So let me preface this by saying I do not typically write erotica but quarantine does stuff to a person. Any who I actually write fantasy and long story short I ended up in a writing mood today and instead of working on more pre writing for my fantasy novel, I got this idea for two of my story’s characters. Wrote it up, actually ended up really liking it but I have no real experience in this genre so I thought I’d seek the opinion of more knowledgeable individuals than myself; namely you fine people. But in all seriousness I wrote this for fun to see if I could and ended up liking it quite a lot and found myself feeling extremely curious as to how it measures up. So please if you would give it a read and any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
https://docs.google.com/file/d/1ol_hFZ_taHxAdzmR3S9jY8DapfNxMgxV/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/fwu7br/curious_about_how_i_did_on_this_piece