Posting this again as it got removed…. I have changed the offending word but I think it’s a bit less hot now haha …
I hope that my My Fiancé sees it and makes it come true… as soon as we find You…
My Fiancé undresses me and gets me ready for You, He ties my hands behind my back, blindfolds me and instructs me to kneel at the end of the bed on the hotel room floor. I hear a quiet click as the door opens and My Fiancé welcomes You in. “Well don’t you look pretty” I hear You say as You approach me, I can’t see You but I can sense your presence close to my face. You present me with your cock which I take cautiously into my mouth, I worship your cock as best I can, putting on a show for My Fiancé as He watches. You take my head in your hands and begin to fuck my face, gently at first and then more aggressively as I open my throat to accommodate You.
I’m not sure by who, but I am dragged to the bed and my blindfold is removed, I see You for the first time, You look at me with a mix of contempt and satisfaction as you pull my legs apart roughly and insert yourself. My Fiancé smiles at me. My Fiancé is proud of me. My Fiancé kisses me, deeply, passionately and begins playing with my clit. My Fiancé is gentle. You are not. You fuck me aggressively but My Fiancé’s expert fingers know how to make me cum. Lost in his kisses I finish hard on his hand and your cock.
“Are you ready for Me?” this is the question I’ve been waiting for, My Fiancé offers his cock to me and I take him lovingly in my mouth. Before I can relax into loving his cock with my mouth I am flipped over and pulled unceremoniously into a spitroast position. This is new. I’ve not done this before. I struggle to concentrate, I try to find a rhythm to keep pleasing my My Fiancé but it’s too difficult so I melt into the control of both men using me from either end.
You fuck me hard into my My Fiancé’s cock, I gag, You either don’t notice or don’t care. You are primal and I am your prey. You are finally finished using my hole but instead of pulling out and moving away, I feel a hot, hard slap, not on my arse or thighs but directly on my pussy. My Fiancé releases me. You hit me again and I lunge forward and away from your hand. You pull me back, “Not so fast”. You hit me a third time and I cry out, “you can take it”, My Fiancé’s voice, it calms me.
I feel both bodies moving around me but my head is spinning and my pussy is aching so I’m not sure what is happening until I feel the heat of his body pressing against me from behind. My Fiancé’s turn. My Fiancé fucks me hard and rough, throbbing from my mouth and from watching me take You. By the time He is finished I barely have the energy to collapse on the bed but I know staying stuck in this position on all fours is dangerous.
I let my weight pull me down and feel My Fiancé pull me close to his chest. He holds me. You stroke my hair and tease my hard nipples. He tells me how good I am, how much I took and how well behaved I was but the words are a blur, the room is a blur, I feel nothing but lightness and a vague sense that I am the only one not getting dressed. I could just so easily fall asleep right here, right now.
And then my jeans thud onto my chest. “You’re not done yet baby girl” I crane my neck and see My Fiancé playing with the smoke I rolled us earlier. “Get dressed”, You. The lust in your voice replaces the love of My Fiancé’s. My heart races. Somehow I manage to get the clothes onto my body and walk sheepishly out of the hotel with a man on either side to keep me steady. When we return to our room my legs are wobbly but I am much more relaxed, much more compliant. You instruct me to kneel on the bed whilst My Fiancé rummages in our bag, “don’t look at him, look at me”, I stare up at you obediently, keeping my focus to not let my eyes wander over to My Fiancé as I can hear Him pulling out my collar and chain. He comes over and smiles at me, “Good girl”. My Fiancé collars and leashes me and tells me to lay on my back, I obey.
You climb on top of me, a leg either side of my head, obscuring my view of the man I love so much but it doesn’t matter, I can feel my tail, I can feel him stroking my thighs with the soft fur and I know what is coming. At the same time, You force yourself into my mouth as My Fiancé plugs my butthole. I try to scream out but your cock muffles my cries. With my head pushed back into the pillow I cannot pull away from You. My eyes widen as the realisation hits but before the panic can set in I feel My Fiancé’s lips gently caressing my pussy.
You violently fuck my face but He worships me. The juxtaposition builds towards a climax and just as My Fiancé’s tongue pushes me towards the edge He pulls on my tail sending me into a state of ecstasy. I am writhing, I am exhausted, but neither of You are finished with me yet.
Again I find myself on all fours, this time with You at my mouth. My Fiancé enjoys me but You are impatient. My Fiancé takes his time, He fucks me deep, He knows exactly what to do to make me cum again and again on his cock. Keeping You in my mouth is difficult enough, satisfying You seems to be impossible, I can tell You are waiting.
My Fiancé fills me up, pulls out and hands you the leash. I’m not sure how much more of this I can take. You are more aggressive with the lead than My Fiancé, pulling the chain much harder. My Fiancé moves away, I feel his presence dissipating. I am not alone with You but it feels like I am. You flit between choking me with the lead and collar and pushing my face hard against the pillow. You knee my legs apart so You can fuck me deeper, harder. My Fiancé wanted to make my cum but You don’t care whether I do or not. You waited long enough to take out all of your pent up aggression on me.
“Look at your Fiancé while I fuck you” I do. “Tell him you love him” I do. My Fiancé watches, smiling, quietly stroking himself but never touching me. You whip me, hit me, hurt me, degrade me with your words but I can take it. I long for My Fiancé’s embrace and I know it will come soon…
The end.
But where are You?
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/12cfq7g/i_hope_my_fiancé_sees_this_waiting_for_you_f28