Hi guys! can you give me your honest opinion on my ongoing novel , thanks !
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” it all started there …. I remember the time when i was heading down to Mr kenedy’s house to complete some work that he left behind . Even though it seems suspisious as to why he didn’t work but apparentely he has been sick for quite some time . After i arrived in his front house , i ringed the bell , at first no one have came out , but a few minutes later , Mr kennedy came out wearing his pijamas . Honestly he seems to be really sick , no wonder why he didn’t wanna come . I shouted : Mr kennedy , you are sick you don’t need to open this , i’ll come back later” but he nodded back saying : this is the least i can do for you , sorry for making you work even more” . I entered his house after , it was pretty clean and pretty large , the hall was empty as it seemed you can sense some ghosts lurking around… After we got to his desk , i explained to him the meeting we have done today , and i handed him his copies of contracts that he needs to fill in and check some out . A few hours passed as both of us worked to get this work done as fast as we can , however , suddenly when Mr kennedy standed up to reach his other other , he fell over but i quickly jumped toward him preventing him from touching the ground but oh god ! his lips kissed mine , even though it’s just an accident , i felt embarrassed but he mumbled some words around my ear saying : you look so beautiful today , i’m glad i was working besides you” . He , then , grabbed my wraist so tight while he continues to kiss me so rough , our tongues , connected to each other , released some saliva afterward , and for some reason it seemed so hot . He did unzip my bras off , and he started playing with my tits , his hand was so warm that i didn’t know if it was because of this stimulation or because of his sickness , we continued to enjoy each other bodies until he slipped his hand down my legs , my voice came out unexpectedly and he told me that it was cute .. he grabbed me again and we stared at each other but he removed his pajamas off and started licking my belly all over my tits , i started moaning due to the fact that it was so stimulating , i then , without realizing what i’m doing , grabbed his penis out and started sucking it . As both of us started exploring each others bodies out , the phone ranged , we ignored him at first as we was so concentrated on our private part , he flipped me over and started fingering my little hole , i started moaning even more so that led him to increase his speed until i squirted all over his chest … He then started putting it in , but as soon as he was to , the phone ranged again so he decided to quickly respond to it , leaving me naked and stimulated , that i even continued touching my nipples and sensing my wet vagina out . A few minutes passed , he came to me saying : “alright we’ll continue next time , i’m sorry , my nephew is missing and they called me out to go find her ” . I responded back “but wait , it is cold outside , plus it seems that it will rain afterward , so why not stay here and call someone else “.. he didn’t want to listen to my words because he was frightened and i know how he feels but as soon as he reached the door , the rain started pouring down so hard , I guess we’re stuck here for now . I grabbed his hand and said : “let’s continue having sex for now ” , and he followed me without saying Anything …..
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