I hold you silently close to me for a few moments until you whisper, “My turn.”
You slip my shirt off of me before we switch places. I drop my pants around my ankles and finally pull out my aching erection. You stare deep into my eyes as you stand over me. I can do nothing but admire your goddess-like beauty as you drop to your knees. You kiss the tip of my manhood before taking it in your mouth. You slide your lips along the shaft while maintaining perfect eye contact. I ask you to hold my hands while you suck me. You oblige, but you have something more sinister on your mind. You tease me and edge me closer and closer to orgasm, stopping occasionally to kiss the shaft, lick the ridge, and fondle my testes.
I force myself to stop moaning long enough to beg you to let me cum. You take me back in your mouth and push through to the back of your throat. You have never done this to me before, and the new sensation causes me to cum immediately. I caress your face as I do so.
You rise to kiss me so we can share the taste of my passion. Just as I am about to slide my hand in your panties, you pull away and walk toward the bedroom. You stop momentarily to remove your panties. Then, completely naked, you sling your hair over your shoulder and look back at me without turning around. You know the sight of your yearning gaze combined with your bare bottom drives me crazy. I begin to chase you. You run ahead of me and jump onto the bed.
I jump on after you, and we wrestle until you pin me down on my back.
“One…Two…Three.” you count. I let you win to get what I know will come next. “Pay up, mister,” you say. You swiftly descend your mound onto my face. I stop you to relish the sight of your neatly trimmed bush.
You sit on my face, and I begin to work wonders with my tongue. I lick around your labia, drinking in your nectar. I look up into your eyes past your breasts and begin to softly caress your butt.
I teasingly push my tongue into your entrance. “Yes,” you gasp. I continue this as your wetness pours into my mouth. I take some on one finger and begin to tease your backdoor. You have not let me in there to date, but this time you look in my eyes and whisper, “Go on, but be gentle.”
I softly penetrate your anus as I simultaneously fill your vagina with my tongue and grind my nose into your clitoris.
The sensation soon becomes too much for you to bear. I stare into your eyes as you give yourself over to your second orgasm of the night. I don’t move a muscle, but rather hold you lovingly as you convulse on my face and finger. You come down from your high and collapse onto the bed with your legs strewn across me.
I plant a trail of soft kisses along your legs, paying particular attention to the inside of your knees.
You move off of me and pull me on top of you. You spread your legs and reveal your womanhood along with two simple words, “Go on.”
I’m not having any of your coy language. “Say what you want me to do,” I reply.
“I want you,” you say. I resist my urges to ravage you. “I want you,” you repeat. “I want you…to… I want you to…,” you say as your gaze meets mine, “fuck me.” You recoil at what you just said.
You grab my manhood and touch the tip to your entrance. “No,” you whisper, “Don’t fuck me. Make love to me.”
I gently kiss you as our eye contact endures. I push into you until you gasp at the invasion. I love hearing you react like this and moan out in pleasure. You put your hand over my mouth to silence me. “Shh. The neighbors will hear,” you say, giggling.
Your laughter causes your muscles to tense, pulling me deeper into you until my glans kisses your cervix. You cry out in pleasure. “Shh, yourself,” I tease.
We lie there in each other’s embrace for a few moments until I begin to gently thrust in and out. I begin almost imperceptibly, but tensing my manhood against your g spot. Eventually, I’m going almost all the way out with each stroke.
We continue to kiss and play with each other’s nipples as we cherish our sweet act of passion. We giggle as I slip out of you a few times. I make sure to slide my length across your womanhood to edge you closer to bliss.
I feel myself nearing the end as I gaze through your eyes and into your soul. “Hug me,” I whisper. You oblige, locking your legs and arms around my back. I feel your breasts press into my chest, and it takes all I have to maintain control.
You pulse your muscles against my deeply implanted manhood and move your lips to my ear. “Fill me,” you say, “Give me your essence.”
“I love you,” I whisper as I caress your head, knowing that it is all over. I resign myself to fate and bottom out in your love tunnel. I feel my spirit drain into you along with my seed. You moan softly into my ear as your kegels are replaced with an orgasmic seizure. All time stops as we revel in our joint passions.
We kiss deeply after we descend from our plateau.
We know that we are both too spent to get up, but we manage to roll over until you are atop me. We kiss again and exchange “I love yous” as we drift off to sleep, still joined at the centers of our sexes.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/5elq3i/a_fantasy_my_friend_dared_me_to_write_mf
Very nice. Your love and passion comes through your writing and adds a nice bit of excitement.