JACK AND JILL
My name is Jack.
I have a long standing girlfriend whose name is Jill.
We have been close friends since we were toddlers.
My folks and Jill’s live in a large commune that was founded in the 1970’s.
It started as a religious retreat and over time became a self sufficient entity that just sort of morphed into what it is today, that is a group of twenty two family’s that have learned to share the land and the chores to create this unique society.
Our families have lived in the same house on the grounds of the commune for as long as I can remember.
You will find that in each of the houses that comprise our group there are at least two and sometimes more family’s living under the same roof.
With such living arrangements you might think that there would be difficulty’s when individual personality’s come into play.
We are of course a collection of human behaviors, and yes there are times of friction between members but that is only natural.
How one deals with these moments is what matters.
Our house was one of the oldest in the group.
It was built in the 1880’s and as such was lacking some of the amenitys that were common in newer homes.
Heat was from a propane tank system that needed refilling twice a year to keep us warm in the winter.
There was no air conditioning for the summers, so fans and sweating were the order of the day along with minimal clothing or none at all.
Water was pumped from a well that was installed in the 1970’s.
The well had enough capacity for our household as long as we were conservative in its use.
Today the weather was steaming hot with no relief from the heat and humidity other than heading over to the pond and soaking in the cool spring feed water.
As a spring fed pond, the water was always cool and crisp.
Jill and I were alternately soaking in the pond or sunning on the bank.
The heat being what it was we opted for no swimsuits.
Nudity was no big deal in our household.
It was normal for everyone in the home to be naked when the weather demanded it.
So seeing Jill naked never felt uncomfortable, until today.
I have no clue why this was so, we’ve been nude around each other for as long as I could remember.
However as we lay on the bank watching the clouds overhead I took notice of Jill’s body.
She had begun to develop small breasts with pointy nipples.
Along with other changes in her body she was filling out as her father said the other night.
I myself was in a similar situation, I had grown taller this year and my body was also filling out.
I had just begun to see hair growing where before there was none.
We were laying there talking about nothing in particular when I looked over at Jill.
In the sunlight her body looked amazing, with the amount of hard work we did around the home there wasn’t an ounce of fat on her.
Her breasts were beginning to fill out and looked great.
It was at that moment that my body betrayed me, I began to feel my penis harden and grow.
When I felt this coming on I rolled onto my side turning my back to Jill, embarrassed to allow her to see what was happening.
But it was to late, Jill had been looking at me as we talked.
When my penis began to react to my thoughts Jill began to giggle.
My embarrassed reaction was the cause of her mirth.
“Jack, don’t be embarrassed, I’ve seen erections before.
When you live with two big families under one roof and most of them naked during the hot summers you tend to see a lot of things.
I often see dad react to my mom that way sometimes before they go upstairs to fool around.
I have also seen your mom and dad do the same thing.
So don’t worry about it, personally I think it’s cute.”
As Jill was talking my penis just kept getting harder.
When she told me to turn around that she wanted to see it I became even more reluctant.
Shaking my head no I kept my back to her as she continued to chide me for my modesty.
Reaching out Jill grabbed my shoulder and began pulling trying to get me to turn over.
It now became a tug of war, as she pulled I pushed away trying to keep my back turned to her.
When I felt her let go of my shoulder I knew I had won, or maybe not.
In seconds I found out why her hand left my shoulder when suddenly she reached over my hips and grabbed my cock before I could get my hands there to push her away.
“JILL! Stop, that’s not fair.
I have never grabbed your personal places.”
“Well Jack it’s about time you did.
Jack I’ve waited for you to grab me for the longest time but no, you had to be the perfect friend and a gentleman.
Jack if you turn around I’ll let you touch me.
Jack I want you to touch me, fuck this good guy act and turn around and touch me!”
Turning very slowly back towards Jill I looked into her face and saw those eyes pleading with me to see her in a different way than ever before.
Breaking away from her gaze I looked down at her body.
It’s the same naked body I have seen a thousand times before.
Today however this naked body was new to my eyes.
There were curves I had never noticed before.
Her skin today was new to me, I saw every pore, every mark, every scar.
I saw anew, those breasts that were just beginning to grow out with their pink nipples that today were becoming erect and stiff.
Today I saw for the first time that little triangle that was formed at the apex of her legs.
That little slit that today was becoming puffy as I watched.
Today I saw a little moisture form around that little slit I never really saw before.
When once again Jill reached out and touched my penis with her fingertips my body shuddered and the hair on the back of my arms stood up.
When pre-cum began to flow from the tip Jill dabbed her fingers in it and began to play with the slippery, sticky fluid.
Wrapping her thumb and forefinger around my penis she ran them up and down the length.
The effect of this was a forgone conclusion.
More pre-cum flowed out making it even slicker.
I had to pull away or this was going to end here and now.
“Jack, what’s wrong?”
“Nothing, it was just to much and I was afraid of having this end to soon.” I said.
“Jack, play with my nipples please.
I love how they feel when I touch them.
I can’t wait to feel what it’s like when you play with them.”
Reaching out I brought my fingertips to her breast.
As I touched first one then the other nipple they stiffened and grew right before my eyes.
Their pink color darkened to an angry crimson.
At my first touch Jill made a sharp inhale that at first made me think I had hurt her.
I snatched my fingers away only yo have Jill grab my hand and replace on her breast.
The more I played with her tits the hotter she became and the more noise she made.
Pulling my hand from her breast she dragged it down across her body leaving it atop her tummy.
Taking the hint I began to rub her belly in small yet ever widening circles.
This had her squirming as my fingers ranged wider and wider.
As they neared her private places she became ever more vocal.
When at last they ran across the top of her mound I slid one finger between the cleft of her lower lips.
In response her hips bucked upward driving my finger deep between those lips and into heaven.
She allowed me to linger there for a moment before she pulled away gasping for breath.
“It’s to much, you need to stop for a minute.” She told me.
Seeing the look of disappointment on my face she scooted around between my legs.
Her face just inches away from my engorged cock, she blew a stream of warm breath across the tip.
In response my cock began bobbing around along with pre-cum dripping from the tip.
“OK let’s try this, I saw my mom doing this to my dad one time while I was spying on them as they had sex.” She told me.
Moving a bit upward she took the head of my cock into her mouth.
HOLY SHIT, that felt amazing.
It was only the tip yet it consumed my entire soul.
As her courage grew she took more and more into her mouth.
With her head moving slowly up and down I reached down and held her head in the palms of my hands.
I wasn’t directing, I just wanted to feel her head moving through my hands.
It was now my turn to begin bucking my hips.
Now I grasped her head and bucked my hips in earnest driving my cock deeper into her throat.
The driving of my cock was causing drool to run down my cock and balls not to mention her chin.
Pulling her off my cock before I climaxed I did my best to catch my breath.
Laying side by side on the edge of the pond both of us breathing like an obscene phone call.
After a moment’s rest we rolled towards each other and held each other tightly.
Holding her chest to chest brought my hardened cock against the cleft between her legs.
Opening her legs a bit my cock slid between her legs.
Not penetrating her, just moving my cock between her legs and unbeknownst to me rubbing across the hood covering her clit.
Now both of us were humping against the other.
“No, stop!
Jack, I’m so hot.
All I want is for you to fuck me but I want to stay a virgin so that is out.
Jack I want you to fuck me in the ass, will you do that for me?” She begged.
As she said this she turned face down her butt in the air and holding her cheeks apart.
“Jack take the suntan lotion and smear it into my bottom.”
As I worked the lotion into her bottom her moaning and groaning revved up.
“Do it, come on Jack fuck my ass!”
knee walking up towards her I took my cock in hand and began working it inward.
She was so incredibly tight.
I didn’t think this was ever going to work.
When suddenly I felt Jill relax and my cock sank inward.
“Oh my God, oh, oh ,oh!” Was all she could say.
As I began to find a rhythm, I pressed inward harder and harder.
With my hips pounding away Jill’s body was being driven into the ground repeatedly.
“Jill I’m cumming!”
Seconds later my body stiffened as my cock unleashed years of pent up cum.
“Jack, I feel it, I feel your cum pouring into my bottom.
Oh my God that feels amazing!“ Jill screamed.
Pulling out I rolled over onto my back.
It was only then that I understood all the jokes about guys falling asleep right after sex.
They did so because of how physically taxing this was.
Jill was still face down and trying to catch her breath.
I rolled back to her and draped myself across her back while hugging her from behind.
After what seemed like hours we disentangled ourselves and ran into the pond to clean up.
Rinsing off led to splashing each other which led to trying to dunk each other which led to and endless list of “which led to’s”.
Later after we had finished playing around we gathered our stuff and headed back to the house.
Walking naked through the woods hand in hand we made it home.
The smell of my mom’s cooking filled the air the last hundred yards between us and the house.
When at last we came into the kitchen my mom greeted us.
Not once did she bat an eyelash at our nakedness, after all it was quite normal around here to be naked.
“Did you guys have fun swimming?” Mom asked.
“Yeah mom we had a nice afternoon.” Thanks we said with a sideways glance at each other and a small knowing smile crossed both our lips.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/g24g92/jack_and_jill_part_1_mf_mm