Rookie desires of a sweet teenage love

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“The rookie desires of a sweet teenage love”

It was a clear sunny day, birds chirping, trees hustling. The cool breeze brought vibrations into her body.
For she was an innocent girl waiting for her boyfriend . She was nervous probably because of the new found emotions that she is going to express, experience and receive. So she waited, sat down and waited. The moment he arrived there was a twinkle in her eye, sweet blush on her cheeks, awkward expression and unexplainable, undesirable fire within. He looked at her blushed and smiled to himself.
They went inside room as planned and stared at each other awkwardly. The guy made the first move, he took her hand and gently caressed it, took her hand to his mouth and kissed it with all his emotions.
The girl dint know what to do, she was a nervous wreak inside , she wanted to do all the bold, dirty things she read and saw online but couldn’t let out any emotions. She slowly took his hand and kept on her waist indicating him he can go further in touching.
The guy being quite a gentle decent man held her as she wanted him to and they had a brief hug. The tensions increased, their heart beats could be heard and they started sweating profusely .The guy wanted to touch her bare skin and suck her inner soul out, give her pleasure ,make her moan and own her. The awkward girl wanting to own him too ,went blank not knowing what to do. She looked at him blankly. He slowly lifted her top ,touched her stomach and asked if he could kiss it. She gladly accepted and he licked every inch of her stomach and sucked her belly with his wet lips. She could feel an enormous pulse of emotion all at once. She could feel the guy’s ,moustache and beard tickling away, while he kissed her belly .He gently put his hands on her bra and asked for consent if he could touch her bare breasts. It was the first time a guy was going to touch or hold her chests. She felt all emotions at once, nervous, scared and happy. He gently touched them, removed the bra and started kissing them, sucking on the sweet soft nipples.
By now they were completely on bed, feeling each others body semi-naked, mesmerized by the amount of love, emotion, tension ,the situation was causing. He looked her smiled and kissed her pink dry lips. Kissed her cheeks and went down to her neck. She could feel the love and wetness on her neck which made her wet elsewhere. He helped her wear her cloths, gave a quick hug and promised to be back one day .
They made LOVE ,it was not sex or fu*king, it was feeling each other’ s warmth, feeling each other’s comfort, understanding their bodies, capturing their moments, synchronizing their hearts.

For such a long time they yearned for each other and today they finally felt their mind, body and soul in perfect alignment.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/dr2j97/rookie_desires_of_a_sweet_teenage_love