Hey this is my first try ever at a erotic story! Feedback would be amazing!
Small note, my native language is not English so point out any mistakes if wanted. Enjoy!
It’s 3am and I’m sitting alone at the bar. My friends just left and I stayed behind to the the last half of an international cricket match.
As I look around during the commercial I see this cute local girl sitting across the bar, our eyes meet and she quickly looks away. As I keep scanning the bar I see she keeps looking at me. Not the usual stare I’m used to. She has something in her eyes that says she wants me to do bad stuff to her, tie her up and use her in ways she never tought of. “This could be fun if she lets me”-I think to myself grabbing my drink and moving towards her.
As I approach I see her biting here lip. “Lets tease her a bit” I walk past her straight to the bathroom, just brushing her shoulder slightly. Half hoping she would follow me. After a few minutes I realise she isn’t comming and head back.
When I return I notice she is gone. Her place already taken by someone else. The bartender noticed me and signaled me to come over. He hands me a napkin with the sentence.
“Meet me at my place” followed with her adress.
Some time later I arrive at the place and knock on the door. “What was she thinking leaving without me, what is she planning. Might have to tie her up so she cant run away, again”- I jokingly muttered to myself.
She openend the door for me and I couldn’t believe my eyes. She was wearing nothing but some black satin lingerie and and a black lace chocker.
I felt my palms get sweaty and my blood flowing before she even openend her mouth. The mere sight of here left me speechless as she motioned for me to follow here inside.
As I walked behind her, her hips swaying from left to right I felt the urge building inside me. To grab her and trow her against the wall with one hand on her neck and the other in her panties. She let me up a flight of stairs down a long hallway. “don’t worry” she said while giving me a wink, “ nobody is home we can be as loud as we want.
We entered her room and the first thing I saw was the gaint bed with a metal frame, sturdy and able to take a pounding. I close the door behind me. And look at her, that moment I snapped. I could not control myself and trew her on the bed. She was shocked with the sudden display of force and just gave me the most naughty smile ever. “So you are a man afterall” she wispered in my ear. I asked her, “tell me what do you want me to do with you?” I asked her while biting her neck and pulling off her panties…
The way she looked at me while I asked her told me she wanted everything but had never asked for it before.
The shy smile, the shivers a simple stroke of my fingers caused when tracing her curves. The way she fumbelt trying to open my belt. It was like she wanted it to much..
She was new to this for sure. Still I was wondering ”did she had any expierence at all?”
Still wondering this I moved on, she was just wearing her bra where I had only removed my tshirt. She was still struggeling with my belt.
I went to lay on top of her and moved my hand from her knee down to her thight and into her loins. I could feel the heat coming from her pussy, it was like pocket radiator. My fingers stroked and circeld her outer lips without entering or touching her clit, with each stroke and each circle I could feel her heartbeat more and more until she was soaking wet and her fluids starting dripping out her pussy. Each time I wanted to enter she just said a shy “nooo” more playfull then anything else. She even pushed my arm slightly away.
In the corner of my eye I saw some ropes, nothing special, probably for some artwork or something she did. While kissing her and pushing my now rockhard cock against her, basiclly dryhumping with my pants I grabbed the ropes.
She didnt even notice me taking them, like I said, she wanted so much, she was in a diffrent part of reality. I stood up and took of my pants. Then went and set on her chest so that my cock was almost on her face.
I moved up a little more until my dick was laying on her face, her eyes crossed looking in aww to the monster on her head. “Now suck it I said” when she didn’t react I just openend her mouth with one hand and put my pulsing cock in with the other. She resisted a bit but she liked it. I was sure of it.
While she was sucking me off and I was half facefucking her I bound here arms to the head of the bed, the metal frame was the perfect strenght. She didn’t even realise it until I was done.
I moved down from her chest and she looked in my eyes and said. “ if you want to use me you should do my feet to. I’m not giving you my pussy without a struggle…. My mind raced.
She is virgin after all…
I stood up and wonderd where to go from here. I got on my knees on the bed and started licking here pussy. At this point she was basicly leaking onto the bedsheats.
My tongue licked her soft and fresh pussy, she had the most amazing taste which drove me mad. I took a finger and slowly put it into her pussy, it was tight. So tight I was starting to think she wouldn’t let go of my finger. Slowly I started making momentum while she stuggled with the new sensations.
The moment I put in two fingers is when she started to struggle. I noticed this was already pushing it without breaking her in. I decided it was time.
I got on top of her and started kissing while grabbing her neck. Slowly rubbing my shaft against her wet lips. After a few strokes she became even more wet and started to fight against the ropes. “Its no use”- I said’ “the knots are straight out a hunting book, your going nowhere and you are mine” I pushed the tip of my throbbing cock against her outer lips, and pushed slightly, just enough to push her lips aside but not yet deep enought to penetrate her.
I did this motion a few times until she was ready to blow, I could feel she was more tight then anything I ever had and the tought almost made me cum.
She asked me to put an a condom but I just smiled and said “you really think I’m going to give the sensation of your pussy to a condom? No I will take you raw and you will love it” she struggeled to get me of her but it was no use. I had her tied up tied and only her hips could move ever so slightly
In one swift motion I pushed myself inside her, it was like a hand grabed my cock firmly.
She let out a high pitched shriek while trembeling with feelings she had never felt before. She urged me to stop, but I knew this kind of situations. Stop now and she will never love sex and she will always only think about the pain. I wanted to make her a slut, addicted to cock. My cock.
I looked into her eyes and said “ Now you are mine, I put my fingers in her mounth to stop her talking and slowly retreated my cock. Then again I penetrated her, her eyes went crossed and I could feel her drolling as I started to to move my hips in a more rithmic motion..
After a few minutes I could feel her loosening up, she was becoming addicted to the feeling, she started moving her hips along with mine so each time I could go deeper and deeper into her.
She moaned and asked me to go even harder and faster. I declined. “I’m in controle” I said,” you can tie me up and use me later” Slowly penetrating her made her moan, every vein on my cock she could feel enter, every bump in her pussy my head could feel.
I loosend her straps to turn her around and she tried to jump onto me to ride me, I forced her on her belly and tied her up again. This time her legs where not at the end of the bed but connected to the side so her legs where pulled open..
I got on top of her and started eating her pussy again, this time giving some attention to her butt as well. I could feel her ass openup as my thoungue pushed in her but.
“She’s up for anal” -I thought
I used my fingers to spread her juices of her wet pussy into her ass, each time a finger more until three fitted inside and she was lubed up.
I penetraded her pussy again and pounded her slightly while my thumb was in her ass, the moment I felt the grip on my thumb loosen I knew she was ready for my cock. I exited her pussy and ever so slightly pushed the tip into her ass. She struggles to make it hard for me but in the end she knew she wanted it.
I put the tip inside and she started moaning ever so loud. Instead of the expected, that I had to push my way in she simply lifted her ass and pushed my dick in herself. It was even tighter than her pussy. And now she was riding me while I’m just hovering over her. She went up and down. I felt like being milked my her ass, the sensation was amazing. Too amazing. I had to pull out before I came in her ass.
I decided to turn her around 180dergees and to also put her back on her back. At this point she was fully submitted. No struggles nothing. Just obeying my commands and begging to be tied up again.
Now her head was faceing the side of the bed and her neck hang over it slightly, so instead of looking up she was looking slightly more horizontal.
“What are you doing?” She asked while looking up at my balls and cock hanging above her face.
“You’ll see”-I said
I pushed my hard cock against her lips so she would open her mounth and she did. But what I was going to do she didn’t excpect. She started sucking and in the proces started drooling due to the angle. When I felt her mounth was wet I grabbed her neck and pushed my cock all inside.
I could see it going through her troath. And her eyes were bulging. And I pulled out to let her talke a breath. “Take a good breath, next time I’m not comming out so fast” so obeyed and winked at me to proceed. Again I entered her mouth and pushed in while grabbing her boobs. Where last time it went in 3/4 this time it went in full. No gagging, “good girl”-I said.
I bent over and started eating her pussy while she was still sucking my cock and getting deepthroated. The feeling must have been intense for her. Her body pushed all her blood to her skin and sensitive areas due to the lack of oxigen. Within a few seconds of liking her pussy she came in a gooshing stream. Squirting all over my face
She came like a fucking vulcano. How could such a cute little girl be such a nasty monster. I had met my match for sure. Now that she got off I wanted to do the same. And I wanted to cum hard. My balls were feeling heavy and they needed to be emptied.
I asked her if I could use the bathroom real quick. In retrospect she could say no but she was tied up so what could she do. She told me she didnt have one her but her sister had one in her room.
I hurried of down the hallway and saw a room with the sign “big sis” I entered and found the toilet quite easily. While standing there and trying to pee while rock hard I noticed a strap-on hanging in her shower. Same size as my cock. This gave me an idea. I went back to the room with the dildo hiding in a towel. It was a “aftersexcleanup towel I said”
I tied her back up in the second position, belly down but this time her feet were raised up with some knots. This way I could move and toss her around but she still could not move.
I started rubbing her clit to get her good wet again. By this time each time she was wet she went mad. Rubbing her clit against my hand and slowly crawling toward my cock so she could penetrade herself.
I let her, the sight of struggeling was cute and perfect to use the strap-on. I grabed it and put it on between my legs. She kept crawling back and setteld her pussy on the fake cock. She kept inching back until she was ballsdeep. “Feels good to be in there doesn’t it”- she said teasing.
This was the moment I was waiting for, as she was riding the dildo between my legs I openend up her ass and shoved my veiny cock inside her. The way she was shaking told me she didnt expect it. She went limp with pleasure and gave her all to me.
I started penetrating her tight asshole as fast as I could. God It felt amazing. Her cute ass bouncing on my penis was the best part. After a few minutes I came for about 20seconds. For a man a mindboggeling period.
I got of her, left the strap-on inside her and rubed the cum dripping out of her ass over her lower back.
I stood straight, turned around and went to her sofa for a smoke. “You just keep like that my slut, the night is young and my cock is thirsty”
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/dlnvnq/the_girl_at_the_bar_bdsmvirgin