You hear the door open downstairs and your heart begins to race
There’s no taking it back now, you’ve turned on romantic music, lay down a trail of roses, handcuffed yourself to the bed and now all that’s left is waiting for him to come through the door desperately hoping he’ll like having you all tied up.
You hear his footsteps coming up the stairs and hold your breath as you see the handle turn and hear his voice “babe?”
You come home after a long day at work and see the lights dimmed and hear romantic music playing, you follow a path of roses leading up to the bedroom with a warm smile on your face knowing that she must want something special if she went through all this effort as your reach for the handle wondering what you’ll find inside you call out “babe?” And open the door to see your beautiful girlfriend lying on the bed handcuffed to the pole blushing a deep red, you’ve never discussed bondage before but she looks so perfect laying there with her arms above her head that you know exactly what to do “aww babe it looks like you’re cold let me come warm you up”
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/gr09wl/introducing_bondage
So I wrote this a while ago and it’s written from two different perspectives, I’d love to have feedback from anyone who reads it.
I like this! I am starting to work on flash fiction myself. Maybe doing something to show that it’s different perspectives initially, like one text in italics and the other one plain? But I thought it was well written and it conveyed a lot in a small amount of time. Great job!