She wanted me to write this and now I’m looking for feedback on the story. First time ever writing anything and it is very very long. It is cross posted because I want honest feedback good and bad and other subs don’t seem to get as much as this one.
It starts with seeing you at the bar. I am slow to speak to see if you notice me. Then as I notice you don’t have a drink yet I buy you a shot of tequila. You first want to say you don’t drink it but then I notice a glimmer in your eye. Not sure what the look is but you take the shot and walk away with a smirk and the statement come find me later. About an hour passes as I walk to get another drink I notice you standing there with a pissed off look on your face. So I order two shots of tequila and a Long Island. As I approach our eyes connect and that glimmer in your eye happens. The smirk returns as I attempt to place the shot in your hand but you simply say not here and walk away. Of course I am confused but you stop and look at me and head to the back . I follow still not understanding quite what is going on until I see you in a booth alone. So as I sit and try to give the shot you simply open your mouth for me to pour it in. We sit next to each other with out a word said looking into one another’s eyes. The sound fades away the people seem to disappear what felt like hours was merely seconds. Until your hand touches my arm sending Sudden bolts of electricity through every nerve ending. As I catch my breath and fully grasp the entirety of the situation I put one hand on your leg. You simply move closer bite your lip then start sipping on your Long Island. Basically daring me to move my hand so I do I run my hand ever so slowly up your thigh. Not due to being scared or nervous but now understanding where you want this night to end up. I then make sure to turn the tides in my favor and make a full attempt to slowly torture you to the point of your panties being soaking wet and your pussy aching with out ever putting flesh to flesh.
Now as I run my hand along your leg never moving my gaze from you and the drinks are finished. I get up to get another round when my arm slightly touches your breast and a very audible gasp of breath is heard over all the noise. The sheer fire and pure lust in your eyes is enough to drive any man wild. I return with drinks to find your friends have invaded the booth only for you to tell them to move over and want me beside you. So I sit down and you place my hand on your leg. As conversation flows I slowly and methodically run my hand up your thigh only to stop just shy of your pussy. While my arm is rubbing on your breast. You try to move closer but I always stop just shy. Then as I notice you are deep in conversation in a heated debate I slightly with firm continual pressure on your pussy with two fingers. This causes you to stop and gasp bc the sudden pleasure the sudden change of pace. Everyone notices and makes sure you are ok making it intensify
Now I can feel the warmth and wetness between your legs as I run my fingers over it with just enough pressure to keep you close to the edge but never letting you get over it. You can’t quit squirming begging for release. This might have seemed like it had been days with the amount of frustration and excitement but only 1.5 hours have passed. When you beg me to let you have a release so we get up excusing our selves to shoot some pool and walk out to the truck. As we get in the truck I remind you that I have never kissed you so I slowly start planting kisses on your arm and neck and ears and checks. All this time I just put my hand on your pussy not moving just pressure. Then I plant a small soft kiss on your lips until I move my hand and grab a hand full of hair pulling back your head and purposefully sucking on your neck careful not to leave marks. Then bringing your face back to mine lips inches apart careful not to move my hand on your pussy but just keep applying pressure. I not so delicately put my lips to yours and make sure our tongues meet and intertwine like two swords dueling. Staring at your eyes seeing the raw passion and desire coming from them.
With out a word I remove my hand from your pussy and place it under your shirt. Just on top of your bra. Releasing the clasp but keeping everything in place so not to show the world what was happening not that either of us would have known if an audience was present. Ever so slightly for the first time flesh on flesh happens. The heat, softness, firmness and perspiration all combine into one sudden feeling. With a soft touch and easy motion I move one finger around your breast. Careful not to touch the nipple at all. For what seems like an agonizing days but in reality is moments I finally let my fingertip brush against your nipple. As I hear a sudden breath and a slight shudder as I take my thumb and finger and ever so slightly press your nipple in between them. Gently applying more and more pressure then suddenly pulling your nipple out stretching it to the limit until it comes out of my grasp. During this my eyes have not left yours taking in every reaction. Your phone rings your friends are looking for you. You tell them you have a ride home as your looking at me playing with your own nipple under your shirt.
As the we leave Columbus you giving me directions your constantly trying to play with yourself but I refuse to let you. As we pull in to your driveway I stop look past the occasion past the primal desire and urges to get final confirmation of what you want and desire and make you say it. With out touching you or saying a word you confess just how bad you want me to touch you, kiss you, lick you, and beg me to fuck you to as many orgasms as a mind can fathom. We get out of the truck walk into the house I playfully and purposely put my hand on your ass with a firm swift swing.
We walk through the door your back is to me but the slight pain and sting on your ass has you grinning from ear to ear. The tingle radiates straight through your ass to your pussy all the way to your clit and sets it on fire. Your nipples are hard as diamonds. Your pussy is so wet that a small spot has started to emerge on your pants. You ask if I want a drink. Without letting you finish I spin you around grab you in my arms and pull you close to me giving you a firm but suttle kiss on the your lips letting my tongue run gently around your lips to your your neck and your ear pushing your shirt slightly off your shoulder without removing it to kiss down your shoulder. Then stopping to whisper I am going to kiss your body in every place possible until my lips hurt without touching your nipples and pussy to make you squirm. Then I look deep into your eyes while your trying to not let your legs shake as my hand has been firmly griping your ass the entire time and simply ask what do you have for a night cap?
As you gain your composure you try to usher me into the bedroom but I want to tease you even more. So I request the drink firmly. You pour us a drink and ask about getting into something more comfortable. As I put my drink on the counter and look at your gorgeous body lean in grab you around your waist and tell you all in good time and you will be naked and no clothes are allowed to feel you shudder in my arms. I keep my lips just inches from your lips. Looking in your eyes not moving a muscle taking in your rather intoxicating scent as I tell you show me your bed.
With the excitement building the nerves start to affect you. You become shy and self conscious of every move. I walk up to you turn you around put my arms around you as you lean into me. I brush your hair back from your neck and whisper relax and enjoy the moment bc I’m going to take my time. I slowly lift your shirt off revealing a pretty bra just for the occasion. Slightly running my fingers across your shoulders and down your back. While I kiss your neck and shoulders then going all the way down one side of your back and up the other. Exploring every aspect taking in everything I can. At which I turn you around you have your eyes closed with the anticipation as I constantly tell you how gorgeous you are. Slowly working down the front of your chest to your stomach stoping and exploring every inch from side to side but and top to bottom stopping just slightly above the pants and below the bra. Then I look up and ask with a look in my eyes for approval to undo your pants. As you look at me and eyes wide biting your lip with a soft moan I hear you say please.
Slowly I unbutton your pants and start sliding them down your body. Stopping just above the knees I am now face to face with a beautiful pair of thongs. I admire for a few seconds and take in the sight and sudden smell of your aroma. The scent is so intoxicating from how wet you are . As I continue removing your pants making you lift your legs to get them off I get a slight peek between your thighs. I make you turn around facing away from me to walk towards the bed I caress both ass checks then give each a firm swat with my hand only to hear a small screech and deep moan. I have you place both hands on the bed straight at the knees. I slowly start kissing up your leg stopping just log enough to get a sigh to escape your lips just below your ass cheeks. I make you part your legs so they are shoulder width apart. Your scent of arousal fills the air making it very difficult to contain myself in all the excitement. I gently run my fingers up your inner thigh. Get just close enough to touch the outer edge of your panties but never touching your pussy as i caress down the other leg. You stand up turn around and I have you lie back on the bed.
I tell you to close your eyes and relax as I work your body over from head to toe with my tongue. I feel you shiver as I put my tongue on your foot slowly working my way up between your legs to your inner thigh. Where uncontrollably you widen your legs to let my face get mere inches from your hot wet pussy. I breathe deep and hard letting only my breath caress your pussy as I work back down your other thigh. Taking my time to enjoy every inch of your body. You squirm as I move back closer only to tease even more by moving on to your stomach. I work my way methodically to your breast. I feel your chest rise and lower as I reach behind you to finally take your bra off. I marvel at the sight before me before I run my tongue just under each breast careful to not touch your nipples. My hand on your leg roaming up and down to your stomach. I get to your neck and nibble on your ear moving to kiss you one last time before I turn the pleasure up.
I lower myself back down to your breast finally taking in your nippple in my mouth rolling it over my tongue biting down and pulling ever so slightly to feel your chest quit moving your breathing stops while I play with your other nipple in my hand to finally hear you gasp. I work my way down your stomach pausing just enough to tickle your belly button. Getting to the final stage of me removing your thongs that are soaked. Coming back up seeing your beautiful pussy for the first time glistening from your excitement. The aroma is intoxicating the sight is mesmerizing only thing left is for me to taste. I run my tongue up one side of your labia across the the too careful to not touch the clit back down the other. I move my hand to open you up and finally after so long feel how wet you are. Running my tongue as far in your pussy as i can. Hearing you moan and gasp your breath shorten. You back arches I as pause to let the excitement quiet down. Only to resume by placing my tongue directly on your clit swirling it around. Sucking in to create pressure. Moving my tongue in such a fury that I could create a fire. Lapping my tongue so hard and so fast trying to get every drop of nectar that is so sweet and so delicious that I feel it quenches my thirst better than any drink on a hot day. As suddenly you legs begin to spasm uncontrollably your back arches your moans become inaudible as you begin to reach climax. I inset one finger deep in your wet pussy and start moving it around till I finally find the spot. Unexpectedly your legs snap shut your hand goes to my head as your orgasm hits so hard and violently it is almost unbearable. Your pussy gushes so much my face is covered and soaking wet the sheets appear to been sprayed with a water hose. As your pussy feels to be constantly spasming around my finger. The waves of pleasure and excitement rip through your body like a lighting storm before it finally subsides and the tension around my finger releases. Your legs relax and your body falls to the bed. An inaudible phrase is mumbled as you drift off in a state of bliss.
At this point I’m trying to decided if I want to continue my slow methodical plan of pleasing you or let the natural primal instincts take over and ravage your body. So as I lie there with my head on your stomach kissing you letting you come down from this euphoria. I relish the fact that I have made such a gorgeous woman reach heights of pleasure she has never felt. My thoughts start to jumble as I feel the excitement replaying the moments in my mind. The look at the bar and the decision to throw caution to the wind. The uncertainty of the look and coy grin my mind races. I feel my heart race. Trying to not do or say something stupid and just let the events unfold. Oh the excitement and the electricity of the night. Every touch making me bolder. Then the kiss. The first taste of the Greek goddess herself. So soft so sweet knowing full well if her lips tasted this good then I was definitely not letting the night end knowing how every inch of her body felt and tasted. The undoubted knowledge of her wanting to loose control tonight and me being the one chosen only fueled my desire and deep dominant almost cave man like instincts. Running the possibilities of a million things all in a matter of seconds.My heart is beating harder than I have ever felt. Every nerve ending on my body is on fire. I know I have to calm myself or it will all be over as quickly as it started. When suddenly I am brought back to the moment as your hand touches my head and you start speaking.
The ever soft spoken Haley looks at me with a primal instinct in her eyes and says fuck me. I’m taken back never have I experienced such raw emotion. My dick hardens my mind races. Do I treat her like she wants and fuck her and flip her put her in every position I can? Maybe I should slow it down and be sensual. Suddenly I feel my hair tighten and being pulled upward. I decide then I will grant her wish. I forget all about the delicate side and use raw sexually charged emotion. I stand up by the bed pull you to the edge. Look deep in your eyes and ask one last time are you sure. Without giving an opportunity to back track I decide I’m going to make you gag on my cock shoving full down her throat making sure to check your gag reflex. Knowing full well You don’t have one. But I’m determined to find one. The sensations are beyond comprehension as I fuck your face making you drool on my cock. Looking down and feeling like I have gave you more than you bargain for I grin. Thoroughly knowing full well you have been taken back by the sudden change and having it excite me even more. I feel the urge to cum. I pull out and you gasp for air. I grab your legs swing you around telling you how this is what you wanted. I know full well just how tight your pussy is so I know I have to pace myself. I tell you to hold your legs as wide and as high as you can. I stop take in the sight before me. Never did I think my dick could get any harder but it did. I’m amazed surprised and proud at the same time. I slowly put my dick in your pussy the heat the wetness almost over take me. I am surprised at how easily I slide in all the way to the bottom. As I just sit there basking in the fact I am balls deep in this gorgeous woman. Just simply enjoying the moment I know my balls are resting firmly against your ass.
With the sensation subsiding and me deciding at that moment I’m going to fuck you for hours. I start pumping my cock in your pussy as fast and as hard as I can. Making it my full attempt to break your bed and make your pussy sore for days. I pound your pussy with abandon. It feels so good and wet I have to concentrate to not cum. I find my rhythm making sure it’s fast and I make my balls slap off your ass every time. I take your legs put them on my shoulders and start playing with your clit with one hand and pinching your nipples with the other. Suddenly i lock eyes with you. Seeing the desire fill your eyes fuels me to incomprehensible highs. Every feeling smell taste and sound is enhanced. Then i decide I’m going to flip you over. I pull out back away and have you turn around bending over the bed.
Looking at this site my mind racing sweat all over our body’s the smell of sex in the air I ponder to myself very quickly should I tie her up should I sit back and make her cum over and over again or do I slow it down. Do I lick her pussy again whisper in her ear. Kiss delicately down her back and shoulders as I easily slide my cock back in her pussy slightly moving in and out and gyrating my hips in small circles as I play gently with her nipples and clit until she cums. Then I decide as you look back at me with lust filled eyes. Give her what she asked for. I walk up slapping both nice round firm perfect ass cheeks leaving a faint red hand print on both. Then shoving my dick full force making my balls slap your clit. Driving my hips hard steady and constantly into yours. Reaching down and grabbing a hand full of titties playing with your nipples. The entire time I can’t hold back how good it feels and start moaning and telling you just how good it feels how wet you are fully intent on making you squirt all over me. With this thought my mind switches gears. I decide I’m going to give you what you want but only on my terms.
I keep a close watch on your body. I notice the sweat coming down your back the moans you let escape. I feel your legs trembling from the excitement and pleasure. The never ending pulsing of your pussy around my cock. The constant stream running down your leg. That is when I take my thumb and start running circles on your asshole. At first I feel you tense then as you look back at me I see your eyes wide your devilish grin and tell me please. I am nothing but a gentleman so I start ever so slightly applying pressure. I decide I want to prolong your orgasm but want to keep you just on the edge. I stop. Tell you get your favorite vibrator. You look confused. Which is adorable and I just bask in all the glory and sheer sexiness as you walk across the room to get your toy. As you come back over I’m realizing just how lucky I am to be standing there in that moment. How much I have you eating out the palm of my hand doing every little thing your told and enjoying every second of me ravaging your body. I let you lie down on the bed on your stomach bc I am worried your legs won’t withstand what I am about to do.
I take my shirt and bind your hands together. I take yours and cover your eyes. I then decide I’m going to play a little more. I bury my face in that sweet smelling intoxicating tasting pussy. Then I lift your ass just slightly inserting your vibrator. Turning it on just enough to vibrate. Wanting to hear the moan wanting to hear the sound of pleasure ripping through your body. Only to get what I want when I run my tongue across your pretty ass hole. That’s when I know I’m going to bury my cock deep in your ass. I continue to play with your ass hole with my tongue. Every so often running your vibrator in and out of your pussy. Then I take my thumb and press firmly against your ass. As you squeal I remove the vibrator stopping all sensation not touching you not wanting you to cum again just yet. I get a little joy from seeing you squirm and hating being denied an orgasm. I put the vibrator back in and turn it on full blast. As I press my hard cock against that tight little ass knowing full well I’m going to ruin this perfect ass for anyone else. As the pressure increases you suddenly realize what is happening when the tip starts to enter. At first you clench but then you sigh and fall back to the bed. When I notice the bed is completely soaked from the amount of cum from you. Taking full advantage I push my cock deep in your ass. Going balls deep and waiting for a response. Then I get a slight mmmmm and I know at this point you are ready. I pick up the pace and start pounding that ass. Putting everything I have into pounding your ass. I lift you up on your knees with your back against my chest. My hand around your throat with slight pressure. Moaning in your ear. Trying to decide jus t where I’m going to cum and when. Knowing full well I don’t want to stop anytime soon but knowing full well now we need a shower from all the sweat an cum soaked sheets and body parts. So I pick up the pace As I decide to cum on your perfect breast. Pounding your ass as fast as I can as hard as I can pushing your face down into the pillow with your ass in the air. I feel your body tighten and hear you whimper yet again as another orgasm comes over you. I pull out flip you over pull your blind fold off and look deep in your eyes as I co we your breast in my cum. Seeing the desire and passion deep in them. I know full well at this moment the night is really just beginning as we collapse onto each other. Catching my breath I suddenly realize the seriousness of the situation. I’m laying in bed covered in cum from you and myself running my fingers over your back with you drifting in and out of sleep. When suddenly you look up at me and say let’s get a shower just don’t ask me to sing and we start laughing and moving toward the shower…. to be continued
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